Well the chat has spoken we grow one step closer to Unlimited Bat Works. Kinda wanted Blazimg heart to enventually get fire and do something like this with our bat. But we will get there, eventually... for now we just need to figure out how to shoot our bats like missiles.


View: https://youtube.com/shorts/-rO8t9c9T-g?si=SY6rvVxuxdm5I7vb


Edit: Wait checked the vote again did making bats and elements win? If so, were a lot closer to fire bat than I thought.
 
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Well the chat has spoken we grow one step closer to Unlimited Bat Works. Kinda wanted Blazimg heart to enventually get fire and do something like this with our bat. But we will get there, eventually... for now we just need to figure out how to shoot our bats like missiles.


View: https://youtube.com/shorts/-rO8t9c9T-g?si=SY6rvVxuxdm5I7vb


Edit: Wait checked the vote again did making bats and elements win? If so, were a lot closer to fire bat than I thought.

Blazing Maiden Heart won the Will-Working vote and Millefeuille Arsenal won the Combat Arts vote. Fire Bat is within reach.
 
I GOT SOUL
A little later than 24 hours, but I had previous engagements.

***​

You make your choices, Blazing Maiden Heart and Millefeuille Arsenal. They fit you the best, you think.

While it was tempting to be so awesome it is a tangible force, and to eventually have a squad of adorable Youkai delinquents dressed like you, being able to get your DBZ on felt the most proper. You're not really a Card Captor, more of a Crime Captor. It also kinda feels like cheating again to get a magical boost to your presence.

The other option was simple; you weren't willing to abandon your trusty bat. Not now, not ever. It was your friend, and you never abandon a friend.

You hope your friends back in Springfield hold the same belief.

Any case, you look back to Alice and blink, dismissing the little blue notification in your eye. +This Magical Girl interface is kinda...+

Alice looks upon you with understanding. +Ah, so that's what you meant. It's a shared interface with some other tech, helps streamline the process. Is it too intrusive?+

+Nah, although the way it jiggles is disrracting.+ You pause. +It wasn't the kind of magical I was expecting. Like, Nanoha is cool and all, but there's a reason the genre's heavy hitters still keep it fantastical, you know?+

Aaaaaand Alice is back to looking at you like a crazy person. +I'm afraid I don't, love.+

"Haaah?!" You blurt out. Your lip curls into a sukeban sneer on blind impulse. "What kinda mascot doesn't even know magical girl anime?"

Alice cringes, fear making her reply out loud. "I'm a new recruit from another department since the previous one went rogue please don't hurt me!"

Your anger turns to worry, then succor. You crouch down in a sukeban squat, careful to give other people space to pass you on the sidewalk. +Didn't mean to scare you. Run that by me again?+

Alice shivers, cowering in fear, before composing herself. +Right, right. Stiff upper lip.+ She gives you an embarrassed look before continuing. +I was tasked to track down a fellow...mascot, codename DAJI. They absconded with an experimental Magical Girl Raising Device and a Youma-creating artifact to do God knows what. I was to find suitable Magical Girl candidates and use them to bring DAJI to justice...but then things happened and it's all gone a bit tits-up.+

You start smiling again, lips parting enough to show a satisfied predator's grin. This Magical Girl thing kept getting better and better.

+Well your tits aren't all the way up.+ You hook a thumb at yourself. +Suitable Magical Girl #1 right here, baby!+

Alice takes a few steps away from you, pacing in a circle. Her floppy ears raise in contemplation. After a few laps, she turns to face you. There's concern again, for her own safety this time. +About that...Don't take this the wrong way love, you're absolutely talented, but...+

You tilt your head. +But?+

+You're, to put it mildly, fucking mental.+ Alice's ears pin back, another fear response. +Yes, you have heroic instincts, but girls who act like you did are ticking time bombs for Inversion Impulses.+

You click your tongue. Even the mascots in your dream come true act like cops.

You can't help how you feel when the blood pounds in your ears, singing sweet songs of victory and violence. You do your damndest to satisfy yourself only on those who invite or incite violence. You use these urges to protect the weak, employ violence for those who cannot.

Your senpai taught you that much.

