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Raising a Monster

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[X] An absolute certainty that this Monster has to die. It is a warm but oozing pulse from the base of your skull, its all there just out of reach. But you are not just going to kill it, no you are going to rend its body into pieces and then destroy its immortal soul. It will never be able to hide from your Wrath, it will rue the day it was born because once you start, you'll never give mercy. (Belief Power: Apocalyptic Fury)

just for fun.
Love the quest.
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Oh my god I wanted to type something similar to this
 
[x] Ice cold, calm rage. You're not sure why, but you feel calmer than you have in years. Oh you're angry. No doubt about that. But it's the calm kind of anger. The kind where you can think of nothing, but how to most efficiently destroy the bitch standing in front of you and her pet monster. (Belief Power: Tranquil Fury)
 
Observed said:
[X] An absolute certainty that this Monster has to die. It is a warm but oozing pulse from the base of your skull, your anger addictively writhing just out of reach. You are not just going to kill it. No, you are going to rend its body into pieces and then destroy its immortal soul. If it tries to run, It will never be able to escape your Wrath. It will rue the day it was born because once you start, mercy will no longer be an option. (Belief Power: Apocalyptic Fury)

Just for fun but edited a bit now.
Love the quest.
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...Approved. But keep in mind, if this wins, then you'll basically be Asura whenever anyone hurts your daughter even slightly.

As in, punch them.

Hard.
 
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[X] An absolute certainty that this Monster has to die. It is a warm but oozing pulse from the base of your skull, your anger addictively writhing just out of reach. You are not just going to kill it. No, you are going to rend its body into pieces and then destroy its immortal soul. If it tries to run, It will never be able to escape your Wrath. It will rue the day it was born because once you start, mercy will no longer be an option. (Belief Power: Apocalyptic Fury)

changing vote so we can press circle to shut up this week's boss fight with a punch to the face in the middle of their motive rant
 
LinkOnScepter said:
...Approved. But keep in mind, if this wins, then you'll basically be Asura whenever anyone makes your hurts your daughter even slightly.

As in, punch them.

Hard.
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Thank you.
And I like the idea of berserkergang so thats a thing I can get behind.
However, I interpreted from the post that being a raging inferno or a tranquil fury would lead to fire or ice magic influence. I wrote that hoping for a sort of aura of destruction type thing. You know, Howard gets mad and things start to break. Objects, magic, people, resolve...
But being a berserker is just fine in my book.

We must learn the punch spell...
 
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[X] An absolute certainty that this Monster has to die. It is a warm but oozing pulse from the base of your skull, your anger addictively writhing just out of reach. You are not just going to kill it. No, you are going to rend its body into pieces and then destroy its immortal soul. If it tries to run, It will never be able to escape your Wrath. It will rue the day it was born because once you start, mercy will no longer be an option. (Belief Power: Apocalyptic Fury)
 
Changing my vote to this

[X] An absolute certainty that this Monsterhas to die. It is a warm but oozing pulse from the base of your skull, your anger addictively writhing just out of reach. You are not just going to kill it. No, you are going to rend its body into pieces and then destroy its immortal soul. If it tries to run, It will never be able to escape your Wrath. It will rue the day it was born because once you start, mercy will no longer be anoption. (Belief Power: Apocalyptic Fury)
 
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Belief Types
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    • Observed said:
    Thank you.
    And I like the idea of berserkergang so thats a thing I can get behind.
    However, I interpreted from the post that being a raging inferno or a tranquil fury would lead to fire or ice magic influence. I wrote that hoping for a sort of aura of destruction type thing. You know, Howard gets mad and things start to break. Objects, magic, people, resolve...
    But being a berserker is not too bad.
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    Magic is based on the Monster you make a Pact with.

    As for the choices, thematically it's how your Belief not only comes out, but is amplified,

    The Raging Inferno would mean that you would go forth and burn away just about everything in your path. When others put their Belief in you, then your fire grows higher, brighter, and hotter. This let's you burn more things away. But even though fire can burn, it can also warm others. You will draw people to you with your flame, hoping not to burn in your inferno. Think of it kind of like being Simon from Gurren Lagann. You will move forward and anything in your path will be burned or die.

