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I was reborn. Given a second chance. With this body, I will forge my own path as I find new meaning for myself. I just have to hope it'll still be me by the end.

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This is a zerg si, so yeah, there will be some big power creep. However I'm going to try and focus on his choices, and how being able to change so much of himself means he has more control than ever in how we will define his own existence, and what meaning he can find for himself. Or at least, that's what I hope to do, I'm not sure how effective it'll be.
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Chapter 1 - One in a Million

AzureShogun

Tanks are better than Mechs
Location
United Kingdom
Life as a CERN employee isn't quite as glamorous as most people seem to imagine. No time-travel, nor groundbreaking discoveries every week, or even a big light show when a collision takes place in the large Hadron collider down under. In fact, you can't even tell a collision's taking place unless you're in the monitor station.

Which was a bigger problem than I'd thought it would be as I heard the dull whoosh of air being pumped out of the collision tunnel. The collision tunnel I was supposed to be doing maintenance on. The maintenance I was meant to have finished an hour ago, in only I hadn't been late in the door and been delayed on all my work today, meaning I only entered the tunnel hatch 10 minutes ago. The tunnel hatch which had just slammed shut and locked, as the automated collision procedure for the day, was started.

But hey, surely the person the monitor room would be checking the thermal cameras, right? And surely they would notice the fuck-off massive heat signature INSIDE the tunnel and delay acceleration for once I got out? Right?

Even as I slowly began to suffocate in the near-vacuum, and felt my skin burn as the blood at the surface began to boil, I kept on rationalising. There were procedures in place for this you know? 100 safety checks in place to make sure something exactly like this simply COULD NOT HAPPEN.

The fear began to take me then, a cascade failure in my rationalisation, the realisation that I was going to die. My body felt like it had been plunged into liquid nitrogen as terror suffused my very being. My mouth opened, hopelessly gaping in horror.

"Ahhh." I couldn't even shout or cry anymore, one pitiful rasp of air escaping my mouth as darkness began to descend and I collapsed. Frustration and fury at the situation I was in, due to my own negligence no less, caught up to me and boiled up as I felt tears try to leave my eyes while my head came to rest directly before all the sensory equipment. At least they might get a nice shot of my face if nothing else. Hysteria took hold as my last sight was of a purple blot growing to blind me before blissful nothingness took me.

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My world was pain.

Hot nails were driven through my bones, acid blood was spreading through my body, and someone had planted a bomb in my head, with the shockwaves bouncing back and forth. Back and forth. Back and forth. Spreading whatever mush was left of my brain evenly around the inside of my skull.

I couldn't even let out a cry of pain as my jaw clenched and the torturous experience seemed to propagate through me, and wherever I could feel pain was saturated in the sensation.

Eventually, however, the pain began to recede, and the wake of its passing I felt a plethora of other perceptions that had been clouded earlier. Hot and cold, pressure and suction, disorientation. It felt as though all my senses were being played around with as I twisted and writhed, unable to even retreat to the pain as it left me altogether, frustrated at this alien experience.

All I could do was impotently look over my recent memories as I tried to discover what situation had left me so incapacitated.

Thinking back, I could remember getting up late, my alarm hadn't gone off, before heading to work nearly 30 minutes late. Bad traffic made me an hour late though, yeah I remember that. And then... I'd gone in and all my duties also ended up being late... and then... lunch, in the cafeteria. I'd been about to finish off my usual prey when It fell from the emerald sky- I mean canopy. And, and, and, and. I saw my own head looking at me.

It looked delicious.

I forgot about the prey I had been stalking for the last few hours, but what about my duties? Anyway, I scooped up the tasty morsel in one gulp and felt that exquisite feeling of a new taste, an Essence which I'd never even felt anything like! Art, beauty, elegance, and surprisingly durable, despite all the junk. However, it also felt kind of dull, like one of those old-timey movies which have a great plot but just didn't have the special effects to make it as spectacular as, as, as that one big fish I'd found a few weeks ago, the one with all the tentacles coming out of its back. Yum.

And then I'd looked closer at the Essence of myself. The tasty, tasty Essence of that little bite was chock full of new stuff. The blood alone was enough to let me know I'd have to try some of this stuff. It was just so... delicate. I could tell, like a finely tuned car. So, like always when I found a new organ with great potential, I stocked up on food for a couple of days, collapsed my little hidey-hole and decided to go all out and make one for myself, exactly to specifications, and I would just attach it to the back of my old one!

And that was how I was resurrected by an alien monster into that very same alien monster after it ate me. Did that make me a retroactive auto-cannibal now? I can't imagine any other way of doing that other than time-travel and parallel dimensions, so I guess that made me pretty special.

