Miracles at World's End

[X]Plan: Wrong Side of the (Record) Tracks
-[X]Miracle Alias: Black Heart
-[X]Name: Tadamasa Fusae
-[X]Gender
--[X]Girl
-[X]Loving Family
-[X]Yakuza Family
-[X]Indie Singer
-[X]Delinquent
-[X]Exploitative Family
-[X]Rival

A gangster magical girl very much appeals to me. With emotions as our power, I'm interested in setting up complex personal relationships from the get-go. I think coming to the Miracle world as an outsider from a disrespected and feared place is a good start. I can see the Rival as being someone really well-meaning who is into truth and justice and probably would be the main character in another story.

Combining Yakuza, Exploitative, and Loving family traits has potential to create deeply messed up personal life, full of genuine care but also crushing expectation. Maybe we see Miracle duties as something of relief compared to family life?

I chose the family name Tadamasa for its historical Yakuza connections and the personal name Fusae, which I'm told means blessing. Black Heart was chosen because black symbolizes anger (among other things) in the Japanese tradition and I imagine that we often use that emotion to empower us. Black also symbolizes evil and, while I definitely don't see this character as evil, I imagine that the media has very much leaned into an anti-hero narrative for us.

[X] Plan: Night Sky
 
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[X] Plan Lots o Friends, lots of problems
-[X]Miracle Alias: Lucky Charm
-[X]Name: Lila Luck
-[X]Gender:
--[X] Girl
-[X]Social Butterfly
-[X]Loving Family
-[X]Miracle Sibling:
-[X] Lover of Magic
-[X][Something That Should Not Be, Yet Is(Thrall)
-[X] Hunted:
-[X]Rival
-[X] Foreign Parents
Lets hope the power of friendship! (tm) and a good dollop of luck is enough to ward of our truly vast number of enemies.
 
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[X] Plan: Night Sky
-[X] Miracle Alias: Moonlit Princess
-[X] Name: Sora Hoshino
-[X] Gender:
--[X] Girl
-[X] Advantages:
--[X] Loving Family
--[X] Yakuza Family
--[X] Lover of Magic
--[X] A Second Companion
---[X] Mended Bonds and Loot Finder
-[X] Disadvantages:
--[X] Delinquent
--[X] Sickly
--[X] Rival
--[X] Hunted

On second thought, I like this more. Let's be the cool, mysterious and vaguely antagonistic magical girl that's usually in the shows. The type that the heroes usually fight because they're a dark magical girl with strange powers who doesn't communicate properly, only for them to all team up when the big bad boss monster shows up and they all become friends at the end.

Sadly, our rival may not be the pure-hearted girl in the shows, and the big bad boss monster may be smarter than usual.

As far as powers go, having an army of ghosts fits the theme of being a 'dark' MG along with the Yakuza bits. Mended Bonds also has great synergy with Loot Finder which is made even better with Lucky Charm.
 
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Since this is part 2 of character creation, I think it would do us all well to look at what we have so far for this character's personality and motivations.

[ ] To Protect: You love your family, but you lacked the strength to protect them with the danger all around you until your Companion bonded with you. And now you have the strength to protect your family. To protect everyone you love from any danger.
[ ] Emotional Equation: Your power is emotion, rational yet irrational. You can control your own emotions and different emotional states will confer different bonuses and maluses such as anger empowering your strikes while making you more prone to missing your target.

It's clear from this that our protagonist loves their family and wishes to protect them. We should then ask the question, why? Magical girl shows are pretty character driven, especially here where the powers they manifested aren't chosen consciously. In this case, Emotional Equation allows perfect control of one's emotions. Why did her power manifest that way?

It's a safe bet to say that it did so because her lack of emotional control caused her pain, likely a fight with the family that led to some words she regrets saying being spoken.

Plan Night Sky expands on those basics.