    In social situations, this would be represented by you grinding your teeth together in an attempt to stay calm.

    Out of the current options (including the Write In), this is the mid-point in terms of bodily harm. You will have some broken bones, but will be fine if you don't push yourself.

    The Tranquil Fury is a bit different. You go forth with a cool, calculating mind. You take in everything around you. Weak points, places that can do the most damage, items that can be used to get an edge. You channel all of this into a single plan that will utterly demolish whatever is trying to stop you with surgical precision. When others put their Belief in you here, you start to notice more small things that could make a big difference in a fight. The ice you wield forms a glacier upon which others can stand, and watch as you conduct your work, even though this makes you seem less than human. This would be more akin to Batman or Deathstroke.

    In social situations, this would be represented by you just getting quiet. Smiling even while you plot your enemies demise.

    In terms of harm, it's more mental than physical. Using that much brain power at once can wear the mind down. Push too hard and you'll...."burn out".

    The current Write in, Apocalyptic Fury, will be like Asura. Wrath. You are Wrath. You don't care what is in your way, if it harms you, your loved ones, especially your daughter, it. Will. Go. DOWN. God, Legend, Mythic, you don't care. They hurt your loved ones, and you will destroy them. Belief from others causes you to care more about the people around you. The ones that you want to protect. Which in turn makes you even more angry than you already were, because someone has the gall to hurt these people on your watch! Of course, you sometimes forget where you are, and may cause more damage than good. But in the end, people will rely on you. Because you're a giant, fuck off, battering ram.

    Socially? This would be represented by having a hair trigger temper, where even a single insult against your daughter or loved one has you ready to fight.

    In terms of harm, physical all the way. You'll recover as long as you don't push too hard, but it's gonna sting. Might want to start wearing protective gear all the time.
     
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    • [X] The world slows to crawl in a terrible moment of Clarity. You are going to End them. Every neuron in your brain is firing at breakneck pace, making plans and contingencies to make this Fact a Reality. You can Feel the electricity travel down your nervous system to put plans into motion. It almost feels like it is crackling across skin. No matter. They. Die. Now. (Belief Power: Fury Of The Storm)
    LinkOnScepter said:
    Magic is based on the Monster you make a Pact with.

    As for the choices, thematically it's how your Belief not only comes out, but is amplified,

    The Raging Inferno would mean that you would go forth and burn away just about everything in your path. When others put their Belief in you, then your fire grows higher, brighter, and hotter. This let's you burn more things away. Think of it kind of like being Simon from Gurren Lagann. You will move forward and anything in your path will be burned or die.

    In social situations, this would be represented by you grinding your teeth together in an attempt to stay calm.

    Out of the current options (including the Write In), this is the mid-point in terms of bodily harm. You will have some broken bones, but will be fine if you don't push yourself.

    The Tranquil Fury is a bit different. You go forth with a cool, calculating mind. You take in everything around you. Weak points, places that can do the most damage, items that can be used to get an edge. You channel all of this into a single plan that will utterly demolish whatever is trying to stop you with surgical precision. When others put their Belief in you here, you start to notice more small things that could make a big difference in a fight. This would be more akin to Batman or Deathstroke.

    In social situations, this would be represented by you just getting quiet. Smiling even while you plot your enemies demise.

    In terms of harm, it's more mental than physical. Using that much brain power at once can wear the mind down. Push too hard and you'll...."burn out".

    The current Write in, Apocalyptic Fury, will be like Asura. Wrath. You are Wrath. You don't care what is in your way, if it harms you, your loved ones, especially your daughter, it. Will. Go. DOWN. God, Legend, Mythic, you don't care. They hurt your loved ones, and you will destroy them. Belief from others causes you to care more about the people around you. The ones that you want to protect. Which in turn makes you even more angry than you already were, because someone has the gall to hurt these people on your watch!