By the time I finished congratulating myself on my newfound uniqueness and had thoroughly suppressed any emotional turmoil to do with my new lease on life I noticed that all those strange sensations had finished. It seems my old/new brain had finally taken full control of the body and the rest of the nervous system had been morphed to comply with the new operating system, so to speak. It's not even like I 'took control' really, I can still feel the old lizard brain connected, and it's still active. It's just that... well when putting a full adult human mind, one who had trained his whole life in scientific rigour and made it out the other end of that boiling pot with a degree and job, in the same brain as some half-sentient lizard monster. Well. There's not much lizard left and lots of human. A 95 to 5 split I'd say. Maybe.

Slowly getting up, I focused more on the body I'd found myself in and looked it over with a critical eye as I absent-mindedly scarfed down the extra food I had taken with me.

Six legs, that was the first thing that leapt out to me. I had six, regular lizard legs, each attached to four toes. Three forward, and one back, with attached talons. Wickedly sharp, curved talons too. Seems well suited to a jungle environment where I would need to crawl on lots of wood, or at least wood analogues.

All six legs were attached to a relatively thin torso, just long enough for three pairs of legs, and a spot at the back for my tail, while my neck extended forward. My tail appeared to be almost as long as the rest of my body and ended in a... in a normal point. I suppose tails really are more for balance, in my case, what with the trees and all. Anyway, getting over my slight disappointment at not seeing some epic blade on the end of my tail I felt inside my body as I focused on my head.

Two thick jaws jutted forth brutally, extending from my face in a long muzzle, filled with long, sharp teeth, more for catching and tearing than anything else. Definitely not an omnivore then, I can't imagine it would be easy to eat anything not made of flesh with these teeth, nothing to grind or crunch with. Large bones might be a problem. Which brings to mind my own skull, which fit rather snugly in my mouth from my memories. The thin bone offered no resistance to my muscular tongue, which had effortlessly cracked my skull all around, before allowing my brain to be swallowed whole, and thankfully un-mushed. Wow, I came extremely close to not being resurrected at all, thank god I was so careful while eating myself.

As for my eyes, it seemed I had a total of four! Thank god my middle school bullies will never find out about this, they'd never let me live it down. Two of them were large, set further back and almost seemed to bulge from my skull. Like those old deer eyes from Earth, they seemed to be formed specifically for a wide field of view, and were a bit terrible for focus and colour, but could actually see quite far in the infrared spectrum, which was a very welcome addition. My other two eyes had a very narrow field of view, however, and were amazing. A huge range of colours, even more than I'd seen as a human seemed to array themselves before me, extending far into infra-red too. As for how I could tell? I was still underground and couldn't exactly see the rest, but still. Who knew thermal imaging dirt could be so beautiful! These eyes seemed much more predatory and set for battle however, as they were recessed quite deep into two forward-facing pits. I'd imagine it would be very hard to damage these babies unless another animal managed to angle some kind of long and thin claw just right.

Finally, wrapping up this deluxe body of mine was a rough scaly exterior of interlocking scales, which would have been much more reassuring if it weren't for the scars I could see, extending all the way through and into what must have been more recently regenerated muscles.

That put a damper on my mood as I stopped admiring my new body and remembered the reality of my situation. I'd died.

I had definitely died back in the collider tunnel, possibly even before my head had apparently been transported here somehow, though that may have had something to do with that... purple? The thing I had seen as I fell unconscious. That must have been when my head was transported here, I remember it looked quite fresh when I found it, so it's not like they held onto it back at the lab.

I had died and then been resurrected here in an alien body, on an alien world. A Deathworld to be honest, I'd read a lot of sci-fi and even played some games. If this were in Warhammer 40k then this planet would absolutely qualify for Deathworld status. Wait. Thinking back, I tried to remember if my lizard self had ever seen overly muscled humans calling themselves Catachans and felt relief that I probably wasn't in some warp-damned universe and that there were no humans around, that would have been too freaky after all.

My minor panic over, I focused more on the memories of massive predators hiding in the leaves above, and in the brush below. Huge beasts which rampaged through the dense foliage, felling tree-things left and right as they shook my world with their mere passing. Great avians which shrieked of victory and death in the sky, occasionally catching beasts larger than me, before carrying them away to certain death above. The hidden predators which would lie in wait, with the patience of ancients, and would only reveal themselves when their gargantuan bodies would surge forth and snatch my prey from my view, while I would simply freeze in the desperate hope that I wouldn't be the next snack.