Sora's motivation is deeply rooted in her love for her family and her desire to do something for them. She's a sheltered girl due to her sickness, meaning that she's unaware of what her loved ones get up to in order to keep her safe, happy and relatively healthy. Forced to stay at home for most days, she became attracted to the media around Miracles and how they help everyone around them. She wished to do the same despite her health problems and became a bit of a delinquent because of it since beating evil doers up is what Miracles do, and anyone who bad mouths her family is clearly an evil doer in her eyes!

Now that she's a rare Miracle with two companions, this mentality has led to certain problems. Her lack of social skills the Miracle propaganda she's consumed has led her to take the role of the dark magical girl in the shows seriously because of the spooky aesthetics of Mended Bonds. That, and talking to strangers is hard when she can just shut down her emotions instead. She apes someone who's cool, aloof, and mysterious, thinking that as a Miracle, that's just how she should be.

TLDR: Sheltered nerd is too chuuni for her own good but is really good at play acting the mysterious magical girl archetype.
 
[X] Plan: Diametrically Opposite Lives
-[X]Miracle Alias: Obsidian
-[X]Name: Gozen Kuro
-[X]Gender
--[X]Girl
-[X]Loving Family
-[X]Yakuza Family
-[X]Something That Should Not Be, Yet Is(Allied)
-[X]Rival
-[X]Delinquent
-[X]Foreign Parents

I like the record tracks plan, but I'd like to make some edits to fit my tastes.

Feel free to extrapolate on how this girl's story would be. Because I don't think I have brain activity to do so atm.

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[X]Plan: Wrong Side of the (Record) Tracks
 
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[X] Plan: Let's Gooo!
- [X] Miracle Alias: Harmonium
- [X] Name: Aya Accord
- [X]Gender:
-- [X] Girl
- [X] Advantages: Pick 3
-- [X] Social Butterfly
-- [X] Miracle Sibling
-- [X] Lover of Magic
-- [X] Friendly Monster
-- [X] Indie Singer
-- [X] A Second Companion
--- [X] Fluid Flesh and Plain
- [X] Disadvantages: Pick at least three. For each additional disadvantage you pick, you may pick another advantage.
-- [X] Delinquent
-- [X] Exploitive Family
-- [X] Foreign Parents
-- [X] Rival
-- [X] Yakuza Debt
-- [X] Hunted
 
[X] Plan: The Green Witch
-[X]Miracle Alias: Midori Majo
-[X]Name: Flora Greenberg
-[X]Gender: Girl
-[X]Advantages
--[X]Loving Family
--[X]Lover of Magic
--[X]Friendly Monster
-[X]Disadvantages
--[X]Foreign Parents
--[X]Rival
--[X]Hunted
 
[X]Plan: Wrong Side of the (Record) Tracks

Well, looks time like it's time to jump from my plan to concetrate votes and this one is pretty good also.
 
not sure of the alias name, but all i could think of was this or 'heartbreaker'

[X] Plan: Yakuza Pop Princess
-[X]Miracle Alias: Heartthrob
-[X]Name: Yamaguchi Aimi
-[X]Gender:
--[X] Girl
-[X]Loving Family
-[X]Yakuza Family
-[X]Indie Singer
-[X]Hunted
-[X]Rival
-[X]Delinquent
 
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Omake: Absurdity
Itsuki ran through the corpse-filled streets of Tokyo. His heart beated so fast Itsuki was sure it was trying to break free of his chest in a vain attempt to escape. But escape to where? The dying screams of people all around him as they were devoured, crushed underfoot, and shredded. No matter where he escaped too, his own screams would join them. All he could do was just run.

Still, his brain went into overdrive trying to figure a way out of this mess. Itsuki couldn't run forever. Already his legs seized up from the burning hurt of his fear-fuelled scramble. But what way was there? Wait for the military to show up? The police tried shooting a robe-clad thing with a cross nailed to its face. It shrugged off the bullets like it was made of iron before it chanted and… what chance did the military have against something like that?

Maybe he could hide in an alleyway or cafe and wait till the monsters move on? Those fiery hounds melted their way through concrete and gorged themselves on whoever was inside that Mcdonalds. And those things could probably smell him from a kilometer away!