You frown and look Alice dead in her yellow button eyes. +Look, out there? That was me enjoying being a fuckin' hero. An ally of justice! Not just some bitch with a nailbat, a dream, and Super Hero Time brainrot!+

Alice wilts under you, for bristling. +I'm sorry love, you just...you just scare me. Between your actions and your initial wish.+ She steels herself, upper lip stiff, and puts a tentative forepaw on your thigh. +But you saved from something dreadful, and you're my first commissioned Maj ever. Having you Invert would be gutting.+

The corner of your mouth twitches between smile and frown, before you will your mouth into a neutral line. +Look. I get it. I'm scary as fuck. But I'm serious about this hero shit. I'm going to help someone I just met save her girlfriend, even though the sitch feels sketch af. I'd do it even if I wasn't a Maj. Helping's what I do. It's who I am. And I just wanna rip out my fuckin' heart sometimes, pull out my soul, so people can see that.+

You're crying a little now, metaphorically baring your soul to this cabbit.

Alice hops on your thigh so she can pat you on the head. +There, there, love. Stiff upper lip.+ She looks dead in your puffy red eyes. Her fear is replaced by compassion. +You'll get your chance. You're a Magical Girl now. A bloody hero. If you promise not to lose yourself, I'll do everything in my power to keep you one.+

You sniffle and chuckle. +Even though I'm "fucking mental"?+

+Of course, love.+ Alice nods, hopping off your thigh with a Chesire Cat grin. +Everyone's a bit mental nowadays, aye?+

"Guess so." You give her one right back, full of loving-kindness. "You got a deal. Sailor Scout's honor."

***​

After a long walk home and a disgusting amount of In-and-Out for dinner, you hit up Chiaki on LIME. You reminded her how sketchy this was, how you couldn't leave someone with so much love in the lurch. She politely thanked you for trusting her, then revealed shit got real. Her worst fears were confirmed shortly after school; her girlfriend had been nabbed by thugs and locked up in a warehouse by the docks. Reluctantly, she showed you a picture of what they'd done to her: tied to a chair with her clothes disheveled, face swollen, cinnamon skin knotted up in black and blue.

You were going to enjoy fucking up whoever did this.

From context clues in the picture, Chiaki managed to narrow down which warehouse one it was. She sent you the coordinates over LIME, you did the rest on your phone's map app.

Which is why you're at the docks now, cloaked in late night's velvet embrace.

It's a good thing your folks trusted you to be out late, even with the delinquency. They'd raised you to be independent, to know right from wrong. It's why they trusted you, even when cops, teachers, guidance counselors, the whole damn world seemed not to.

It's why you believe in justice enough to be its ally.

And justice is why you're upon the threshold of Warehouse 2 Blue, where Chiaki's coordinates led you. You hear the murmurs and movement of very bad men inside. The grip on your bat tightens, your lips curl into a grin.

Alice scampers out of the darkness, her white fur a dirty yellow in the flickering warehouse light. +Coast is clear, love. How are you planning on doing this?+

She stands on her hind legs, ears up and out, to double-check her work. She exhales, confident she wasn't followed or compromised. +There's an unguarded back entrance you could use to infiltrate, extract the girl, and exfiltrate without incident. Not sure if that's your style, though.+

[What do you do?]
[ ] Go quiet: Listen to Alice and sneak in through the back.
[ ] Go loud: Walk through the front door and beat some ass.
[ ] Go sparkly: Transform, blow a hole in the front, and tell these punks Bancho Lily's gonna punish you.
 
[X] Go quiet: Listen to Alice and sneak in through the back.
Ahh some bonding with our partner..... and some knowledge that we have a AWOL MaGi mascot with a transformation trinket and Youma maker.... thats.... a dangerous combo... like "how to make your own Dark MaGi in 5 easy steps" levels of bad, this can only end in explosions..... and we havent got to the KR yet. Anywho... voting the stealth option, best not go in guns blazing in a potential hostage situation, plus we were sent here as Anastasia not Bancho Lily, we go in guns blazimg and we get asked how we found about the kidnapping, better not lose our secret identity on our first mission yah?
 
As cool as going sparkly would be, stealth seems to fit the mission better. Preferrably the girlfriend shouldn't even learn that we're magical.

[X] Go quiet: Listen to Alice and sneak in through the back.
 
