This fic is on permanent hiatus. Sorry everyone, but it has way too many flaws and way too much...
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Right. Deleted that. I'm pretty sure that wasn't supposed to be in the damned fic in the first place, likely something I forgot to change from an earlier draft.Taylor is somewhat out of character in how she regards the heroes. At the start of canon, she's a victim of the PRT's PR machine; she worships heroes, even if she has absolutely no intention of joining the Wards. 'The heroes focus too much on PR!' isn't an issue for her until much later. It's also strange how Taylor seems to think it's the Protectorate's job to clean up the Boat Graveyard, could do it easily, and that the villains prevent this. What?
Yeah, since people seem to really hate this, I've changed those damned 5 words. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Enjoy the teacher who's name even I have already forgotten.
Changed it from being a rumor that he won, to there being a rumor that he survived Kyushu after fighting Leviathan.
The Merchants holding territory at this point in time (they don't)
There's some other extremely minor details (rig forcefield isn't blue), but they add up.
Conflict drives fiction. Personal conflict. Violent conflict. Conflict arising from misunderstandings or a failure to communicate at all (which was one of Taylor's and her father's main failings in canon).
Nice work!January 23rd 2011
Friday/Saturday
Eventually, Dad came home and saw us sleeping together on the couch. Since it was already pretty late in the night, and Lisa's apartment is on the other side of the city… we all decided it was best she just slept here, in the guest room. We were much too tired to actually cook something, so we left that to Dad. A bit of a late dinner, but after the training we had beforehand, it was just right.
After Lisa closed her bedroom door, I led Dad downstairs into the living room. I think he caught on pretty quick as to what I wanted to tell him.
"You want to go out, don't you?" he didn't sound angry or anything. Instead, it sounded like resignation.
"Yeeees?" I asked him cautiously.
"And you're wondering if I'll let you go…"
"Yeah." I had a feeling he would. It's not like he event meant the whole grounded thing, and that was over last week anyway.
"It's not like I can stop you, Taylor." the sad look on his face certainly made it seem like he would love to be able to. I guess he must be worried… "When are you going to be leaving? I'm assuming you haven't told Lisa anything yet?"
"No, I haven't really, I just don't know how to tell her. Or even if I should. What if she thought differently of me?"
He chuckled a bit. "Lisa really doesn't seem like the type, and if she did, it would be her loss little owl. I think you're just trying to avoid it."
I… am a bit scared of telling her.
"You're probably right…"
"I know I am. So, if you haven't told Lisa, it might be better if you leave when she's actually sleeping."
"Mhm. I think I'm going to get some sleep before I leave anyway. Don't want to drop dead while electrocuting some thugs."
He gave me a stern look. "Don't electrocute them dead, either. And no fighting capes this time, even if it wasn't your fault. You know the rules, and I expect you to follow them."
I grimaced at the memories of Mush punching me across the alley. "No need to worry about that. I'm not in any rush for a repeat of that, at least."
"Good. Come on, you'd better get some sleep. I'll wake you up in about an hour or so."
He paused for a moment and then grinned widely. "Lisa was already almost dead at the table. She's probably sleeping like a rock already."
I thought about Lisa… and today.
"Something's bothering you. I can tell."
"Yeah… something happened today and I.. I want to tell you what happened, just not..."
"Not now?"
I sighed. "No…shit, I don't know. I should probably talk about it anyway. Good to get it off my chest, I guess. It hit Lisa really hard, too."
His voice became low and almost nursing, in a way. "What happened, Taylor? It's good to talk about these things. Never let them bottle up."
A sad smile began on my lips. He cares so much… "We were walking back from training and… a man jumped off a building. I-I tried to save him. I tried. I tried every stupid thing I could think of. I was just too fucking late! He threw himself off before I could even try and talk him out of it. Not even these bullshit powers that don't make any fucking sense could save him."
He softly grabbed me in a hug.
"Shhh… it's okay Taylor. You did what you could."
This time, at least, I didn't cry. Maybe a tear or two. Honest.
"What… what about Lisa, Taylor? You said it hit her hard?"
"Yeah," I wiped the tear from my cheek "her brother killed himself too. It's part of the reason she ran away from home in the first place. Even I could see it hit her bad. She tries to hard her real feeling so hard…"
"That she does. Poor girl."
"So yeah. Now you know. And I do feel a bit better about it."
He cupped my chin in his large hands and pushed my head slightly up, so I was looking him in the eye.
"You tried to do the right thing. And that's what really counts, in the end. Go and get some sleep little owl."
Thankfully, I managed to fall asleep fairly quickly as well, even with my excitement of a second night out growing. Now, hopefully this time it'll go a bit better, too.
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Hiding behind a wooden crate, I watched the Nazis guarding the warehouse. The warehouse itself likely isn't big, in the sense of operations. Not really deep into Empire territory, here. It's a pretty small brick building three stories high, broken windows everywhere, surrounded by a small fence that can barely be called a fence. The only reason I even spotted the 'warehouse' was the van they're loading weapons into. And from the looks of it, high grade stuff, too!
Fifteen minutes of observation confirmed about five of them being here. Two in the front, "guarding" the entrance, the driver sitting in the van, and the two people loading into it.
Now, I'm all for taking a bite out of crime… but there's just one, fairly big problem. They all have guns and I'm preeeetty sure I'm not fucking bullet proof.
Now, I doubt they would even see me for a reasonable amount of time, even if I straight up walked to them. It's very dark and only the faint streetlights illuminate the streets. The two guards in front aren't even paying attention from what I can tell.