Fuck, he didn't believe in a higher power, but he'd follow whatever if it meant he got out of this alive and well. It didn't matter if it was evil incarnate, Itsuki just wanted to live through the New Year! All he could do was hop-

Howls tore through the air.

Itsuki's heart slammed against his chest, beating harder and harder as hungry panting drew ever closer. His frenzied instincts overrode all else, even his own mind. Itsuki spurred into a mad dash through the streets. He jumped and leaped over crashed vehicles, stumbled over corpses half-eaten or crushed into bloodied pulps, and blinded himself to incapacitated survivors reaching out to him for help. Itsuki never spared a glance to see the fate of such survivors. Their screams and the tearing of flesh were enough to tell him their end. But it brought him a few precious meters. He will survive this, he'll live no matter what!

Survival of self, above all else!

Karma disagreed.

Itsuki's foot caught on a piece of rubble. His own momentum sent him spiraling onto the asphalt. The pain ripped through him and knocked out his instincts. Itsuki laid dazed and stunned. He squeezed his eyes as they throbbed and his head felt like it was about to split open. His thoughts were scrambled from the pain. Not even the pitter-patter of paws drew him out of his stupor. Not until teeth dug into his legs and searing heat boiled his calves like hot water on flesh.

Instincts once more took control. He twisted and turned and thrashed to try and dislodge his legs from the biting grip of the hounds. His legs were shredded by the teeth. Strands of muscle and flesh plopped onto the ground, but any pain Itsuki felt was dulled by the rush of adrenaline through him. Itsuki continued to twist and turn and trash until his legs ripped themselves free from the hounds.

Itsuki tried to crawl away. Only to be stopped when a large, canine-like beast jumped in front of him. The asphalt sizzled underneath its paws and left prints in the street as it whirled around. Its hellish eyes glared down upon him, as to strike down any hope. The chest of the hound glowed a dark red with each deep breath it took, illuminating the blackened bones under its flayed skin. Its lips curled upward in a mockery of a smile. Blood-tinged saliva drooled down wicked fangs and its tongue licked its mouth clean in preparation of its next meal. All the while Itsuki could only face it with tears in his eyes.

So this was how he was going to die. Getting eaten by a pack of twisted dogs on the New Year's eve of all days. He closed his eyes and imagined himself in a place of peace before the end.

Yet the awaited death never came. Instead, a normal bark reached his ears. Not that deep, reverberating parody of a bark these hounds screamed upon sighting prey, but an actual bark from a real dog. Itsuki opened his eyes to see the beast in front of him was backpedaling away from an Australian Shepherd. The hounds behind him growled yet whimpered between each growl as if they were trying to muster the courage to face a creature greater than them.

B-but it was a normal Aussie. Yeah, the dog was sitting with a wide smile like nothing was wrong, but what did the hounds have to fear? The beasts could withstand bullets, shrug off hits from clubs and swords, and laughed at any attempts to set them on fire. So what made this dog frightening?

The Australian Shepard lifted a paw and took a swipe at the beast in front of Itsuki. And its head fell onto the ground. It took a moment for the beast's body to crumble down. The dog cocked its head to a side, still smiling. Then, it spoke with one word that commanded fear and respect.

"Bark."

Such a word sent the surviving hounds running.

Itsuki opened and shut his mouth several times. He tried to process what just happened. What appears to be a normal dog had just sliced off the head of a seemingly unkillable beast and sent the other hounds running. How? What was this thing? Was the dog another one of these beasts looking for an easy meal? Fuck, to die like this. At least he could take solace in the fact the hounds were killable.

The dog lifted itself off the ground and Itsuki was about to shut his eyes once more when it… plopped itself down before him. The Aussie looked at him with its big, adorable eyes as if begging for petting and attention. Once more, Itsuki was so utterly baffled and confused, he forgot about his burning ache in his legs. Itsuki and the dog looked at each other while the screams of the dying began to die down and the light of the morning broke through the dark skies.

