Warhammer Fantasy: Thirteen Tolls - An Apocalypse Quest

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Turn Two Results (Part 4) - Problems


You wait a few minutes before beginning your interrogation. Cassius has opened the kitchens – does he own this place? – and everyone was taking full advantage. Racks come out, hung with steaming flatbread, fresh tabbouleh, hummus, falafels, baba ghanouj. Wine flows freely – a sweet white – and you can't help but partake.

A strong sip gives you the confidence for your first question. You've decided to go from least to most escalatory. You turn to Floridus, and say, as casually as you can "Do you happen to know a Parlenius Patrocline?"

He grows a cruel grimace. "Unfortunately."

"You dislike him?"

"The few times I met him, yes. A most terrible habit of trying to answer your questions before you asked."

"Like he foresaw them?"

"If reading the files Catastrophic Risk keeps on you and then guessing constitutes clairvoyance, yes."

Kaginius interjects "I believe the Lodge of the Harvest Moon no longer has the gift of prophecy".

"At all?"

Floridus scoffs. "At the rate they were losing diviners, they better have or there'd hardly be a Lodge left to speak of. I've got twenty-three at Bimar alone, and who knows how many they've cooped up themselves."

"Are they mad?"

"Well, I do often boast of the qualities of our caretaking facilities, but Bimar is not yet a vacation destination – of course."

"How so?"

"Do you want a check up, o wise prophet? Do you have no faith that Morr will protect?"

You think of Sanguine and feel the scar on your nose. You look at Pelops, thin as a rake, eating a flatbread as big as his head. You think of Junius, and a cry to doubt.

"No."

Floridus looks genuinely surprised at that, which turns into the first authentic smile you've seen from him.
"Clever man. I won't humor you then, in both meanings of the word, I don't subscribe to that tart. From an autopsy – vascular dementia, at a massive scale. Curiously, no sign of stroke or any sort of reason for the deprivation. Through some unknown force, all the blood simply fled from their brains."

You suddenly recall that every time you wake up from your Tower dream, your mouth is full of blood.

"Have you seen anything like it before?" you ask.

"Yes, actually. With scryers, mostly, who try to see to widely and too far, mostly from my dear Flame – if we lack anything, it is not hubris. I theorize that the physical reaction to too much Aethyric energy trying to enter the brain – say, in the forms of a vision – is to try to preserve the mental structure by just flushing all the blood out of your head."

"Preserve it from what?"

"What else? Only one thing from an overrun of magic – even you clerics should know these things, you preach enough against them."

A daemon, then. A daemon in your head. You realize that every time you've fallen off the Tower in your sleep, you're always looking down, thanks to the Stranger's push. There is some great work happening behind you, that singes your back and makes your skull ring – but you always awake before you see it. You are suddenly very glad you decided to investigate the material before diving deeper into the spiritual. Is that what your brothers and the diviners of the Lodge tried to see? Something so great and terrible, it could manifest backwards through men's minds, something so fundamentally against the natural order the body's reaction was to try and kill itself before it was taken?

What the hell was it?

"Is there any way to stop that?" you ask, fairly desperate.

"Well," Floridus drawls. "In my medical opinion – just don't look!"



You're not sure you want to explicitly raise the Patrocline connection to your Order yet, so you decide to let the conversation wander a bit, then move on to your second question. You've got a decent idea of the man's motivation, at least. An inauthentic oracle at the head of an order who made half their money through telling the future, and suddenly unable to? You bet he'd be visiting anyone or anything that even hinted at foresight, just for a chance to figure out what they'd be doing wrong. Whether that would extend up to sabotage of a competitor, you're not sure – from what Floridus said, it seems seeing is enough. But speaking of sabotage…

"Have any of you read Siege?"

This time, Gregorius is the one who pipes up. "Horseshit!" he yells through a mouthful of hummus. "A perversion of the Red cause!"

You look about and see nobody else having taken any interest in your conversation, except Melissa. She is silent, but there is an odd gleam in her eyes.

"What would you say was particularly wrong with it?" you ask politely.