If someone aims a gun at me, I can always exchange us, though I can only do it… at most two times before I'll get too tired.
Damn it all, why didn't I just get a stupid Brute power!
In the end, I decided my game plan is to sneak through the left side of the broken fence, quickly electrocute the guards in front, as they have guns on them, not in crates unlike the other two, and then take out the guys who are currently loading the van with weapons, after they come investigating.
And if that doesn't work, either run like hell or fill the entire street with lightning.
Crouching, I moved towards the opening, as silently as I possibly could, staying out of the light coming from the streetlights.
One of the men near the van, what looked to be a twenty something skinhead with tattoos all over, shouted something, and my heart almost skipped a beat as I thought I'd been found already, but he was just berating his colleague for almost dropping a box.
Dammit, Taylor! Stop being so jumpy and nervous, I'm a Hero, this is what Heroes do.
I continued sneaking towards the fence. Thankfully, the opening was pretty big and I got through easily.
A heavyset man was leaning on the main doors into the warehouse, puffing on a cigarette that illuminating his face, his eyes closed.
His partner, a slightly smaller man who I still wouldn't be even comfortable thinking about fighting hand to hand, was standing near the gate entrance to the compound, looking forwards with his rifle at his side.
I took a deep breath, stood straight up and channeled power to my hands, forming two big balls of lightning. Everything lit up in blue light and the air started crackling from the small discharges of lightning coming from the orbs.
It didn't even take a second before bolts, straight out of my hands, were crashing into the both of them.
They both collapsed head first in another half second, twitching slightly on the ground. Didn't even have a chance to yell.
Not that it mattered. My power is fairly fucking obvious to someone not deaf and blind.
I could hear something dropping over where they were loading into the van. Probably the boxes. Two men started shouting something, but I couldn't make out what. I could guess though. They know I'm here.
Taking a moment to recollect myself slightly, I ran up to the edge of the warehouse and saw as the van started up. The tattooed man and one other both had guns now, and they weren't joking around either.
Before I could doubt myself, I gathered up my power again, stepped out of the corner and started running up to them. I switched places with the other guy, since he seemed way less alert than Mr. Tattoo.
A fraction of a second of disorientation later, I was standing next to him, my hand already up and a bolt flying for him.
Before he could even start dropping, I was raising a second hand to where I was standing before, not even bothering to aim.
Two loud sounds, but not as loud as normal thunder, later, I was the only one left standing.
Fuck…
That was easier than I thought it would be.
I almost started relaxing, when I remembered the van. The van that was now attempting to drive away.
Not attempting, is driving away. I wanted to punch myself in the face for forgetting the van. Instead, I put about two times more power into the lightning and fired it into the van.
Only for it to do nothing, only arc around it.
Shit! Of course it does nothing! It's a fucking faraday cage.
I really want to hit something right now! Fucking stupid idiot! If only I was faster. Now the entire Empire Eighty-Eight will know I was here, and all my powers too!
I took a deep breath and collected myself.
Right. Should I call the police? Or is it the PRT, if I'm a cape? The goons are unconscious, but that doesn't mean they can't wake up. I decided to drag the ones near me to the first two.
That… wasn't as easy as it sounds. They were actually pretty heavy and I did get a tired, even before I decided to zap the van.
Finally finished, I fetched my phone and called the police.
"Hello 911, what's your emergency?" A young female voice said.
"Um, I have four Empire gang members here, unconscious."
The responder paused for a second. "Miss, are you a parahuman?"
"Uh. Yes."
"Can you tell us where you are?"
I gave her the street name and number, and ten minutes later a police van, its blue and red lights lighting up the building, arrived. It was one of those used specifically to capture criminals.
Standing in front of the unconscious bodies, I watched as the doors swung open and policemen filtered out.
They were all wearing full body vests, pistols in hand and ready to shoot.
Finally, the last man, with a different body suit, stepped out and started ordering people around. Four people in pairs of two immediately went around the sides of the warehouse, obviously searching for any remaining threats.
Another two followed close behind the serious looking man, who I assume is the officer in command.
The officer gestured with his head and we moved to the side, whilst the two who were behind him started cuffing the Empire goons.
He looked old, at the very least in his late thirties, early forties, with a big brown beard and a bald head.
"Sergeant William Carter, representative of the Parahuman Response Teams."
"So," he began. "You must be a new cape in town. Took down four gang members, all armed too." He didn't make it sound like a question. There might have been a little hint of respect in there.
I tried to make my voice sound a bit deeper than normal. "Uh, yes sir. I saw them loading weapons into a van and I had to do something."
The sergeant crossed his arms and scoffed. "Yeah, heard that too many times. Tell me kid, did you even think about what would happen if you got hit by a bullet from one of those guns?" He didn't give me a chance to say yes.
"Guns are still dangerous, even to capes, perhaps especially to capes. I'm not saying you did something wrong by attacking these scum, but you should be careful." I gave him a slight nod.
"Now… you said something about loading weapons into a van?"
"Yeah, there were two guarding the warehouse entrance, two loading into the van, and a person driving it. Turns out electricity doesn't do much to a van, so one of them got away with about half the weapons." My voice turned bitter towards the end. Still peeved me that they got away.
He placed one of his giant hands on my shoulder. "Don't worry about it, kid. You did better than most. As per regulations, I am required to ask you to consider joining the Wards."
"I've thought about it, but no, not right now."
Carter didn't look like he approved. "Alright, you're free to go do whatever you capes do. We'll clean up here." He used his hand to push me slightly towards the exit.
I quickly walked back to the place I changed into my costume. Had a bus to catch, after all.
AN; My god, I actually manged to write this.