Detective Arriving On Scene (A Detective Story)

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Something isn't what it seems.

You awake in a dirty apartment, with a photo that says Remember. Even though you know nothing at all.

And a Badge of a Private Detective Arthur Arc.

Now you have to find out what is going on here. And why you can't remember anything at all.
Awakening

Magoose

SV's Questing Fanatic
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Arriving on Scene: A Mystery

You awoke feeling… dizzy and disoriented. Everything about your body felt wrong, and even as you opened your eyes to look at the ceiling, the whispering fan and small insignificant movement. It had been turned off, but recently enough to where it still could have been on just a moment before.

Smelling the air, it burned like copper wiring and ash, and as you sat up… you could only see the foggy haze of the room, slowly disappearing with a broken analog clock staring back at you. There was nothing that couldn't be done… as your eyes were drawn towards the hour and minute hands that were stopped, the ticking still ongoing despite the clear sign the clock was damaged beyond repair. the hands trying to move, but nothing is happening. Nothing is moving. And nothing could make them move.

7:32. That was the time. But as you look at the sunrise, it might be morning.

"Everything okay?" Even the voice you heard in your ears was different than what you expected. It was… calm, and collected, not nearly as frantic sounding as your head started to play around with. But your thoughts felt different. They were… all different.

Turning to the desk you could see a cell phone, a smartphone, broken and fried, smoking… everything was… that was the smell that was burning your nose…

Yet next to it, was a badge.

And a photo?

An old polaroid photo from a camera, an old camera, that seemed to develop strangely… it didn't look normal? The photo felt glossy and broken, with it feeling like it was taped together.

There was also something written on the photo. A small messy black ink… pasted together with glue and covered with even more tape.

It looked familiar… it was of a face, a face with sad, tired silver eyes and… purple hair and a gaudy purple and black suit, and leather gloves? It was like the subject in the photo was… trying to look as outlandish as possible.

God whoever had that kind of fashion sense was a train wreck of poor taste. Yet…

Those eyes though… They looked like they had seen nothing but terrible things.

Looking at the picture, you looked at the single phrase… no word that was before it.

"Remember." The word said.

You looked at the badge and saw the shield read. "Arc Detectives." And the name below it.

"Arthur Arc."

Were you that Arthur Arc? Were you a detective?

What do you do?:

[]Clean up: You need to go to the Bathroom and clean yourself up. After all, you were not wearing a shirt… or comfortable pants.

[]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?

[]Go to the Hall: there has to be someone here for this apartment building. Was this an apartment building… why could you not remember… anything about where you were?

[]Watch TV: The Tv works, so… maybe that could be useful to figure out what is going on?

AN: Well SV, welcome to Arriving on Scene, A Detective story.

I won't give away the plot too much, but...

Well, you'll see.
 
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[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?

Fuck pants, look for a way out of this blues clues nightmare scenario.
 
[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?
 
your eyes were drawn towards the hour and minute hands that were stopped, the ticking still ongoing as the minute, second, and hour hands were… ticking along.
So are they stopped or not?

It looked familiar… it was of a face, a face with sad, tired silver eyes and… purple hair and a gaudy purple and black suit, and leather gloves?
Okay, whoever this is, they have the Butterfly Miraculous. Although I don't think Arthur has purple hair, so that's probably not him.

[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?

I got nothin'.
 
[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?

Ruh row raggy
 
[X]Watch TV: The Tv works, so… maybe that could be useful to figure out what is going on?
 
Fuck pants, look for a way out of this blues clues nightmare scenario.
... Now that is something I would never have used to describe... this detective story.

Damn now I want to make that a tag, that would be hilarious.
Takes deep breath...
Lol. Made you look. I ain't no spoil sport.
You don't know anything... not yet at least.
Okay, whoever this is, they have the Butterfly Miraculous. Although I don't think Arthur has purple hair, so that's probably not him.
Um the Miraculous, and the entire Miraculous ladybug quest is not canon to this one.

After all, we've got bigger things to worry about then a failed super villain beaten by teenagers on a weekly basis in pairs!
So are they stopped or not?
i thought I fixed that editing it.
Edit:
I wonder... has someone just discovered Disco Elysium Magoose?
Yes.
 
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[X]Watch TV: The Tv works, so… maybe that could be useful to figure out what is going on?

Shirts are useless! Reveal your ripping muscles for the world, Arthur!
We should probably start with the simplest and easiest thing first, then move onto searching for clues.
 
This is an original super hero universe quest.

Why the hell would I claim it was original, if it was Rwby?
Good, good, was scared for a moment there. Way too much "shout out stuff", if the newslady on the television happens to be a silver-eyed cookie addict promoting the average citizen to buy the new gun from Weiss conglomerate incorporated, I will squint at you.
 
Good, good, was scared for a moment there. Way too much "shout out stuff", if the newslady on the television happens to be a silver-eyed cookie addict promoting the average citizen to buy the new gun from Weiss conglomerate incorporated, I will squint at you.
Um I created an entire universe for one detective to inhabit… and a few brilliant ideas are there that will make you happy.

I'd like to say I'm far more creative then just using the reference overload… because that to me is not creative.
 
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[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?
 
[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?
 
[X]Watch TV: The Tv works, so… maybe that could be useful to figure out what is going on?

Lets see whats going on in the world and region, in those types of mystery there's always some news that seens important later.

Plus it might help us get more familiar with the setting, who knows what type of world is this? Hopefully no Sadako to jumpscare everyone.
 
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We are a detective, so let's do detective stuff...

[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?
 
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[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?
 
[X]Look for Clues?: Something is wrong, something feels wrong. Yet you can't do anything but look around this room?

Its time to be a detective!!

...Hopefully a good one! :p
 
Lets see whats going on in the world and region, in those types of mystery there's always some news that seens important later.
We've all read too many detective stories. So we should know what needs to be done about this.
Plus it might help us get more familiar with the setting, who knows what type of world is this? Hopefully no Sadako to jumpscare everyone.
Well look at the tags? And the titile. I think its pretty clear that this world is not our own.
...Hopefully a good one! :p
...

I only hope that I can convey that he is a good one.

Oh who am I kidding, i may spend entire pages with him dissecting every detail?

Probobly?:)
 
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