Gregorius pulls out a copy of the book – same binding and everything – and, flipping a page, thrusts it open towards you. You shut your eyes, and put your hand up to shield yourself before it's too late-

"What're you doing?" he asks.

"I was not aware the Morrite clergy did not so much appreciate the works of his Lady wife" says Kaginius, drolly.

Nobody seems to be reacting to anything but you. You feel no dark magic. You open one eye and see – a normal book. It's not blank, a totally normal text – some condemnation of Dwarven colonization efforts in the east, with various passages highlighted and disparagingly commented on in the margins.

Gregorius is looking at you like you're insane. You put your hand down, sheepishly.

"Forgive me – you just scared me."

"Scared you? Are people in the habit of attacking you with books?"

You pause for a second, and then make the decision to tell. Nothing good can come from more under a dark enchantment.

"Ditatis of Myrmidia –" and you see literally everyone in the room roll their eyes "gave me a cursed version of that book."

That perks interest. Gregorios has the grin of one experiencing great schadenfreude, Marcus of Solkan looks furious, and Melissa seems … thoughtful.

"In what way? Dark, chaotic?" Marcus asks.

"Dark – an enchantment to make me loyal to the Reds."

Gregorios spits out his drink, as Kaginius laughs.

"A miraculous show of support in recent polls, the papers said" the head priest of Verena titters. "Well, if you can't find a natural miracle, a home-made one is fine."

Gregorios has already turned to Salomon and Simeon and ordered the two gigantic men out of the restaurant.

"Find every copy we can – and for the sake of the gods, don't open them. It's late, so Furnace 16 in the Foundry of the Four Lions" he throws his copy to them. "Collect everyone you can find from all the members and burn the lot. Some of us" and he's clearly speaking to you, and moreso, Kaginius "have spent a lot of time on political education and can't have our authentic campaigning about our persuasive message go to waste because some two-bit enchanter had the dimmest idea this side of Ulthuan!". He stops, breathing hard. He's gone red as his party.

He turns properly to you. "Xenophon – thanks for the intel. We're in your debt. Ask for the UCACHM anytime, anywhere, we've got your back."

"Thank you" you say "but if I may ask – who?"

He slaps his forehead and sighs. "This is why I say we need more outreach with the temples – the United College of Apprentices, Conjurers, and Hedge Mages. Chief magical workers guild – you need something enchanted; we got you."

"Wonderful" you say, but you're mind's spinning a bit. This was targeted – Ditatis wanted you, specifically loyal. And not loyal to the Reds in general, you presume – loyal to his branch, which seems opposed to Gregorios' union side? Gods, you think, is there no organization in this city not beset by factionalism? You look to Pelops, now happily digging into a fig cake. Well, a win for Morr, you suppose.



Your rice is almost finished, so you decide to leap into the breach.

"I'll tell you what I've seen" you offer "on two conditions. First, you tell me what you know about what's going to happen to these Cities. Second-" and you give a hard look to Melissa "you tell me exactly went down that night."

There's a beat. "I accept." Melissa says, somber.

Loreley speaks up, clearly irritated "Hey, hey – I didn't agree to open my heart to this undertaker!"

Melissa turns to her, with eyes as hard as steel. "Then you can leave. If the world's ending, we must know. There's no point to revolution if we're all blown to high heaven the day after."

Loreley grunts but is silent.

Surprisingly, Ambrose is the one to speak next. His eyes are really irritatingly pretty. Gold-specks in dark green, like buttercups in summer fields. He's talking. You should pay attention.

"-so to phrase it in another way, the Princeps is doing a Great Work. That I'm sure of – a ritual of some type, beyond any that I or Floridus or Kaginius have ever heard of. He's been in major consultation with that Nekeharan statute-maker, the one making the Ushabti this week – S-nefer-Ka"

"A good man" Gregorios offers "a loyal Red."

Ambrose looks dubious. "Well, regardless of his political loyalties, he's involved, deeply so. You know anything about that?" He looks to you.

You choose to hedge. "The Funerary Cult has some similarities to Morrite practice" you guess "but I'll say what I know once you're done."