It took a while for Itsuki to break himself out of his confusion and remembered the pain he was in earlier. The sheer heat must've burnt his nerves in his legs. The Aussie wasn't giving any signs of aggression so Itsuki gambled that it wouldn't do anything else while he rolled himself over to see how damaged his legs truly were. And the sight made him sick to his stomach.

They couldn't even be called legs anymore. Muscles were either torn into shreds, fused together, or both. His bones were cracked and splintered. Blood dripped and pooled around his thighs while only dark stains remained around the calves. Itsuki was supposed to be dead, he'd seen such injuries as a surgeon. People don't survive this for long given the blood loss. Was some higher power torturing him for fun or setting him up for a punchline?

"Bark." Barked the dog as it trotted over to his legs. It looked over the mess that was Itsuki's legs and his chest began to convulse. The dog's head went up and down as if it was trying to make itself throw up… no, wait, it seriously wasn't about to do that, right?!

The Aussie then proceeded to vomit on Itsuki's legs.

Itsuki's eyes twitched as he watched that damned dog plop itself back down on its stomach and gave him a smug look. It wasn't enough for monsters to appear and begin slaughtering people on New Year's eve, it wasn't enough that his legs were chewed up, but he had to be vomited upon by a dog. Just why.

Then Itsuki's legs began healing themselves as the supposed vomit evaporated till they looked as good as new.

Itsuki gave a chuckle. He chuckled before it devolved into a maddened laugh at the sheer absurdity of what was happening. The Aussie whined for attention and Itsuki scratched it behind the ear to which the dog happily smiled. Because frankly, what else was there for him to do? This whole thing was absurd as might as well do the logical thing and pet the Australian Shepherd.



So the dog was put down. It was agreed upon by the family that it was better to spare him the pain since his condition wasn't getting better. Whole situation is absurd given how empty the house feels without him. And, well, this story is my way of putting emotion on paper. I suppose I'll be writing more often now.

So goodbye you glorious bastard, may you chew on the bones of the Grim Reaper.
 
So, while it doesn't look like it on the tally, it does appear we have a tie between Wrong Side of the (Record) Tracks and Lots o Friends, lots of problems. So I'll extend the voting period by 4 more hours and should a tie still remain, I'll roll a die to break it.
 
X] Plan Lots o Friends, lots of problems
Need to fix that otherwise it would not show up on vote tally plus that English name you might as well change something to add in -[]Foreign Parents.

[X] Plan: The Green Witch

[X] Plan Sparkling Idol

[X] Plan Lots o Friends, lots of problems

I prefer Foreign Parents magical girl instead of the standard Japanese Yakuza girl.
 
Since Plan: Night Sky has a chance of winning now, I'd like to vouch for it once more.

We're in a setting where the standard rules of the genre don't really apply. Magical girls are commodities and soldiers, not necessarily the shining heroes of justice the shows depict them as. I'd like to play into that with someone who genuinely does like magical girls, obsessively so even. Lover of Magic is the perfect trait for that, especially when paired with Sickly.

There's a lot of potential for a character who's essentially playing the wrong role. Though Sora likes to think she's being the cool, dark MG, her backstory isn't tragic enough and without Emotional Equation, she isn't as calm or cool as the archetype demands. With how messed up the world is, someone who's starry-eyed instead of jaded is perfect material for the main heroine of the show.

The rival can serve as a foil to that, bubbly on the outside but possessed by a bitter competitive streak. Much more fit for the title of a dark MG. Then there's the monster to overcome, and I think with that as a potential cause to ally with the rival, we have the recipe to try and be a more traditional magical girl show even if only for a moment.

Powers wise meanwhile, Lucky Charm and Loot Finder have amazing synergy with Mended Bonds since it allows us to find potentially useful items to fix and use without much trouble.
 
Editing in a vote for Night Sky to my post. While I'd love for my plan to win, I prefer that a plan that doesn't include Foreign Parents triumphs overall. We've chosen to play in Japan, I think it would be a disservice to not engage in that culture.
 
Editing in a vote for Night Sky to my post. While I'd love for my plan to win, I prefer that a plan that doesn't include Foreign Parents triumphs overall. We've chosen to play in Japan, I think it would be a disservice to not engage in that culture.