Yeah, this world would not be easy to survive in. But I didn't want to just survive. I hadn't just SURVIVED when I was a human, I'd pushed for excellence, and even further, continuing on the work at one of the foremost scientific facilities in the world.

I would thrive in this strange new world. I would conquer it. After all, these beasts may have been terrifying in their own right, but what experience did they have dealing with my own homeworld's apex predator, which had conquered not just their own habitats, but all habitats. A species which had delved further into the secrets of the universe than any other, which had even ventured into space, had created weapons of mass destruction which could have ended the lives of all these great predators in an instant if they so desired.

I wasn't just some dumb alien lizard.
I was more.
I was human.
 
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I like it! Is the SI a primal zerg? Or perhaps something else?
 
Interesting. Self-insertion through conveniently present and plausible plot device is certainly refreshing. Self-insertion through ROB method or death by severe injury is overplayed. Though the first question that came to me was "Do you really work at CERN or was it just a conveniently plausible device that you picked?"
 
Chapter 2 - Rumble in the Jungle
No matter how excellent my new body was, I couldn't just waste all my time down here admiring it. It was about time I made some objectives for myself so that I could work out what to do with my new lease on life.

First of all, I needed to become stronger. Or more powerful, dangerous, whatever. I did not want to become someone else's meal again. Who knew if the next customer of my body would be so gracious as to gently eat my brain and rebirth me? So I needed to find a way to put myself firmly at the top of the local food chain, or otherwise take myself off of the menu.

Secondly, I didn't want to be alone as the only intelligent person in my second life. I would need to search the surroundings, and hopefully see if I could find a hint of civilisation. I may have looked like a six-legged, van-sized, alien lizard of death right now, but I'd already seen how easily this body could change shape when it reconstructed my brain, not to mention the unnatural level of regeneration needed to prevent scarring in any of the muscles in such a combat filled environment. That said, this planet, like all planets, is probably pretty huge compared to little old me, so I obviously can't explore the whole thing or I'll just end up wasting my life here. I'll need to think about this more.

And thirdly, I needed to explore some of the... stranger... feelings I'd been having now. It had been pretty easy to ignore earlier, what with the pain and disorientation, but now that my neurology was relatively well adjusted I had noticed something weird. I felt something, almost like a hum, in the back of my mind and sometimes I could see a violet hue at the edges of my vision. Did this have anything to do with that purple stuff I saw before being transported here? I would need to investigate once I had some food, despite my background in the sciences, or perhaps because of it, I'd always been a bit of a nerd, and the idea of something, maybe, sorta like magic was too intriguing to ignore. I just hoped it didn't come with warp daemons attached.

GRRRR

My new belly rumbled like a lawnmower failing to start. I'd gotten seriously hungry now that my food had run out and I'd spent so long... meditating on my Essence. Yeah, that feels like the right way to say it.

Anyway, I need to get out there and get hunting, hopefully my instincts and previous lizard memories will help, since I've never really done anything like this before.

I slowed my breathing and experimentally tensed all my muscles slowly as I began to drag my front claws through the dirt above me and started to climb.

A few minutes later, and wow this hole was deep, I emerged to a vista full of life. Thick roots of some kind of tree surrounded me on each side, as their heavy trunks reached for the sky, high above, terminating in numerous branches and a nearly impenetrable layer of canopy which left only a few spots of sunlight through, lighting up the jungle floor with dim light which my new eyes were apparently adjusted to already as I observed the undergrowth around me.

Quickly turning my short neck around, I made a quick scan of the rest of my body and noticed the mottled greens and browns which comprised my scales, the splotchy colour was reminiscent of the Khaki fatigues I remember seeing in war movies from Earth, though perhaps not as randomly spaced or expertly coloured. My own patterns appeared as a semi-regular tesselation, spots of dark green and brown spaced all over me. Not quite ideal, but I suppose it would be strange if this new body of mine were already perfect. And after feeling the strength of my limbs, the thickness of my scales, and the ridiculous ability to modify my own biology it was nice to see at least one area in which humans were definitively superior. I would be quite easy to get convinced of my own superiority in such a physically overpowering body, especially compared to my admittedly... weedy... human stature. What can I say, being strong is nice.

A distant screech split the air and I nearly froze before my instincts took over and I stopped laying around in the open and dived into a cluster of bushes next to the closes tree-trunk I could see, straining my eyes and ears to see if anything else was nearby. It was only then that I noticed how despite the general ambience of clicks and rustling I couldn't actually detect anything. I suppose that made sense, after all, no matter what instincts I might or might not be able to tap into, I was still new to this body and this situation as a whole. Still, I could NOT afford to let myself be caught out monologing. I don't work a desk job anymore, or more recently, maintenance. Crushing depression can be held back by ACTION now, and not self-hypnosis via procrastination. I suppress a laugh, unsure how loud it might be, or indeed what it would even sound like in this new body.