Ambrose seems mollified and continues. "Beyond the Princeps, there's what Kakram's told us" And the Dwarf in the corner, who has not said a word, simply nods. "The Sons of Skavor are digging to access – something buried, something powerful."

Kakram looks at you then, straight in the eyes, and a rune glitters on a medal hidden beneath his chain. You know then, somehow without words:

The Sons of Skavor want the Glittering Realm.

Ambrose continues, not noticing anything "They tried at Petrification Day – they've been trying for years – but they've failed every time. Fafnir's getting old, now, though, and pretty well stone. He's probably getting desperate."

You nod, faintly. You had always presumed, like Morr's Realm, the Dwarven Underworld was not literally underground, but beyond this realm entire. You think of Skavor, petrified, and an apology deep below. Wasn't Gazul his father? Were they trying to … go home?

Ambrose is still talking, undeterred. "Outside of that, there's the Elvish encroachments in the North, though that doesn't seem to be any sort of crisis yet – there's Floridus' monkeying in Temple-"

The Patriarch of Truth snorts "As goes all politics-"

"Speaking of, the election, which seems … uneasy; a lot of ratfucking going on, but no real violence, which is pretty good for Tylos ... and I guess, if Marcus or Cassius wants to speak about their plans?"

The two warriors look to each other. What appears to be an entire conversation is done with a single raised eyebrow from Cassius, with Marcus going from a totally neutral expression to a grin barely containing some maniac excitement. "Friend of the House – that's half why you were invited here, you know – come to the Casino, and we'll read you in."

"Duly noted" you say.

"That should be all then" says Ambrose. "A lot of loose threads. We're used to being rather the threat, I think, rather than seeing one coming up against us. The League's planning –"and he looks around to see if anyone's going to protest his giving of this intel, only for when no one to, to continue "er, ah … a contingency action after the election. Needless to say, it will greatly depend on who wins the result."

"Oh, out with it" Loreley shouts. "He's seen us all here, and Melissa's little song was not exactly secretive. If the Whites win, we're planning a coup. If the Reds do, we're planning a purge. That's all there is to it."

Kaginius looks a bit pale, but nods.

Ambrose sighs. "Yes, sure, out with it. We've got here, the Reds, the soldiery, the freedmen of the House, Temple, the Cloisters, most of the temples, and the working classes of Thunderdome, Summerland, and the Shambles. We think we have a good shot at it, all things considered."

"Why?" you ask.

Ambrose squeezes his eyes shut as if ashamed. "Ask the rest of these bastards separately. Me, it's dead easy. I want the Princeps dead."

What?

"I don't want to tell you why. But know that I swore it, and I will have it."

And some bit of divinity cracks around him to make you know that he means true.



"I suppose it's my turn now" Melissa says, her features carefully composed. She looks like she's trying hard not to cry, although you don't know if that's acting or no.

"My husband was … inspired by the Goddess Myrmidia. She whispered in his ear this play – the Righteous Spear. I had a part, of course – Adah - and the rest of our regular company – really, our family."

She pauses to take a breath.

"You were in it since it was written. I don't know what that means. I didn't know you – as far as I know, Junius didn't know you, I think, or at least he mentioned nothing till he made me sent you the invitation. It must have been the Goddess herself, taking an interest. But the script was the only thing that stayed the same. All our rehearsals; no violence beyond you know, acting. Junius talked about it waking up people – no, that's not quite right. He spoke of waking up the Princeps."

"Did he ever say what from?" you ask.

"Never. I asked, once, what the meaning of it was. I presumed, you know, something about the evil of war, that the Goddess Myrmidia compels us to peace. But you know what he said? He said the Goddess wants the Son of Tyleus to remember her love. I couldn't make heads or tails of it. But my husband was ever the temperamental artist, so I kept mum. The night before the opening, he comes to me – he didn't sleep the night before at all, terrible nightmare - and tells me not to come. I ask why, he says – he thinks the understudy was better! We argue. I leave. I don't come back until that night you see us, where I wish him good luck. He tells me to leave again. You see us, and that's the rest."