Hum…
Part of me REALLY wants to go loud from the get-go…
But I guess when you have a nail at always at your side the world can look like a home run waiting to happen.
[X] Go quiet: Listen to Alice and sneak in through the back.
 
[X] Go sparkly: Transform, blow a hole in the front, and tell these punks Bancho Lily's gonna punish you.
 
[X] Go sparkly: Transform, blow a hole in the front, and tell these punks Bancho Lily's gonna punish you.

Kurosaki could use some sparkles right now. and restaurant walk in freezer to hang out in to escape this heat.
 
[X] Go quiet: Listen to Alice and sneak in through the back.

This way when it inevitable goes to hell we can say I told you so.
 
Closing this one a little early so I can keep production up. If you have not done so yet, I implore you to give Ai Senshi a little Sun in the Summerfest Storytelling Showdown. The previous arrangement still applies, to be calculated once the contest's voting period ends.

Shilling is against my religion, but even making top cut with Ai Senshi can show that sickos can still shine.

Scheduled vote count started by FourthWall on Jul 15, 2024 at 5:49 AM, finished with 10 posts and 10 votes.


E: Score one for stealth missions.
 
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TACTICAL BANCHO ACTION
Didn't make top cut. So it goes.

***​

You're going to do this all sneaky-like. Yeah, going in weapons-hot was always fun, and going in sparkly sounded even more fun, you have a hostage to save. It wouldn't be any fun if some punk got the idea to run off with her or worse. It also wouldn't be fun to run headlong into an unknown number of enemies and, perish the thought, get your own ass beat.

Besides, Alice found a back entrance. She's your partner now, and you'd be a real dick to deny her help.

So you sneak with catlike tread behind the building and into the back entrance. Half-burnt out fluorescent lights shine above you, casting a dingy pallor over the pitted concrete and grungy corrugated shutters.

Alice scouts ahead of you. +Still clear. The majority of the sound is coming from deeper in.+

+Got it.+ You ping back. You rest your bat on your shoulders and follow the main hallway, eyes and ears open for any assholes.

You find one two doors down, a portly punk picking his nose. The ghost of a grin flickers onto your face as you swoop behind him and put him to sleep with your bat. You shush him goodnight and let him gently slump to the floor.

+...He's going to be alright, yeah?+ Alice pulses to you.

+I gave him a blood choke.+ you reply. +He'll be fine when he wakes up.+

Alice accepts this after a bit of thought.

The two of you keep moving forward, the chatter getting louder as you go. There's a steel stairwell right before the main storage room, leading to a high catwalk.

An idea forms in your double dangoed head. +Hey, do I get stronger bones and stuff when untransformed?+

+Yes, to an extent,+ Alice pulses. +Becoming a Magical Girl enhances human capabilities through Will, even when untransformed.+

You look up to the catwalk with a smile, then nod to yourself. Alice gives you a funny look, but doesn't press the issue.

Idea to plancha off the catwalk pocketed in the back of your mind, you carefully open the door to the main storage room a crack. Alice squeezes her fuzzy head through the crack under you.

You both see about a dozen slabs of craggy mooks in wifebeaters walking set patrols. They all have plastic bag masks, twin eyeholes the only defining traits. The more you look, the less they look like people and more like bad sculptures.

Alice's nose twitches. +Lesser Youma. Little independent thought, no personal Will detected. More puppets than anything else. Their master must be around here somewhere, love.+

You look around for bigger fish, and see an olive-skinned girl in a blue blouse a size too small for her. She's got elf ears and a bad case of resting bitch face. Looking at her makes your spine tingle a little; a taste of what the pyrefox gave you.

You nod over to Alice. +She feels like the one.+

Alice sniffs. +Ah, she's a Youma too. Higher class. Her Will is imposed on the others.+

+You think I can take her out from here?+

+See what she does.+ Alice pings. +Wait for a better shot.+

+Got it.+ You focus on the elf-eared girl, following her with your eyes until she reaches the back wall.

And the girl you're here to rescue, slumped against a chair. Tied there with heavy rope, her arms and legs bound. There's more blood on her outfit, more ripped fabric. The hint of a wine-red sports bra peeks from under her ruined white dress shirt.