    Socially? This would be represented by having a hair trigger temper, where even a single insult against your daughter or loved one has you ready to fight.

    In terms of harm, physical all the way. You'll recover as long as you don't push too hard, but it's gonna sting. Might want to start wearing protective gear all the time.
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    Could I get a power analysis for mine?
     
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    MagusBlack said:
    [X] The world slows to crawl in a terrible moment of Clarity. You are going to End them. Every neuron in your brain is firing at breakneck pace, making plans and contingencies to make this Fact a Reality. You can Feel the electricity travel down your nervous system to put plans into motion. It almost feels like it is crackling across skin. No matter. They. Die. Now. (Belief Power: Fury Of The Storm)
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    Edit: Actually, re-reading it, I fully approve it.

    For the record, this would be the equivalent of having Super Speed.
     
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    Belief Types Part Deux
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    • MagusBlack said:
    Could I get a power analysis for mine?
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    Certainly.

    Fury of the Storm would be like having Super Speed. Your brain pumps way more Adrenaline into your body than it should be able to produce. This causes everything around you to slow down. You move faster than the eye can see, almost like lightning in your movements. While you don't perceive things as well as Tranquil Fury or hit as hard as Apocalyptic Fury, you don't have to. Small wounds add up after all. No one will be able to see you coming until after the damage has been done. When others believe in you, you can move even faster. The more Belief, the faster speeds you can reach, to the point where your body is so used to the speed it can move it that it's more reaction than actual action. People will flock to you, as they do the Eye of the Storm. Even while you rage at the enemies surrounding you, you keep them safe in your calm demeanor. Of course, storms are forces of nature. They cause destruction by virtue of being in an area. Be careful you do not become like them.

    In social situations, this would be represented by being "quick on the uptake". You would be able to "get" things faster than others, and would sometimes think that they are going too slow for you.

    In terms of harm, it will mostly be in your muscles and legs. The human body was not made to move that fast, and you'll be feeling the effects as soon as the battle is over.
     
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    • LinkOnScepter said:
    Certainly.

    Fury of the Storm would be like having Super Speed. Your brain pumps way more Adrenaline into your body than it should be able to produce. This causes everything around you to slow down. You move faster than the eye can see, almost like lightning in your movements. While you don't perceive things as well as Tranquil Fury or hit as hard as Apocalyptic Fury, you don't have to. Small wounds adds up after all. No one will be able to see you coming until after the damage has been done. When others believe in you, you can move even faster. The more Belief, the faster speeds you can reach, the point where your body is so used to the speed it can move it that it's more reaction than actual action.

    In social situations, this would be represented by being "quick on the uptake". You would be able to "get" things faster than others, and would sometimes thing that they are going too slow for you.

    In terms of harm, it will mostly be in your muscles and legs. The human body was not made to move that fast, and you'll be feeling the effects as soon as the battle is over.
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    Sweet that was pretty much what I going for.
     
    You know, for some reason, I feel like I may have unleashed a beast worse than anything I could come up with with that Write in vote...

    Help :cry:.
     
    [X] The world slows to crawl in a terrible moment of Clarity. You are going to End them. Every neuron in your brain is firing at breakneck pace, making plans and contingencies to make this Fact a Reality. You can Feel the electricity travel down your nervous system to put plans into motion. It almost feels like it is crackling across skin. No matter. They. Die. Now. (Belief Power: Fury Of The Storm)


    Rules of nature! Along with electro-slap!
     
    [X] The world slows to crawl in a terrible moment of Clarity. You are going to End them. Every neuron in your brain is firing at breakneck pace, making plans and contingencies to make this Fact a Reality. You can Feel the electricity travel down your nervous system to put plans into motion. It almost feels like it is crackling across skin. No matter. They. Die. Now. (Belief Power: Fury Of The Storm)
     
    [x] Ice cold, calm rage. You're not sure why, but you feel calmer than you have in years. Oh you're angry. No doubt about that. But it's the calm kind of anger. The kind where you can think of nothing, but how to most efficiently destroy the bitch standing in front of you and her pet monster. (Belief Power: Tranquil Fury)