Gregorios speaks next "We were invited, too, until we were not, night of. Ruddy strange. He was a member of this group and all, but went silent, maybe two weeks before? Melissa said at the time it was pre-show nerves, so we thought nothing of it."

Floridus then says "I took the opportunity to study the enchantment while we were trapped in it. Everybody on that stage was ensconced just as we were – puppets."

"So Junius wasn't acting on his own accord?" you query.

"That's the very curious bit" replies Floridus. "He was and he wasn't. He must have been the one to set up the ritual, at least I presume, but it bound him all the same once the play started. And despite him starting the damn thing, I saw him resisting, wholly, until he broke the geas on him with that final monologue. At that last moment, he was free again, and could throw that spear where he liked."

"And he still chose to fling it at the Princeps?

"That's what it seemed like."

"And the redirect?"

"Perfectly divine."

You think of a dying Junius, and what he said.

"She changed it on me."



You have an idea now of what happened, or at least the vague outline, helped by Junius' own last rant. Myrmidia gives inspiration for a play to Junius "to show her love" to the "heirs of Tyleus", meaning the Princeps and his line, which claim direct male-line descendance. At some point, seemingly quite late in rehearsals, Junius learns something else about Myrmidia's intent, potentially from the Goddess herself. This, for some reason, means he sends most of his allies away (except Floridus?) from the event, but not enough for himself to participate. He willingly participates in most of the ritual, except for the last part, where he presumably redirected the spear away from its target, after which Myrmidia, presumably, or less probably, another divinity, redirects it to its original (?) target.

But why this rigmarole? Why the giant ceremony, why the play specifically about how power engenders terrible sacrifice? Was it a threat? A threat against what? The Princeps' project? And if that was so terrible, why not go for the Princeps himself? Was Myrmidia … trying to join the Princeps' work? What did that even mean? And why kill Marvos, of all victims?

You need to know what's happening in that Tower.

But before that, you have some cryptic messages of your own to give. You look at the awaiting crowd. "First thing, not a vision I had, I simply saw it – the Princeps consumes souls. Is this generally known?"

"Yes." says Floridus.

"No." says Marcus.

"What?" they say at the same time.

"I presume you mean you sensed some oddity in his own soul's composition?" Floridus asks.

"Yes" you say, not wanting to give anything away.

"That's Summerland's youth potions. Non-sentients, don't be alarmed."

"Oh."

"That's what's in them?" Loreley asks. "No wonder the bastards cost me an arm and a leg." You look at her, and her soul – though perhaps a little frayed at the edges, is not bright like the Princeps. You choose to keep your mouth shut. Melissa might actually be crying now, dabbing at her face with a handkerchief. You doubt the news that her husband might have been eaten would not be well received.

"Well then" you offer the awkward silence "my turn to share proper then. Here's what I know…"

WHAT DO YOU TELL THE LEAGUE OF SALVATION?

[-] the truth.

This would be Xenophon being absolutely honest. This would include the full content of both visions, and include no commentary on their potential meaning.

[-] a truth [Write-in].

This would be Xenophon giving the content of both visions, while redacting any information of your choice, and also giving any interpretations of anything you would like. This can be very general, from "the Fable vision means Myrmidia is opposed to the Princeps' project" to the very specific – "the Elf in the Tower vision is Lady Tophania".

[-] a lie. [Write-in].

This would be Xenophon fully making something up.
 
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Do you happen to know a Parlenius Patrocline?
Hmm... not quite what I'd hoped for, though I suppose being told the man is obviously evil and traffics with daemons would have been too much to hope for. As is, it's still up in the air as to whether he's just a corrupt git who got lucky or an active saboteur.

That said, we did get some useful information regarding the dangers of being a seer. Not sure it'll come in handy, but it's neat to know.
Have any of you read Siege?
Very useful. Also concerning. Still, we got a connection with what sounds like a pretty important group and some confirmation they weren't in on it.