Feeling a rumble in my belly once again, but managing to suppress it consciously now that I'd felt it coming, I focused once again on finding a meal. Changing my own biology must have been extremely energy-intensive after all, such abilities wouldn't come cheap. And how the hell did that work anyway? I've been taking that little titbit entirely too easily. Must be some lingering instincts I suppose, ahh I can think about it later.

With one last scan of the surrounding forests I felt for my instincts, and sensing no danger (that's how it works right?) I quickly gripped the tree trunk, my sharp claws easily plunging into the thick bark of these trees, and they were huge now that I thought about it, before I began to scramble up as fast as I could.

With six limbs, and being able to easily grip the surface of the tree, this was much easier than I thought it would be, and I quickly reached the first of the large limbs of this wooden behemoth, my thoughts were that with a higher point of view I might be able to more easily observe the surrounding area and hopefully find a meal.

Slinking across the branches, and being careful not to ruffle the leaves too much I spent an hour simply stalking the forest floor from above as I made my way across the interlocking tree limbs, and though I noticed occasional areas were the trees appeared to have been knocked down in a solid line, new growth was already reaching up. Whether such damage had only occurred in the far past, or the plants here grew freakishly fast was anyone's bet. Though considering my own newfound propensity for biological manipulation my one would be on the latter. However, my attention was quickly grasped by what sounded faintly like... crunching, and the brushing of leaves. It was coming from my right!

I hastily traversed the great, interlocking branches in the sky as I trusted my hearing and followed it doggedly, zeroing in on the regular sounds, a sure sign of prey feeding. Though my instincts seemed to find it odd for prey to behave so blatantly, I'd heard it from over a hundred metres away after all.

There! I'd seen a shape slowly moving through the undergrowth, leaving a trail of broken branches and fallen leaves, though the creature seemed to be moving slowly and it was eating almost constantly. It was hard to tell the size from here, what with most of it being obscured by foliage, but I felt confident that it was a herbivore of some kind, and I could almost feel a nod from my instincts agreeing with me.

I waited for it to come closer to the edge of the clearing. New growth already tall enough to obfuscate its appearance, but not quite tall enough to connect to the canopy above. Anticipation burned in my mind as my muscles coiled and I prepared to leap down onto it. I could almost feel... no, I assuredly felt my lizard brain begin to get more active. Time seemed to slow down as the sniffling and ponderous creature in the undergrowth approached my ambush, and suddenly I felt it.

An overwhelming urge that NOW WAS THE TIME TO JUMP. I wasn't even thing anymore as the lizard brain cried out in exaltation and I leapt down, my front four talons outstretched and ready to rip and tear, while my jaw opened wide, my teeth prepared to latch onto the unfortunate creature below.

I fell nearly silently and the moment seemed to stretch out before with a mighty crash my talons... glanced off of a thick armoured shell, and my teeth jarred painfully, failing to even find purchase on the hard, bumpy surface.

Panicking at the failed ambush and fearing retaliation now that I had revealed myself I jumped to the side, acrobatically flipping myself so that I would land on my feet and righted myself quickly, finally getting a good view of my prey now that we were both beneath the thick layer of leaves.

It was big. Much bigger than I'd thought it would be, and the shell seemed to curve around it, almost like a dome. The skirt hovered low to the ground, concealing whatever means of locomotion this biological tank possessed. I felt like a dwarf near it. I KNEW I was large now, considering how big my human head had appeared, I estimated my size to be roughly as long as a van, and yet this thing was even larger still.

As it ponderously turned around the face me I caught a glimpse of its face, a nightmarish visage which sent a flush of fear through my human brain, even as the lizard seemed to almost scoff in derision.

Innumerable bulbous eyes seemed to have congregated on top of its head, pointing in almost every direction, while a swathe of antenna extended outwards in an arc from its insectoid head. The neck seemed to be recessed into the shell, though I could barely even see it, I observed its jaws, at first seeming small, but expanding quickly as innumerable pseudo mouths seemed to expand from it, letting go of half-chewed remains of the tough plants surrounding us. I nearly sighed in relief at this obvious sign of being a herbivore, before with a screech it charged directly at me, moving absurdly fast for something so large.

Scrambling in the dirt I quickly dodged to the side as the lorry sized tank rushed past and hit a nearby tree with a deafening crack. The thick wooden tower clashing directly with the heavy shell, and the shell won. With a deafening groan, the titanic tree began to fall further into the forest, thick roots ripping up dirt as they failed to find purchase in the soft earth, a crash resounded as the tree fell, the aforementioned clearing I had seen a little bit larger now.

