Blooming From A Seed To A Tree (Project Moon Crossover Quest)
- Thread starter WilyMachineKing1
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- Crossover Mature
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- project moon shenanigans
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
Vote and find out.
*expecting either a Master easy to*
*was* not is, past tense narration.
*had ever seen*, same idea as above.
Not sure what you wanted to say at the beginning, *She approached him* perhaps?
*helped pick him up*
*that the one*
*her* not *here* here (heh).
A little nitpick, this can be considered correct but sounds better if you add a *her* before thanks, *After saying her thanks*.
*decorated it was*
*the words: Manager Quarters.*
Don't remember the rule that says when you need a : instead of a , but I'm pretty sure it's one of those cases.
No need for the *And* here, this is a new sentence, a new action.
Meanwhile, Ayin is regretting everything in the background.
So, normally I would have pointed out that you used she the first time to talk about X then he the second time, but given that Sheherazade described X as he/she/them, I'm not sure this is a mistake.
Little tense problems here: *woke up* *where you were* and *as you saw that you were….*
And all the votes should then begin by *In*, but given that people probably already voted…
If you go fast you can change all the votes to begin by *In*, in order: *In a room*x2, *In what you* and *In the same place*.
While I am sure the police is offering, I al also pretty sure it's an officer doing the offering.
The teenagers are chatting, not shattering each other… I hope.
And the name of the corresponding arc makes me at least a little curious, though I'm not sure I want to go for it depending on how much it distracts us from the main Zero plot.
Nope, nope nope nope, not touching that vote with a ten foot pole, we really don't need an *escape from the crazy magus* arc.
Probably by being moved around while we were sleeping in the waking world.
[x] In a room where you see a group of teenagers gathering around a circle and chatting with each other, with one noticing you with an excited smile. (Story Arc: Misfit Brigade of the Clock Tower)
Curiosity is taking its due.
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WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
DvulikiuGolod
You are gold, I am gold... Are we all gold?
[x] In a room where you see a group of teenagers gathering around a circle and chatting with each other, with one noticing you with an excited smile. (Story Arc: Misfit Brigade of the Clock Tower)
[X] To a room where you see a group of teenagers gathering around a circle and chattering with each other, with one noticing you with an excited smile. (Story Arc: Misfit Brigade of the Clock Tower)
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- Location
- USA
[X] A room where you were laying on a bed, where the door opened to revel a police officer with some food and drinks
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WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
Yo, this slaps. Good taste Merc.
[x] A room where you were laying on a bed, where the door opened to revel a police offer with some food and drinks
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
You know where this is from?
Yeah, it's a Russian musical, named [The Last Trial/Последнее Испытание] inspired by the DragonLance book series. Very pretty!
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WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
Huh, sounds fun.
Typhon: Crown of Roots
- Location
- USA
[x] A room where you were laying on a bed, where the door opened to revel a police offer with some food and drinks
- Location
- Earth
- Pronouns
- He/Him/They/Them
[X] A room where you were laying on a bed, where the door opened to revel a police officer with some food and drinks
Kalibrius
God of reflection
- Location
- The other side of the mirror
All we can say on this morning for ourselves in regards to the one of the options
There's a reason they're called misfits
El mellow has his students and it has been noted some mages don't operate normally for one reason or another, the ones who don't fit in to the mages system as it is..... seeds left to the stony dirt and mud and untended, potential left to burn in the pyre without a chance to bloom...... but in said potential a chance for a paradigm shift
An age of urban legends and myth that may lead to a new path
They need only a bit of Light to guide them these wayward souls who never bloomed
And @Mercy wonderful art and apt, one could say Xs crown unlike normal ones doesn't point outwards but points inwards for good and ill and this embodies that well
And I can imagine the Thrones of Emptiness giving it to X as it's metaphorical sign of approval
Chaldea has its round table, you have your thrones....... fragmented and incomplete as it is without the other templates to bring it to fruition in the Shadows of the facility
You technically have access to 2 department
Employee Quarters which though requires work to be a department like the others does offer odd benefits in comparison to normal ones and half of Central command A
The abnormalities in your employ being the Thrones of Emptiness as it is in Employee Quarters and Training Dummy Rabbit in Central Command
Though don't assume their positions are set in stone
If a unit is open it can be moved their admittedly
Edit The Throne is also technically a manifestation of you your Authority of the roots of the tree if you will, and Authority in the realms you walk, given shape by them, Ayin has 1 sin, carmen has Whitenight, You have your Throne..... it is not an abnormality as the city thinks of them but exists as such regardless much like X themselves though human never got to live as such except into the barest senses of the word
There's a reason they're called misfits
El mellow has his students and it has been noted some mages don't operate normally for one reason or another, the ones who don't fit in to the mages system as it is..... seeds left to the stony dirt and mud and untended, potential left to burn in the pyre without a chance to bloom...... but in said potential a chance for a paradigm shift
An age of urban legends and myth that may lead to a new path
They need only a bit of Light to guide them these wayward souls who never bloomed
And @Mercy wonderful art and apt, one could say Xs crown unlike normal ones doesn't point outwards but points inwards for good and ill and this embodies that well
And I can imagine the Thrones of Emptiness giving it to X as it's metaphorical sign of approval
Chaldea has its round table, you have your thrones....... fragmented and incomplete as it is without the other templates to bring it to fruition in the Shadows of the facility
You technically have access to 2 department
Employee Quarters which though requires work to be a department like the others does offer odd benefits in comparison to normal ones and half of Central command A
The abnormalities in your employ being the Thrones of Emptiness as it is in Employee Quarters and Training Dummy Rabbit in Central Command
Though don't assume their positions are set in stone
If a unit is open it can be moved their admittedly
Edit The Throne is also technically a manifestation of you your Authority of the roots of the tree if you will, and Authority in the realms you walk, given shape by them, Ayin has 1 sin, carmen has Whitenight, You have your Throne..... it is not an abnormality as the city thinks of them but exists as such regardless much like X themselves though human never got to live as such except into the barest senses of the word
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- Location
- England
[x] In a room where you see a group of teenagers gathering around a circle and chatting with each other, with one noticing you with an excited smile. (Story Arc: Misfit Brigade of the Clock Tower)
[X] In a room where you see a group of teenagers gathering around a circle and chatting with each other, with one noticing you with an excited smile. (Story Arc: Misfit Brigade of the Clock Tower)