Or are extremely good actors, but if we start down that path then the next vote may as well be to ditch the Twin Cities.
"I'll tell you what I've seen" you offer "on two conditions. First, you tell me what you know about what's going to happen to these Cities. Second-" and you give a hard look to Melissa "you tell me exactly went down that night."
So, this wound up giving some information. Thanks to our sight, we have confirmed that Ambrose is not a loyal servant of the Princeps. Whether that means he's trustworthy is another question, but it's good to know.

We also got a new person to investigate, S-nefer-Ka. It's also a fairly promising lead, even if this person doesn't know what the Princeps is up to, it would still likely result in some actionable intelligence.

There's also some knowledge on what the Skavorites are up to, and a link to the apology we saw. We're missing a lot of puzzle pieces to that, though perhaps the sealed hole will be something useful to Kakram.

Regarding the play, I'd hoped we'd have had confirmation of the actual target. As it is, we still don't know who it was intended for. We know Junius went rogue to try and kill the Princeps then and there but as Xenophon notes we don't know if Marvos was the actual target either. I think we'll need to investigate her to try and work out something out there.

First thing, not a vision I had, I simply saw it – the Princeps consumes souls. Is this generally known?
Well, this explains the rats and possibly-Ahalt and Justinia(?) seemingly working to save them. Add Summerland to the investigation pile, though at least I feel they're not as high a priority as Marvos and S-nefer-Ka.

Seems the Princeps has gone further than people realise though.


Anyway, regarding the vote, I'm in favour of going with the truth. I'm not in a good position to try and come up with a write-in, though I am in favour of some commentary.

@Graf Tzarogy, just to clarify, would the basic truth vote result in Xenophon confirming we saw what happened to Junius' soul or would we need to specify that in a write-in?
 
I definitely want to editorialize "The rats are not just a metaphor, I am extremely confident there is something up about literal rats."

"Princeps also eats human souls directly via his sword" maybe something we say privately to someone after our explanation, just to have it out there without going "yeah your husband's soul got eaten by the princeps."
 
I definitely want to editorialize "The rats are not just a metaphor, I am extremely confident there is something up about literal rats."
I mean, Beastmen exists, so Xeno can draw a literal connection of a Rat or Rodent variation of Beastmen. Whether, said Beastmen will be 'born,' soon, already exist and being used, or 'in danger,' from said ritual is another matter.
 
Goddamn, there are a lot of knives in the air, and every time we blink more actors reveal themselves. No doubt the 13th Bell will coincide with a gambit pileup of unimaginable proportions. How appropriate for the genesis of the Skaven.
 
Relooking at the first vision:

Below you, chaos reigns. A veritable phantasmagoria marches on the Tower. An old man rides a dying bull, becoming younger as he sups blood from its neck. Weeping Myrmidia guides a legionnaire who whispers to a skull. A scorpion follows, dripping blood from its tail. An elven lady dances lightly to an unseen tune, five corpses chained to her waist dragging behind. A giant cockroach skitters after her. Behind, is an old dwarf, petrified up to the neck. His body is wrapped with explosives, for which he holds the trigger in his mouth. A golden eagle flies above, laughing as it drops marbles of perfect light that shatter on the revelers. A man, his skin sloughing off to reveal malevolent green crystal, holds a dove in a cage of swords. Nagash presents the bleeding head of a sphinx. A tall, red haired man staggers forward, bound in thirty chains, his back stabbed through with fifty kitchen knives, in his hands, thunder, trapped in a jar.

It suddenly occurs to me that we can't rule out these may in fact be figures marching in OPPOSITION to The Shadowed Figure In The Tower. Myrmidia guiding the legionnaire stands out the most, but even the old man riding a dying bull brings to mind what we've been told about bull-based blood sacrifice, associated with noted-non-chaotic-gods Marigleo and Geheb, and also the seeming attempt by ahalt to save the souls of rats.

For that reason, I'd hesitate to try to connect any of these to specific figures.

Also "Elven lady with chained corpses" screams Ereth Khial, now that I think about it.

So, my tentative thoughts:
[-] a truth [Write-in].
-[-] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[-] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[-] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[-] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.
 