However, as if that wasn't bad enough, with the crash of the tree came a swell in the chitters and clicks as other creatures of various sizes fell to the ground along with the canopy they had been residing in, surrounded by so many potential prey and predator I froze. Neither my memories as the cautious lizard, or the more outgoing human preparing me for this response, and so it was that I only dodged the hard shell of the behemoth at the last second, being clipped in the side as I was tossed across the jungle floor.

Pain lanced through my side as I looked down to see that one of my middle legs had been nearly torn off at the impact, my claws twitching feebly as I used my remaining five legs to quickly make some distance between me and the irate pillbug. Roars of pain and squawks of fear rang out as the rest of the creatures on the forest floor joined into melee or tried to flee the madness. With wide eyes, I looked around desperately.

With only a moment to think, I quickly hid within a cluster of bushes and observed the fighting, as a group of similar-looking lizards, almost like me, descended on the pill big, scrabbling at the shell and biting at its face.

My leg throbbed in pain as I watched the fracas. My situation had become worse, no easy meal, and now a nearly debilitating injury, save for my redundant legs. And yet, wasn't this also an opportunity?

I could already see numerous creatures which had been killed and left behind, the fighting too fierce to even try and start eating, while others were slain while incapacitated, trying to drag away their prey. So much essence just lying around. I wasn't like these mindless creatures though, I wouldn't charge in and get killed for a meal. With patience, I decided that I should wait. It might be dangerous so close to the fighting, I glanced to the pillbug as it crushed a tree-lizard, while still beset by four others, but surely once this was over I would be able to reap the rewards for other's hard work.

It wasn't honourable, or moral, but it was clever, and that's what I needed to rely on. But, once I got my meal, what was to stop me from being eaten like all those other creatures.

I needed to start digging a hole, like that which I'd woken up in earlier. With a deep enough, and large enough hole, I could conceivably drag a LOT of these bodies down there with me, and I'd have plenty of time to eat them and maybe even alter myself. Though I'd need to be careful with any changes to the brain. It sure would suck to be given another chance, only to lobotomise myself by accident now.

Looking around for a moment, I realised my own spot in the bushes presented as good a spot as any to hide my hole, and so I promptly began digging. Using my instincts to help me along, I found myself slathering the sides of my hole in thick saliva to keep it clumped together.

Ignoring the screams and roars above as more and more of the local populace was killed I dug, and dug, and dug some more until finally I began excavating a wider cavern. By now I must have been at least 100 metres below ground and I could no longer hear the struggles of survival above. Quickly compacting the last of the loose soil into the wall I scrabbled back up my twisting tunnel, taking note of where I could collapse it should I need to and took a peek above, to the sound of tearing and eating.

The ground was littered with bodies, the overturned body of the giant woodlouse was off to one side, its legs curled up in death. Listening closely I could hear the sloppy sound of something feasting inside it and reasoned that the lizards must have won, and appeared to be enjoying the fruits of their labour already.

Judging the moment to be right, I began to slowly and silently drag various bodies back to my pit, making sure to stay away from the lizard feasting on the giant bug, hoping not to have to fight with what seemed to be quite a fearsome warrior. I'm still not sure how those lizards managed to take down something so large and heavily armoured.

A large variety of creatures was the name of the game for me, as I selected as many different shapes as possible. I'd need a lot of essence to play around with while I came up with a new strategy to hunting here. My initial plan to continue with this body hadn't gone to plan, and I had no intention of ending up like the various other corpses array around me.

Silently dragging one last creature back, which looked more like a giant spider with scales than anything else, I thought about taking at least a sample from the giant pillbug. After all, that thick shell seemed interesting, and while I imagined I might be able to create something similar from experimentation, it would be best to have a sample.

Slowly and silently I crept up to the creature, the lizards had gone silent. Perhaps they had fallen into a food coma? Well, in any case, I gingerly grasped one of its innumerable insectile legs between my teeth and began to tug on it. However, for whatever reason, I was finding it difficult to find purchase, and I doubted the lazy lizards inside would take kindly to me joining them now. Tugging a bit more violently on the boney leg, I froze as I heard the sound of beating wings coming closer. Lots of wings.

I'd spent too long here, there was no point grabbing some extra essence if it cost me my life. I released my grip on the boney leg and made an abrupt turn before racing back to my hidey-hole.

Behind me, I heard the shriek of what sounded like birds as I felt heavy impacts thudding against the ground. One after another, so many I didn't bother counting as I dashed through the bushes.