Elf-ears lifts the girl's head up by the hair. "Willing to talk?"

The girl glares defiance and spits in Elf-ears's face.

"Cute," Elf-ears says, wiping the spit from her brow. "Your petty act of defiance will only-"

The girl spits at her again.

"You're only making this harder on yoursel-"

More spit.

"How unsanitary of yo-"

Even more spit.

"STOP THAT!" Elf-ears spits in her captive's face.

That draws a fanged grin from the captive, not dissimilar to your own. She gets a backhand from Elf-ears for that, hard enough to make her spit blood.

"Impertinent little girl, who are you to defy Piron, the Macabre?" Elf-ears, Piron, shakes out her hand. "Tell me what I need to know and this can all be over."

"You need to know how to control your portions," the captive says with a rasping laugh.

That earns her another backhand. "Make another joke about my figure and I will send you back to your girlfriend in a bodybag."

The captive grins as her head lolls, the tips of her bottle-pink hair dip-dyed in blood.

Piron walks away in a huff, the click-clack of high heels a gotten-to staccato. The mooks all go still.

+It appears her underlings stop following their routes when she's upset.+ Alice says. +They must be actively controlled by her.+

+So if we take her out or piss her off, that deals with the mooks?+
+I would presume so. Don't forget the hostage, love.+

+Wouldn't dream of it.+

You look around the warehouse floor; there are enough support beams you could hide behind to sneak your way to the captive. The floor is big, big enough you'd have to worry about getting surrounded. Enough construction material is laying around for improvised cover and weapons; your trusty bat is all you need, but that doesn't stop the mooks.

The catwalk's there too, you could kite the mooks with your Blazing Maiden Heart. If you didn't want to sparkle, there was still the plancha on the table. No windows, and the shutter's down; punching through is probably something you could do transformed. Two doors, the one you're peeking through and another on the other side of the room, near the shutter. You've got a chokepoint here, but the room is big enough you might have to worry about people escaping through the other door.

The captive groans, her head lolling back over her chair. She's in a bad way, and you're not sure how much more she can take. The mooks are still frozen, Piron is still seething. You have to act fast, before this moment passes.

[What do you do?]
[ ] Sneak your way over to her.
[ ] Create a distraction, then grab her.
[ ] Snipe Piron with your newfound Blazing Maiden Heart.
[ ] Dive off the catwalk and start cracking skulls.
 
Hrrrm.
Good news this mook is the type to need to be calm at all times.
Bad news is there's still a degree of multi-tasking implicit in that ability.
So. Plan.
Snipe the Big shot is VERY tempting…

…Q for Chiaki, if Saya is indeed a resisting Mug instead of a fellow Maj-when did she become a Maj?
Because if Saya's a mug then intel on Chiaki is probably why she here getting grilled by this youma.

…A part of me is now sad we cannot drop a catwalk section into plancha right on top of it to flatten Pirion…I think.

[X] Snipe Piron with your newfound Blazing Maiden Heart.
 
[X] Snipe Piron with your newfound Blazing Maiden Heart.
Probably not the best choice, but i wan to show off our power.
 
I mean, the correct answer here is "Shoot the Boss while descending from on high, screaming like a loon". It was just called out that when she's distracted her mooks sort of space out, making her forget everything except the grinning lunatic shooting princess sparkles while wielding an increasingly concerning baseball bat is a really good distraction.
 
[ ] Sneak your way over to her.
So, a good idea. Basically, the idea is that Pirion will still be fuming until we're out of there. On the other hand, the sneaky path could put us out of position when Pirion's attention returns.
[ ] Create a distraction, then grab her.
I see this one as the riskiest. I think a distraction, in getting Pirion's attention, will snap her out of her fuming and make her start thinking again.
[X] Snipe Piron with your newfound Blazing Maiden Heart.
RTS games are very mentally demanding, and getting hit in the head isn't good for that. Very likely to get her to focus us, and that's good. This one also gives us a bit of flexibility (IC) in how we respond, either in staying up on the catwalk and making them catch balls with their faces or diving down.
[ ] Dive off the catwalk and start cracking skulls.
Again, incredibly likely to get us focused, and can intimidate Pirion with more presence than we might get on the catwalk, but commits to a brawl.
 
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