Nice quest with a interesting concept i haven't seen anywhere before

[X] the truth.
 
Answer questions before you asked.
Tbf, if I could see the future I would absolutely do the same.

I theorize that the physical reaction to too much Aethyric energy trying to enter the brain – say, in the forms of a vision – is to try to preserve the mental structure by just flushing all the blood out of your head."
Interesting. If this is true, does that ability evolved naturally or was it added by the Old Ones to their creations? It implies the soul can command physiological functions or that the brain can detect magic. The mécanisme is probably a constriction of the brain's blood vessel. Investigating the exact process would be super interesting… if there wasn't an apocalypse coming.

"Is there any way to stop that?" you ask, fairly desperate.

"Well," Floridus drawls. "In my medical opinion – just don't look!"
No shit Sherlock🙄

An inauthentic oracle at the head of an order who made half their money through telling the future, and suddenly unable to?
Yeah, I'd be worried too. I wonder what is blocking their future sight.

Ask for the UCACHM anytime, anywhere, we've got your back."
That's nice to have if we need info, or some low-level fighters.

He's been in major consultation with that Nekeharan statute-maker, the one making the Ushabti this week
In our first vision there's a sphinx led to the Tower by Nagash. Maybe that guy is a Necromancer, trying to somehow replicate what he did? Nagash killed his gods, so maybe he's trying the same?

The Sons of Skavor want the Glittering Realm.
That's pretty ambitious of them. Maybe it's going to interfere with that ushabti guy intent of killing gods?
"He's seen us all here, and Melissa's little song was not exactly secretive. If the Whites win, we're planning a coup. If the Reds do, we're planning a purge.
Interesting to know they're against both sides.

"My husband was … inspired by the Goddess Myrmidia. She whispered in his ear this play – the Righteous Spear.
He said the Goddess wants the Son of Tyleus to remember her love.
So it's supposedly Myrmidia Herself who asked for that play. Maybe she tried to convince to Princeps to stop what he was doing, and the guy with the javelin wanted to make sure he stopped.

This was targeted – Ditatis wanted you, specifically loyal.
Crap. We really should look out for more targeted dangers. At least now we gave something useful to those rebels so our credibility will be greater.

That would need to be specified.
Why? Isn't that the true?


That said, congratulations on having your story recommended on the website:)


It suddenly occurs to me that we can't rule out these may in fact be figures marching in OPPOSITION to The Shadowed Figure In The Tower. Myrmidia guiding the legionnaire stands out the most, but even the old man riding a dying bull brings to mind what we've been told about bull-based blood sacrifice, associated with noted-non-chaotic-gods Marigleo and Geheb, and also the seeming attempt by ahalt to save the souls of rats.
It could indeed be that they trying to oppose the Tower, but not necessarily. The petrified dwarf could be the rebellious dwarf, and either he marches to support or he tries to oppose the Princeos for his own reasons.

Concerning the dove in a cage of swords held by a man with watpstone in him, I'm thinking that it could be Shalya used somehow. And wasn't there an apologetic deity under the city, trapped close to warpstone?
 
So, my tentative thoughts:
I pretty much agree with these suggestions.

I do think we should add a note on Tophania and her relation to "An elven lady dances lightly to an unseen tune, five corpses chained to her waist dragging behind. A giant cockroach skitters after her."? Saying something like she might be the one of the things highlighted in the vision, but we don't actually have all that much information on her. There is the mention of a bundle of magic wrapped five-fold around itself which does seem to link her directly to the prophecy (though I'd be more convinced if it turned out she was a five time widower).

So, something like:
The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. You also have a suspicion that Lady Tophania is related in some manner to the dancing elf, explaining the bundle of magic found in her husband, though you are unsure if she is literally the elf or not. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.

Concerning the dove in a cage of swords held by a man with watpstone in him, I'm thinking that it could be Shalya used somehow. And wasn't there an apologetic deity under the city, trapped close to warpstone?
I'd think it was something to do with the state we saw her temple in when we went to look for help. I would hazard a guess that whatever is at the bottom of the sealed hole is something else.
 