Hearing one last cry of pain from what I could only assume was the lizard, I began to scrabble at the sides of the tunnel, collapsing it behind me while I dived further down, my eyes adjusting quickly to the darkness as I saw the heat of the newly killed bodies emanating from a pile in my cavern where they had all fallen on top of one another when I'd tossed them down.

Pausing at the bottom of the cavern I strained my ears to their limits. Waiting for the inevitable grumble of dirt collapsing before reach claws began to grasp into my haven...

Nothing.

I'd made it. And now I could focus on growing and working out a better way to hunt hopefully. I looked at the pile of bodies before me and grabbed a promising looking one. It was about half my size, and appeared to have 10 tentacles instead of arms or legs, a beak sprouted from within a ring of eyes, half of which had been ruptured in the fighting.

Breathing deeply as I meditated and focused internally, I guided the first tentacle into my toothy maw and began to feast.

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A/N:

I'm not sure how well the action and hunting sounded here. Any criticism is welcome!

EDIT: I smoothed down a couple of passages, and did some improvements. Not much change really, just couldn't leave it how it was.
 
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Interesting. Self-insertion through conveniently present and plausible plot device is certainly refreshing. Self-insertion through ROB method or death by severe injury is overplayed. Though the first question that came to me was "Do you really work at CERN or was it just a conveniently plausible device that you picked?"
Haha, no I don't work at CERN. It was definitely a plot device. Like you mention I'm kind of sick of ROBs who just summon you for no reason, or even worse, to be 'entertainment'. I like the idea of the MC being dumped somewhere, but I want it to be on their own if that makes sense, with no strings attached. As for the method, yeah. Really implausible stuff, but its either that or a summoning ritual of some kind, which I feel is even more overdone.

As for the SI OC stuff, for me an SI means less literal 'self insert' and more an OC with meta-knowledge. As it happens that normally means someone from 'our' earth as far as Multicross elements go, and at that point it's basically an SI. Or at least all the other stories I found with that style were SI's, so the name has gained new meaning in my opinion.
 
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If the mc wants to be smart about surviving he should be making traps and other things to out smart opponents.
 
If the mc wants to be smart about surviving he should be making traps and other things to out smart opponents.

both out-think, out-muscle, and out-evolve his enemies. He will eventually need to remodel his need for companionship, or at least lessen its intensity if he wants to survive on Zerus...unless he manages to create a Semi-Independent hive-mind like structure, one where you are attached to it, but not a drone...but as a individual that can contribute to the group as a whole. Not to mention knowing every single thought? well don't pay attention to the ones who need privacy, but no real reason to backstab everyone else when they can also feel vague emotions from the whole.
 
There has been a lot of si fics featuring primal zero that ended up under 10k words. Hopefully you break that trend. There is not a lot of content at the moment but there is one thing I am curious about. Exactly when in the timeline is the SI?
Is he before the over mind or maybe Kerrigan is soon to visit to bolster herself with the pools on Zerus.
 
Chapter 3 - Intelligent Design, or at least a first Draft.
I could feel the ebb and flow of potential within my body as Essence poured forth from the tentacle being digested inside me. It felt surreal as I glimpsed what I could recognise as biological molecules, tissues, and organs flashing through my mind as I saw everything that made up the creature I was eating. I'd been studying the sciences for years, and while I'd always focused on physics, I knew enough biology to know that what I was experiencing should not have been impossible.

And yet here I was. Like a brain in a jar, I'd been taken from my body and put inside this one. Or grown inside this one. Either way, I was a freak of nature, wasn't I?

Adrenaline surged through my system as I tried to come to terms with my existence, as I tasted the memory of my own Essence flooding through me. Of how I had considered just building a new brain instead of copying the one I'd already seen. Of how I had come so close to almost... not... being reborn.

Looking further at my brain as it was now, I noticed some odd things. The energy and potential I had come to associate with Essence, and its own strange form of biological magic, because really what else could it be called, appeared to be avoiding some of the areas in the front of my brain. Oddly enough, I could almost see a violet hue clashing with the vibrant green of Essence...

And apparently, Essence looked like a vibrant green. Ok, so there was definitely something strange going on there, with my violet stuff and this green stuff. But I couldn't quite see it clearly, maybe I could meditate harder?

Hmm. Hmmmmmmmm. HM-

Ouch, ok, so obviously meditation could not be forced like that. No brainer huh.

Shaking off the sudden headache I shelved the purple and green energy stuff for later and finished swallowing the tentacle. I could think about that stuff later. I had an absolute ton of food now, lots of samples of Essence, a safe space to experiment, and lots of time as long as I didn't start doing exercise and burn through all my food too fast.

