FMA Brotherhood: Wahrheit (Current Arc: A Small Peace)

Adhoc vote count started by Magoose on Feb 1, 2021 at 10:31 PM, finished with 60 posts and 20 votes.

  • [X] Plan The War journal
    -[X]Your Sister: She never lived past the day of her birth… something died with you, cradling her limp corpse more than your mother did. She had so much to live for… so much would remain unsaid, memories lost and… broken. She could have been better than you. She would have been better than you… you wanted to give her a chance at life… a chance that fate stole away.
    -[X]Your Voice (No longer can you voice the Truth that you know can be seen.)
    -[X] War Stories
    -[X]The Correspondent: Whenever there is a conflict brewing in Amestris… you are there to cover it… in all, it's gory details. After all, war sells papers more than anything else… and you sell papers faster than they can print them. Making you quite a rich man… despite being a reporter… and constantly risking your own life for the kicks.
    [X] Partmetal Alchemist
    -[X] Your Father
    -[X] Your Arm (You cannot take hold of the world you so desperately wish for)
    -[X] The National Hermetics Journal (The future is not now... but soon!)
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan
    [X] Plan: Golden Experience
    -[X]Your Sister
    -[X]Your Future
    -[X] The Passione Print
    -[X]The Whistle Blower
    [X] Plan Crouching Reporter, Hidden Badass
    -[X] Your Mother: Beautiful Mother… soft and sweet. Your mother died in childbirth when you were 11… your little sister never seeing the light of the world. There was so much blood… Now you needed her… she was the only one who could make you remember your humanity… to remember that there was a life that you could live.
    -[X] Your Nerves (Parts of your Nervous System. You will never feel how liberating the Truth is)
    -[X]The Amestrian Tribune
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan: You cover the State Alchemists who work on the many breakthroughs in science, that make the lives of Amestrians better. This has earned you praise from the Government… though a few high ranking officials think you dig too deep sometimes… and meddle in things you do not understand.
    [X] Wanting to forget
    -[X]Your Sister
    -[X]Your Arm
    -[X]The Amestrian Tribune
    -[X]The Bloodhound
    [X] Wanting to forget
    [X] Where is my mind:
    -[X]Your Sister: She never lived past the day of her birth… something died with you, cradling her limp corpse more than your mother did. She had so much to live for… so much would remain unsaid, memories lost and… broken. She could have been better than you. She would have been better than you… you wanted to give her a chance at life… a chance that fate stole away.
    -[X]Your Mind. (Your Mind is Fractured… To Never Be Whole Again to find the Truth)
    -[X]The Amestris Times
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan: You cover the State Alchemists who work on the many breakthroughs in science, that make the lives of Amestrians better. This has earned you praise from the Government… though a few high ranking officials think you dig too deep sometimes… and meddle in things you do not understand.
    [X] Plan: Truth and its cost.
    -[X]Your Brother: Your Brother was a soldier serving near Drachma. He was such a shining beacon, of humanity, light, and duty for you. His death destroyed you. You wanted him back because he reminded you hope could still exist.
    -[X]Your Mind. (Your Mind is Fractured… To Never Be Whole Again to find the Truth)
    -[X] The truth is here (The Truth will come in time)
    -[X]The Whistle Blower: You make it a fact to never reveal your sources… because they fear for their lives. Many times you have been taken to a police station to be interrogated… threatened to give up names of those you have allowed to speak out against the government. The Masses Love you… and the Government wishes to silence you.
    [X] Hopes last leg, Covering the Alchemists
    -[X]Your Brother: Your Brother was a soldier serving near Drachma. He was such a shining beacon, of humanity, light, and duty for you. His death destroyed you. You wanted him back because he reminded you hope could still exist.
    -[X] One of your eyes and legs (You will never be able to see the full wisdom of Truth and will forever trail behind those on the path you thread.)
    -[X] The Amestrian Times (Bringing the Truth to you one day at a time!)
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan: You cover the State Alchemists who work on the many breakthroughs in science, that make the lives of Amestrians better. This has earned you praise from the Government… though a few high ranking officials think you dig too deep sometimes… and meddle in things you do not understand.
 
Oh and I should say this: that thing you lost is not permanent I have a few ideas for such hinderences to be remedied
 
How would one replace a nervous system...

Wait, with useless nerves doesn't that mean auto mail won't work on us if we pick it?
 
So did the military find out and tried to get us to join them
Actually, no.

You are in fact, on nobody's radar... Yet. Mostly because Father thinks we'll die... and thinks Izumi Curtis is more of an asset... After all, a 15-year-old kid with a journalist job doesn't seem like a threat to him...

Considering he thinks we're about to commit suicide by Job... he's not counting on us surviving.
 