I'd think it was something to do with the state we saw her temple in when we went to look for help. I would hazard a guess that whatever is at the bottom of the sealed hole is something else.
That could be it, but then what is the trapped god? Gazul maybe? His realm is Glittering after all, like the diamond we saw. And the dwarves are trying to find it.
 
I do think we should add a note on Tophania and her relation to "An elven lady dances lightly to an unseen tune, five corpses chained to her waist dragging behind. A giant cockroach skitters after her."? Saying something like she might be the one of the things highlighted in the vision, but we don't actually have all that much information on her. There is the mention of a bundle of magic wrapped five-fold around itself which does seem to link her directly to the prophecy (though I'd be more convinced if it turned out she was a five time widower).
To be perfectly honest I want to present ourselves as a more confident prophet than we actually are, that's why I'm uninclined to say anything about Tophania before we're more confident one way or the other. The more we go "the elf MAYBE has something to do with this other elf I ran into" the less we're able to go "the rats are literal rats. Source: trust me bro."

I don't think this will be the only time we talk to the league of salvation or at least it's individual members. When we're more confident about her, hopefully we can point her out.
 
I've really enjoyed reading this story, @Graf Tzarogy! Thank you for writing it!

Xenophon being distracted by Ambrose is cute and relatable, thanks for that :)

Want constructive criticism or nah?

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I think we should be a little cautious about what we reveal to this crowd. They're questionable allies and we don't know how they or our uncertain enemies will use our information.

OTOH, we shouldn't lie because there's a hysh mage right there and getting caught out now or later could be disastrous.

I think it would be better to be direct with Melissa about the soul-drinking. It may be important information and it could harm us or this little coalition if she is kept in the dark and finds out later or feels coddled or patronised.
 
[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.
 
Another observation: these folks are either desperate; plan to kill us or have terrible operational security.

They've brought us and our child soldier to dinner and identified the key members of their treasonous conspiracy. They've done all that while knowing that the dictator will likely listen to what we have to say and that we have a separate right to address the senate.
 
[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.

Another observation: these folks are either desperate; plan to kill us or have terrible operational security.

They've brought us and our child soldier to dinner and identified the key members of their treasonous conspiracy. They've done all that while knowing that the dictator will likely listen to what we have to say and that we have a separate right to address the senate.
Imo they're desperate. They think the apocalypse is coming, and their whole society is corrupted to the core. They don't have many options, so when they saw us trying to change things they jumped on the occasion.
 
[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.
 
[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opportunity presents itself, tell them that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junius's soul via his weapon.
 
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[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.
 
[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.
 
[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.
 
[X] a truth [Write-in].
-[X] The first vision: Relate in full, but editorialize caution in interpretation. It is unclear to what degree any of the figures are being warned about, or are instead marching on the shadowed figuring in the tower being warned about. Also, the rats are literal rats, for reasons you will get to.
-[X] The second vision: Again relate in full, but now note that this was right before the deal with a mouse beastman assassinating someone and all the news about Ratcatchers springing up, which is PART of why you think the rats are literal rats.
-[X] The "third vision": Relate what you saw under the city as if it were a vision that happened when you touched the divine artefact. This is where you become absolutely sure the rats are literal and not metaphorical rats.
-[X] An aside: if an opprotunity presents itself, tell someone that's not Melissa that it's not just nonsentients from potions, you literally saw the Princeps consume Junias's soul via his weapon.

So, known factions so far:

-The Princeps, soul eating sorcerer and master of the Tower
- The League of Salvation, revolutionaries that have deep connections to the Red factions and are aware that something apocalyptic is about to happen
- The Reds around the high priest of Myrmidia, oppose the Princeps but tried to specifically control us by giving us a cursed book
- The mutants below the city, they save the rats from the rat catchers and seem to be related to Anhalt
- The descendants of Skavor, dwarves that are exiled from main dwarven society and seemingly attempt to breach the walls to the dwarven after life

Did I miss anybody get something wrong?
 
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