Relaxing for a few minutes as the pain faded I looked back to the tree-octopus, with all its eyes, and tentacles and beak. Ok, I'd have another go at this. Having tentacles would be cool too. I mean, I was an alien monster now. If I didn't get myself a good set of tentacles ASAP how would I be able to look at all my peers in the eye? Jokes aside, a set of tentacles would be great manipulators. I obviously needed strong limbs to fight with, and unless I suddenly had a one-man industrial revolution and made some fantasy railguns I would be using muscular power for a while and fighting limbs would be too combat-oriented to do much else. I think. Well, it made sense to me, so I would need some small tentacles to handle delicate things, after all just because I wouldn't be showing these aliens the wonders of Industry I would probably need to craft myself some tools, eventually.

Focusing on the 'blueprints' as it were for the tentacles I began to modify them to fit my body, or at least I tried to. I honestly had no idea what I was doing at first, after all, I was a physicist, not a biologist. And I doubt even my more esoteric friends had ever taken a course in xenobiological prosthetics, so it was a pleasant surprise when I had just begun looking at the tentacles with the idea of using them, when with a surge of green the Essence in front of me began to shift and morph minutely.

I watched in awe as the green glow in my mind's eye seemed to move with an intelligence of its own before after about an hour I could feel it hum in happiness, and I just felt like it was ready. Unwilling to let go of this magnificent feeling by attempting to analyse what was going on I quickly thought about a line of 10 tentacles finding themselves arrayed on the edge of my chin. Almost like one of those beards I had never quite managed to grow as a human.

The green energy seemed to chirp in joy at my acceptance of its work and suddenly with a surge which left me feeling oddly tired, I felt myself falling asleep.

...

I couldn't help but let out a whimper as I woke up. A feeling of pain seemed to sharply cut off as I opened my eyes and blinked. Wow, morphing really took it out of me huh.

Absentmindedly scratching the itch between my teeth, I also began to sort through the bodies in front of me with my... tentacles! My tentacles had grown in!

I quickly reeled them back in to observe them.

Dark green, rubbery skin seemed to stretch over them as they turned and twisted this way and that. They looked exactly how I'd hoped!

A loud bark of success left my mouth as I grinned happily. I'd actually morphed myself! Grown a new set of limbs to help me! Ok, now I was really starting to have fun. I had no idea how exactly this shit worked, but the results could speak for themselves as far as I was concerned.

I was still a little wary of messing with the purple stuff, for now, so I decided I'd have a quick scan of the corpses nearby for now, and have a look at my options before doing any more experimenting. Only samples until I decided.

Nearly salivating at the idea of so much Essence nearby I quickly grasped an interesting one, it looked like a spider. Almost like a huntsman spider actually, and I wanted to see how its carapace worked. Images of the giant armoured bug from earlier flooded me, of how strong and invulnerable it had seemed. I wanted to see about having something like that.

DIgesting one of its legs I submerged my mind within the sea of green Essence streaming out of the limb and began to envision chitinous plate...


...


My eyes snapped open. At this point, I had become used to the pain of waking up after a morph. I'd been through nearly every sample I could find by now, and -sniff- the mountain of corpses might have been significantly smaller, but its smell had, rather predictably, increased monstrously.

The scent of rotting meat was quite thick right now, and while it would be no trouble for my new set of stomachs to consume such a grisly feast, it would be much more efficient to consume the biomass before it began to leak into the floor.

Before having my final feast I paused. I had finally finished a whole slew of additions and changes to my body over the last few days of experimentation with Essence. I'd found the green energy to be insanely easy to use, in fact, it even did most of the work itself. This had become obvious later on, as after the first few modifications I had realised exactly why the green Essence seemed to have a mind of its own. It did. Or rather, there was a large portion of the lizard brain dedicated entirely to manipulating this biological magic, and with my guidance, it was much more free to work. It also helped that I had provided so many samples for it to enjoy.

It. Yeah, I'd noticed a split between me and that portion of the lizard brain. I was quite literally incapable of personally using whatever part of the brain controls Essence. I could see the Essence, even observing how the Essence was manipulated in close detail, but for some reason, it resisted all attempts at direct manipulation. I think it has something to do with the violet portion of my brain, but I can't be sure yet.

I slowly looked over my body. It was unrecognizable to what I had first had when I came here.

A spherical shell encapsulated nearly my entire body. The shell was nearly 10 centimetres thick and had brutal prongs extended regularly across its surface, they ended in forks, meaning that with all my appendages held inside I would look almost like a spikey ball, with spikes on my spikes so to speak. My shell was huge, extending nearly 10 metres across, with as dark a coating as I had been able to create.