I apologize if I'm misunderstanding something here, but how exactly does the Foreign Parents be a disservice to not engage in Japanese culture?
 
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Adhoc vote count started by Critic Ham on Jan 16, 2023 at 11:37 AM, finished with 27 posts and 15 votes.

  • [X] Plan Lots o Friends, lots of problems
    -[X]Miracle Alias: Lucky Charm
    -[X]Name: Lila Luck
    -[X]Gender:
    --[X] Girl
    -[X]Social Butterfly
    -[X]Loving Family
    -[X]Miracle Sibling:
    -[X] Lover of Magic
    -[X][Something That Should Not Be, Yet Is(Thrall)
    -[X] Hunted:
    -[X]Rival
    -[X]Foreign Parents
    [X] Plan: Night Sky
    -[X] Miracle Alias: Moonlit Princess
    -[X] Name: Sora Hoshino
    -[X]Gender:
    --[X] Girl
    -[X] Advantages:
    --[X] Loving Family
    --[X] Yakuza Family
    --[X] Lover of Magic
    --[X] A Second Companion
    ---[X] Mended Bonds and Loot Finder
    -[X] Disadvantages:
    --[X] Delinquent
    --[X] Sickly
    --[X] Rival
    --[X] Hunted
    [X]Plan: Wrong Side of the (Record) Tracks
    -[X]Miracle Alias: Black Heart
    -[X]Name: Tadamasa Fusae
    -[X]Gender:
    --[X] Girl
    -[X]Loving Family
    -[X]Yakuza Family
    -[X]Indie Singer
    -[X]Delinquent
    -[X]Exploitative Family
    -[X]Rival
    [X] Plan: The Green Witch
    -[X]Miracle Alias: Midori Majo
    -[X]Name: Flora Greenberg
    -[X]Gender: Girl
    -[X] Advantages:
    --[X] Loving Family
    --[X] Lover of Magic
    -- [X] Friendly Monster
    -[X] Disadvantages:
    -- [X] Foreign Parents
    --[X] Rival
    --[X] Hunted
    [X] Plan Sparkling Idol
    -[X]Miracle Alias: Passion Beats
    -[X]Name: Erika Troy
    -[X]Gender:
    --[X] Girl
    -[X]Social Butterfly
    -[X]Indie Singer
    -[X]A Second Companion
    --[X] Anarchy Rainbow and Loot Finder
    -[X]Delinquent
    -[X]Foreign Parents
    -[X]Rival
    [X] Plan: Diametrically Opposite Lives
    -[X]Miracle Alias: Obsidian
    -[X]Name: Gozen Kuro
    -[X]Gender:
    --[X] Girl
    -[X]Loving Family
    -[X]Yakuza Family
    -[X]Something That Should Not Be, Yet Is(Allied)
    -[X]Rival
    -[X]Delinquent
    -[X]Foreign Parents
    [X] Plan: Let's Gooo!
    - [X] Miracle Alias: Harmonium
    - [X] Name: Aya Accord
    -[X]Gender:
    --[X] Girl
    - [X] Advantages: Pick 3
    -- [X] Social Butterfly
    -- [X] Miracle Sibling
    --[X] Lover of Magic
    -- [X] Friendly Monster
    -- [X] Indie Singer
    --[X] A Second Companion
    --- [X] Fluid Flesh and Plain
    - [X] Disadvantages: Pick at least three. For each additional disadvantage you pick, you may pick another advantage.
    --[X] Delinquent
    -- [X] Exploitive Family
    -- [X] Foreign Parents
    --[X] Rival
    -- [X] Yakuza Debt
    --[X] Hunted
    [X] Plan: Yakuza Pop Princess
    -[X]Miracle Alias: Heartthrob
    -[X]Name: Yamaguchi Aimi
    -[X]Gender:
    --[X] Girl
    -[X]Loving Family
    -[X]Yakuza Family
    -[X]Indie Singer
    -[X] Hunted:
    -[X]Rival
    -[X]Delinquent
 
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