WilyMachineKing1
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Blooming From A Seed To A Tree (Project Moon Crossover Quest)
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- Crossover Mature
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- project moon shenanigans
Typo: their free will, because it's definitely by his will they are doing this.
Too many comas not enough periods, I think it would read better if you wrote:
*Luckily, it seems it works as when he glances back, another child in hand, he didn't bother to count. If anything, it seems he was trying to get more and more children before, for whatever purpose it is was, and you knew that it was bound to be a gruesome one.*
That makes the sentence far less wandering than it was.
One too many now in short succession, you should remove the second one.
*Than what you suspected*, that flows better. In fact, I think I've never seen your phrasing before.
I mean, for this guy, that's exactly what he did.
I think it would flow a little better with the next part if you finished with a : instead of a period there.
Either missing *way* at the end or a *that* too much, as is it's awkward.
Too many repetition of tower there and some awkward phrasing, would flow better as:
*One more was thrown into a pile of a crude structure, the bodies bloodied, battered and forming a high tower, reminding you absentmindedly of another tower you saw.*
Wrong tense: moved or screamed.
One soon too much, should remove the second one.
Well, for them I think it's a coffe break while making an art gallery.
Technically, this is the weakest option, a TETH in a group of HE with even a WAW presented, and yet, and yet, it represents the most powerful attack of them all, as well as the first steps in a direction I am more interested in than all the others, with the strong *destroying sin* theme of the abnormality, as such:
[x] People have been committing sins since long ago. "Why do they commit sins, knowing it's wrong?"
Birb unite!
Having only one of the options able to win is too close to a trap vote for me to entertain the idea, I trust the QM enough to think that they all can, the choice is not on that, not at this juncture, not presented like this.
Well, I would prefer, Burrowing Heaven or White Night but they're not there, so, Birb it is, not even for apocalypse Bird, just because I like little bird in and on itself.
At least you didn't say sorry there.
Yes, absolutely, the birds did nothing wrong! Now excuse me, I have children to SAVE.
Actually, let me put another reason I want little bird: it is innocent in a way, the kind of innocence that kills without remorse and don't understand death, and I like that, it makes us stands out, it makes the other servants in the war look at us and think *what the fuck is wrong with her?* (yes, her, no way they're going to think we're a boy at first glance).
And it is a pity we don't have Big Birds in the line up, we could have truly SAVED these children.
Careful, in the city, the answer may very well be *very well*, followed by doing just that, even for giant lasers.
*Proceeds to only summon the servants that will make people do a double take when seeing their class, like Nightingale the calm berserker or Charles Baggage, the very imposing caster*
Hmmmm…..
They all are very easy to classify as vilain, with the only exception of Berserker's master, and even then, the servant will probably give Quennie too many flashbacks to act rationally around him.
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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Thanks for the Help Nyarky. Will do my best to edit what I have now thanks to your help.
Kalibrius
God of reflection
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Currently you'll get access to a servant class template soon enough......Typo: their free will, because it's definitely by his will they are doing this.
Too many comas not enough periods, I think it would read better if you wrote:
*Luckily, it seems it works as when he glances back, another child in hand, he didn't bother to count. If anything, it seems he was trying to get more and more children before, for whatever purpose it is was, and you knew that it was bound to be a gruesome one.*
That makes the sentence far less wandering than it was.
One too many now in short succession, you should remove the second one.
*Than what you suspected*, that flows better. In fact, I think I've never seen your phrasing before.
I mean, for this guy, that's exactly what he did.
I think it would flow a little better with the next part if you finished with a : instead of a period there.
Either missing *way* at the end or a *that* too much, as is it's awkward.
Too many repetition of tower there and some awkward phrasing, would flow better as:
*One more was thrown into a pile of a crude structure, the bodies bloodied, battered and forming a high tower, reminding you absentmindedly of another tower you saw.*
Wrong tense: moved or screamed.
One soon too much, should remove the second one.
Well, for them I think it's a coffe break while making an art gallery.
Technically, this is the weakest option, a TETH in a group of HE with even a WAW presented, and yet, and yet, it represents the most powerful attack of them all, as well as the first steps in a direction I am more interested in than all the others, with the strong *destroying sin* theme of the abnormality, as such:
[x] People have been committing sins since long ago. "Why do they commit sins, knowing it's wrong?"
Birb unite!
Having only one of the options able to win is too close to a trap vote for me to entertain the idea, I trust the QM enough to think that they all can, the choice is not on that, not at this juncture, not presented like this.
Well, I would prefer, Burrowing Heaven or White Night but they're not there, so, Birb it is, not even for apocalypse Bird, just because I like little bird in and on itself.
At least you didn't say sorry there.
Yes, absolutely, the birds did nothing wrong! Now excuse me, I have children to SAVE.
Actually, let me put another reason I want little bird: it is innocent in a way, the kind of innocence that kills without remorse and don't understand death, and I like that, it makes us stands out, it makes the other servants in the war look at us and think *what the fuck is wrong with her?* (yes, her, no way they're going to think we're a boy at first glance).
And it is a pity we don't have Big Birds in the line up, we could have truly SAVED these children.