The material of the shell was, in fact, a fusion, with alternating layers between two samples I had found, one was a super dense chitinous plating that I'd found on some beetle-lookalike. It had been nearly impervious to me, and if not for it being such a small sample, and having such a thin shell of its own, I doubt it would have even been killed in the fight from which I'd found it. The other material was also very interesting and didn't actually come from a shell at all but from one of the many examples of the beak which I'd found. This material was less hard and brittle than the chitin mentioned earlier but was much, much more flexible, and more interestingly was both a great bonding agent and also compressible. Essentially I used the beak material as glue for all the layers of my shell, and to absorb blunt impacts. I hoped that by using both of these together my shell would be extremely hard, durable, and yet also able to sustain being pierced without shattering entirely (as the beetle had).

Now, why all the spikes? And how could I possibly get around with such a huge shell on my back? Well, I wouldn't. Hopefully, nothing would even see my shell. I had decided to become a complete ambush predator and was going to bury my shell, and by extension all the vulnerable meaty bits inside, in the dirt. The thickness of the shell would stop anything that could dig from getting in while acting as a last resort, and the prongs coming out of my shell would work to help anchor me in the dirt, so that hopefully nothing would be able to drag me out and into the open. Now, this all sounded incredibly tough, right? How would I ambush anything if I was stuck in one place permanently, and how would I even get back to the surface with my big old shell weighing me down?!

Well, here we come to my pride and joy. I mentioned that my shell only encapsulated nearly my entire body, Well the opening was for my tentacles. Lots, and lots, and lots of tentacles. You would be surprised at just how efficient and adaptable these suckers could get when you could literally craft them yourself from a bunch of super-powered alien monsters.

A large portion of my massive spherical body was now devoted to holding my tentacles and the massive muscles which would be working at their base.

I could divide my tentacles into 4 main types. The first, and most difficult to craft would be the sensory tentacles. These suckers were extremely long and extremely thin. In this world of oversized monsters, these things were about as thick as my human finger, and would no doubt be undetectable in the thick jungle environment up top. They could extend for about 200 metres, and had a collection of sensory organs dotted along their length. Ears, eyes, pressure joints, noses, I had put everything I could find on them, and rather surprisingly it was not terribly difficult to make a great eye and ear when you knew the physics behind them, and had bullshit biology magic I guess, but anyway. I had about a hundred of these spy tendrils, and with them arrayed around my hiding spot I would be able to see everything that happened in a large radius around me. Which would be great for my... snatcher tentacles.

These were, by necessity, much thicker than my sen-tacles, and as a consequence, I only had three of them. Nearly 150 metres long, with powerful muscles, and suckers capable of generating an extremely sticky glue, when I used these they took a lot of energy and were by no means subtle. They were made to smash and grab, giving prey no chance to escape, they would reach out to a choice morsel, wrap it up, and drag it back to me as quickly as possible and waiting for it would be the... smashers and slashers.

Once again, these were much larger than the sen-tacles, and as such, I only had room for three each. The smashers would be my main means of locomotion. My stronger tentacles, and also my shortest ones. They each extended a mere 10 metres from my 'mouth', the entrance to my shell, and were capable of dragging me where I needed to go, and churning up the dirt so I could hide myself. Hopefully. I've not tested them yet. They would also be useful for cracking the shells of any big beasties which got too close or maybe even suffocating them. However, what most prey would face upon my snatchers dragging them close would be my slashers. The slashers were essentially my main weapons now and had a variety of armaments. They were not quite as brutally strong as the smashers, but extended 20 metres from me, and were much faster. There were a variety of sharp claws along the edges, and spikes at the tip which would hopefully be able to kill anything which came close, but if not would be able to at least grapple and hold my prey long enough to let the hooks dig in, or allow the more ponderous and clumsy smashers to get a grip if they had a shell-like me.

Well, I had done the best I could. I was now an eldritch nightmare, and I'd already eaten all the other food while I was monologuing... Ahh. I blame lizard me. Anyway, time to get to the surface and see if my new body would sink or swim.

Hypothetically speaking, of course. This form would sink like a rock if I ever went near water.

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AN: I hope I described the new body alright. And don't worry, we won't be stuck here for much longer I think.

As always, any criticism is extremely welcome! I normally find a lot of stupid stuff I wish I'd done better after I read it the morning after, and I'd appreciate anyone else pointing out things they didn't like.
 
I would suggest checking out other primal zerg si fics so you can get a better idea of what you want to go with this story.
 
well all ya need is marine creatures to add there adaptations to your own so ya can go into the water and you know not drown
 
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