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[X] Plan The War journal
-[X]Your Sister: She never lived past the day of her birth… something died with you, cradling her limp corpse more than your mother did. She had so much to live for… so much would remain unsaid, memories lost and… broken. She could have been better than you. She would have been better than you… you wanted to give her a chance at life… a chance that fate stole away.
-[X]Your Voice (No longer can you voice the Truth that you know can be seen.)
-[X] War Stories
-[X]The Correspondent: Whenever there is a conflict brewing in Amestris… you are there to cover it… in all, it's gory details. After all, war sells papers more than anything else… and you sell papers faster than they can print them. Making you quite a rich man… despite being a reporter… and constantly risking your own life for the kicks.
 
An unsatisfying and confusing one, that raises several questions about Truth's value system and ends the story by getting rid of the main focus thus far?
In story maybe, but it was certainly a fitting ending for the Elric bros story and charecter arcs. Especially Edwards.

And it was a very cathartic end that I still find extremely satisfying.

and for a story, especially an ending, that matters a lot. (Looking at You Game of Thrones)
Im kinda worried what that event was.
Well... Greed Ran off... so there's that.
 
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Adhoc vote count started by Magoose on Feb 2, 2021 at 9:00 AM, finished with 79 posts and 21 votes.

  • [X] Plan The War journal
    -[X]Your Sister: She never lived past the day of her birth… something died with you, cradling her limp corpse more than your mother did. She had so much to live for… so much would remain unsaid, memories lost and… broken. She could have been better than you. She would have been better than you… you wanted to give her a chance at life… a chance that fate stole away.
    -[X]Your Voice (No longer can you voice the Truth that you know can be seen.)
    -[X] War Stories
    -[X]The Correspondent: Whenever there is a conflict brewing in Amestris… you are there to cover it… in all, it's gory details. After all, war sells papers more than anything else… and you sell papers faster than they can print them. Making you quite a rich man… despite being a reporter… and constantly risking your own life for the kicks.
    [X] Partmetal Alchemist
    -[X] Your Father
    -[X] Your Arm (You cannot take hold of the world you so desperately wish for)
    -[X] The National Hermetics Journal (The future is not now... but soon!)
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan
    [X] Plan: Golden Experience
    -[X]Your Sister
    -[X]Your Future
    -[X] The Passione Print
    -[X]The Whistle Blower
    [X] Plan Crouching Reporter, Hidden Badass
    -[X] Your Mother: Beautiful Mother… soft and sweet. Your mother died in childbirth when you were 11… your little sister never seeing the light of the world. There was so much blood… Now you needed her… she was the only one who could make you remember your humanity… to remember that there was a life that you could live.
    -[X] Your Nerves (Parts of your Nervous System. You will never feel how liberating the Truth is)
    -[X]The Amestrian Tribune
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan: You cover the State Alchemists who work on the many breakthroughs in science, that make the lives of Amestrians better. This has earned you praise from the Government… though a few high ranking officials think you dig too deep sometimes… and meddle in things you do not understand.
    [X] Wanting to forget
    -[X]Your Sister
    -[X]Your Arm
    -[X]The Amestrian Tribune
    -[X]The Bloodhound
    [X] Wanting to forget
    [X] Where is my mind:
    -[X]Your Sister: She never lived past the day of her birth… something died with you, cradling her limp corpse more than your mother did. She had so much to live for… so much would remain unsaid, memories lost and… broken. She could have been better than you. She would have been better than you… you wanted to give her a chance at life… a chance that fate stole away.
    -[X]Your Mind. (Your Mind is Fractured… To Never Be Whole Again to find the Truth)
    -[X]The Amestris Times
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan: You cover the State Alchemists who work on the many breakthroughs in science, that make the lives of Amestrians better. This has earned you praise from the Government… though a few high ranking officials think you dig too deep sometimes… and meddle in things you do not understand.
    [X] Plan: Truth and its cost.
    -[X]Your Brother: Your Brother was a soldier serving near Drachma. He was such a shining beacon, of humanity, light, and duty for you. His death destroyed you. You wanted him back because he reminded you hope could still exist.
    -[X]Your Mind. (Your Mind is Fractured… To Never Be Whole Again to find the Truth)
    -[X] The truth is here (The Truth will come in time)
    -[X]The Whistle Blower: You make it a fact to never reveal your sources… because they fear for their lives. Many times you have been taken to a police station to be interrogated… threatened to give up names of those you have allowed to speak out against the government. The Masses Love you… and the Government wishes to silence you.
    [X] Hopes last leg, Covering the Alchemists
    -[X]Your Brother: Your Brother was a soldier serving near Drachma. He was such a shining beacon, of humanity, light, and duty for you. His death destroyed you. You wanted him back because he reminded you hope could still exist.
    -[X] One of your eyes and legs (You will never be able to see the full wisdom of Truth and will forever trail behind those on the path you thread.)
    -[X] The Amestrian Times (Bringing the Truth to you one day at a time!)
    -[X]The Alchemist Fan: You cover the State Alchemists who work on the many breakthroughs in science, that make the lives of Amestrians better. This has earned you praise from the Government… though a few high ranking officials think you dig too deep sometimes… and meddle in things you do not understand.
 
[X] Plan: Golden Experience

A whistleblower during the Ishval Massacre? Surely this won't paint a massive target on our backs. :V
 
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