Careful, in the city, the answer may very well be *very well*, followed by doing just that, even for giant lasers.
*Proceeds to only summon the servants that will make people do a double take when seeing their class, like Nightingale the calm berserker or Charles Baggage, the very imposing caster*
Hmmmm…..
They all are very easy to classify as vilain, with the only exception of Berserker's master, and even then, the servant will probably give Quennie too many flashbacks to act rationally around him.
You want more than caster
You'll have to beat the others
And for why they would be eccentric
Do remember my comment from earlier
Fairytale, Scripts, Novels, Movies
All stories connected to eachother and suspended by thin silk threads in the void
Not an exact quoting
But it gives a clue as to what will come first to you
It's a matter of interpretation but servants will likely call back to this here one way or another
Now if you excuse me I will be turning in this 10:56 Alaska time and likely have a busy day
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I have an idea for Funeral of Dead Butterflies or Punishing Bird, so if either of them wins, I'll be satisfied.
[x] People have been committing sins since long ago. "Why do they commit sins, knowing it's wrong?"
[X] Where does one go when they die?
[x] People have been committing sins since long ago. "Why do they commit sins, knowing it's wrong?"
[X] Where does one go when they die?
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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You tease me you tease me you naughty naughty..... Person. I ain't have anything against genderfluid people damn is it hard to make a good naughty naughty boy joke.
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Just use a swear of choice instead!
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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.....That is a loaded guy but alright. You naughty pussycat.
Kalibrius
God of reflection
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(Wears a train conductor uniform and bird mask)
PECKING AUTHORS OF FLUID NATURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Goodnight
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Don't hear that one often, so thank you for the change of pace.
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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Yeah, had to use your Avatar, who is probably from Arknights, to help em with that.
WilyMachineKing1
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[X] Where does one go when they die?
Dual butterfly pistols with two types of damage are good. White gun damage could theoretically counter Gilles and his Lovecraft tentacles insanity and good non-lethal weapon option. Black gun for opposite of non-lethal.
Magic stick would be cool, but this ain't the thematically appropriate part of Fate franchise for that.
Dual butterfly pistols with two types of damage are good. White gun damage could theoretically counter Gilles and his Lovecraft tentacles insanity and good non-lethal weapon option. Black gun for opposite of non-lethal.
Magic stick would be cool, but this ain't the thematically appropriate part of Fate franchise for that.
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Also I was just thinking about it, and FoDB probably represents X realizing that they are out of the script so that there are now consequences for actions (Where does one go when they die? In the facility right back to where they were, here things are permanent.). And for punishing bird X maintains his previous innocence, he reacts as he would when the facility went into each of the trumpets.
you know, it's all very interesting, reasoning about the impact of anomalies on our psyche later and all that ... But I became interested, but how other lessons of sefir would affect X, which ended up in another world (For example, Rationality from Yesod. They blurted we'd talk about how obvious Angela's desire must have been to us... Who was literally telling us her intentions, and the guilt of knowing that even with all her efforts... We were still following the prepared path. And still... Even when we asked her directly, she only answered evasively. Too many times we let her down for her to risk. And no matter how much we apologized to her, they meant very little from us. And then they are in free time you started to just subject every action to hard judgment and just to think about it, but you continued to act. And... It was really nice to just get angry, and just... Not to be responsible for people. death and people continue. It's really nice not to be held responsible, even if not for long. You know yourself too well to believe this lull will last. It just doesn't feel right to NOT be responsible but... As long as there's a break, you'll take it. It's just the law of common sense (and... you just wanted to relive that memory that came to you so badly in your dreams. Just lie down on the grass, close your eyes, and let yourself disappear for a while. Only this time you want to experience it yourself.. This was remembered as something pleasant) (Of the upper Sephira, Yesod is my favorite. I don't really know why, but the fact that even after his meltdown, he makes a remark about our clothes at the end of his speech... I can't keep my smiles.. It's just... Such a typical Yesod... Never change dude. Just not in this little thing))
Kalibrius
God of reflection
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I do hate to say it but you would not get a magic stick
Guns become something else for melee..........
If the name Zophie rings any bells you can guess what it is
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WizWitcherly
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You know, I could understand disliking Binah (Considering that she actually is a murderous pet psychopath of the Head), but I never understood the people who disliked Yesod and Tiphereth.
It shows that someone didn't really care about the characters, the story, and that one hasn't made the effort to understand anything at all. And it happens more often than one might think.
Yesod might seem mean and rude, but he does care under all the sharp words and corrections. He's tough to X and everyone he interacts with because he cares, hiding a deep subconscious uncertainty and fear because of what keeps happening to those he bonded with.
So I can understand why you like Yesod, he's rather likeable once one understands his motives and past.
WilyMachineKing1
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Funnily enough, do plan to do a Yesod X in Cyberpunk later on. And Yes, I like all the Sephirah in the game. Even Binah the crazy bird lady. Also for the bird voters who wants bib.
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRF0UEKL_KE
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WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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Why is this so accurate if this vote wins.
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Ryonosuke (OR however you spell that name): "What kind of bird is that?!"
X: "Isn't this normal? Every bird I encounter kills someone in some shape, way, or form."