    We're a teacher. We smile and plot demise
     
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    [x] Ice cold, calm rage. You're not sure why, but you feel calmer than you have in years. Oh you're angry. No doubt about that. But it's the calm kind of anger. The kind where you can think of nothing, but how to most efficiently destroy the bitch standing in front of you and her pet monster. (Belief Power: Tranquil Fury)
     
    [x] Ice cold, calm rage. You're not sure why, but you feel calmer than you have in years. Oh you're angry. No doubt about that. But it's the calm kind of anger. The kind where you can think of nothing, but how to most efficiently destroy the bitch standing in front of you and her pet monster. (Belief Power: Tranquil Fury)
     
    LinkOnScepter said:
    The current Write in, Apocalyptic Fury, will be like Asura. Wrath. You are Wrath. You don't care what is in your way, if it harms you, your loved ones, especially your daughter, it. Will. Go. DOWN. God, Legend, Mythic, you don't care. They hurt your loved ones, and you will destroy them. Belief from others causes you to care more about the people around you. The ones that you want to protect. Which in turn makes you even more angry than you already were, because someone has the gall to hurt these people on your watch! Of course, you sometimes forget where you are, and may cause more damage than good. But in the end, people will rely on you. Because you're a giant, fuck off, battering ram.

    Socially? This would be represented by having a hair trigger temper, where even a single insult against your daughter or loved one has you ready to fight.

    In terms of harm, physical all the way. You'll recover as long as you don't push too hard, but it's gonna sting. Might want to start wearing protective gear all the time.
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    YES! JUST YES!!!!

    [X] An absolute certainty that this Monsterhas to die. It is a warm but oozing pulse from the base of your skull, your anger addictively writhing just out of reach. You are not just going to kill it. No, you are going to rend its body into pieces and then destroy its immortal soul. If it tries to run, It will never be able to escape your Wrath. It will rue the day it was born because once you start, mercy will no longer be anoption. (Belief Power: Apocalyptic Fury)





     
    [X] Ice cold, calm rage. You're not sure why, but you feel calmer than you have in years. Oh you're angry. No doubt about that. But it's the calm kind of anger. The kind where you can think of nothing, but how to most efficiently destroy the bitch standing in front of you and her pet monster. (Belief Power: Tranquil Fury)

    [JK] Shotgun? Shotgun. (Belief Power: Papa's Shotgun.) (The joke here is the old sterotype of the father polishing his shotgun to threaten the life of the person who's dating his daughter. Here we're going to be able to summon Shotguns when Anna is in danger and shoot anyone. And since it's created solely through out sheer rage at our daughter being hurt it can hurt if not kill anything. ANYTHING! At least if this was a serious option. Don't read and Vote on quests at 1 am kids!)
     
    [x] Ice cold, calm rage. You're not sure why, but you feel calmer than you have in years. Oh you're angry. No doubt about that. But it's the calm kind of anger. The kind where you can think of nothing, but how to most efficiently destroy the bitch standing in front of you and her pet monster. (Belief Power: Tranquil Fury)
     
    [x] Ice cold, calm rage. You're not sure why, but you feel calmer than you have in years. Oh you're angry. No doubt about that. But it's the calm kind of anger. The kind where you can think of nothing, but how to most efficiently destroy the bitch standing in front of you and her pet monster. (Belief Power: Tranquil Fury)
     
    [x] write in
    Did she just do that?! hHahaAAHAHHhaa! THhiissSs BBbBiiIITTtch DddaArrRes ToO haAaArm YooUUR FfAmIly? SHE WILL BREAK!! YoUu CaaAn SeeE HeEr MiInNd anND ItT IsS WEAK! no one hurts your family, no one. they wanted an abomination? They've got something worse, YOU!! YOU WILL NEVER LOSE SOMEONE YOU LOVE AGAIN!! NOT NOW NOT EVER!! HAhahAHAahAha!!

    (Wrath of The Broken)
    By temporarily breaking yourself you can see how to break others.
     
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