Web of Life (Spider-Man AU)

@Sebazu An average person will have 1 in most of their stats, with 2s in the choice of profession. A highly trained person will have a 3, but that's a peak of humanity. 4 is where the limits break. Though stats are not the end-all of everything - they'll have skills and talents that'll add extra dice.
EDIT : Helping Flash pass, fashionista... but there's little contention between suit and meat. I'll let it run for a few hours, then close the vote.
Adhoc vote count started by asphaltus on Jul 4, 2020 at 12:44 PM, finished with 27 posts and 18 votes.
 
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[X] [FLASH] Peter agreed to just get him to pass.
[X] [CLUB] Fashion Club
[X] There was a neighborhood barbecue going on
 
Well, that breaks the tie. Barbeque is ahead. Hadn't expected that. I must be really nailing these slice of life bits.
 
Inserted tally. VOTE CLOSED, (OFFICIALLY). Update incoming tomorrow.
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9.1 A Small Step For A Man
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Growing up, Vincent had a frog that serenaded him after dark. He had never seen the creature, but at night, after the lights had been turned off and his parents left him alone, it would start croaking. He would hear its voice until he fell asleep, and when he woke up in the morning, it would be gone. Searching for it was useless; the amphibian was like the legendary phantom. He couldn't be found, and he wouldn't stop his throaty ballad.

The noise was annoyingly grating. It was impossible to sleep, and therefore function. But a few weeks later, he was snoring peacefully, and after a few months, it had become a lullaby. The sound etched itself on his brain - even after they had moved to New York, and lived in a third-floor apartment, he could still hear it singing.

That frog had taught him something important. Humans had an extraordinary power of adaptability – whatever challenges they faced, given enough time, they would overcome them.

Vincent took the lesson to heart. His circumstances had never been favorable. His parents were young, uneducated, and poor when they had him - the three cardinal sins for a parent in America. His father was drunk and abusive (sins four and five), and his mother was a complicit woman (six and seven). And if just making him suffer wasn't enough, they decided to have another child.

But Vincent preserved. His teachers praised him as a sensitive kid – he did not know what it meant, but it was praise, and he liked to have it. He worked hard for it. Unfortunately, that only made his fall all the more tragic.

Narrative only existed in hindsight. Parables were not unequivocal constants that answered everything. Poverty was not a single problem that could be simply overcome with hard work. And over the years, Vincent came to understand this lesson as well. You couldn't will yourself through hunger, lack of sleep, or simply fatigue. When you had no money, no amount of hustle could make up for it. When you were cold, positive thoughts couldn't warm you. When you were beaten, prayers couldn't save you.

Vincent had been wrong, and he felt wronged. The anger was bitter burning, and it hurt all the more because he had tried. He had given everything, and the world had trampled all over it. So be it. If he was fated to lose from birth, then what was the reason for his compliance?

So he broke the rules. Small at first, then he grew bolder. He worked alone and was clever and quick. They caught him once, but that only taught him to be more careful. There was a new lesson there. Life didn't care. There was no accounting, no one keeping score. You were what you could get away with. He did, and it worked. His sister didn't go hungry. His father stayed off his back. His mother kept quiet. Things were getting better. And then life, with a great sense of irony, decided to help him out.

Vincent's father drunk himself to death. Nobody particularly cared - the funeral costed less than his tab. Then a lawyer arrived. Unknown granddad had specific instructions for an inheritance to be delivered after his father's death. Vincent had never known the man, but his admiration for him sky-rocketed instantaneously. There were money and a few belongings. Photos, diaries, curios, furniture, a bronze lamp post. A grandfather clock. A well-sized red statue of a deformed-looking lion. A three-legged stool. And most importantly, the box.

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Manfredo Colorito, in his own words, had led a disappointing existence. As Vincent read through his grandfather's diaries, he felt a kinship with the man. Like him, life had sold Manfredo a false dream. He was a patriot who wanted to go to war, but turned away because he was too sickly. He was an accomplished scientist, yet command never appreciated him. His wife died young, and his son left him behind. His life was unfulfilling, and so was his death.

It was tricky to open the box; the clues were in his notes, and he had to make an effort to figure it out. The man might've been a genius, but Vincent was no slouch either. The dials were turned, the letters aligned, the buttons pressed, a clockwise turn, counter turn, counter turn, and pull. It opened. An eagle emblazed the inside, with a shield as its heart. The Strategic Scientific Reserve. There were more notes, and a photo of lab coats standing next to each other. A top-secret project. Vincent dug within, and found treasure. The prototype. The suit. His grandfather's labor of love, unceremoniously decried and abandoned, never to see the light of the day again.

No. He wasn't going to let that happen.

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It took Vincent a lot of reading and studying to approach to understand how the thing worked. They had never got to finish it – but his grandfather had left him a path, and he intended to follow it. And he was almost done. He had needed money, materials, but hitting a few stores took care of it. All that was left was to complete the work.

Life had been unfair. He had been left behind from the very beginning, running a race that he could never win, forever destined to remain under the heels of a broken system. His anger was directionless, and would never amount to anything. No. Not anymore. He would prove them all wrong. He had a gift now, a purpose.

Vincent was going to make the world sit up and take notice.

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QMNote: Never thought I would be writing this interlude. It took about 3 approaches and 4 different rewrites to get these 900 words. Even then, I'm sure I flubbed the ending. But eh, good enough.
Vincent was the guy in chap4. There's already a hint there about who he is. I'm sure you'll be able to guess anyways. Anyways, he gets 1 Fate Point. Update incoming tomorrow.
 
Quite the leap there to take '40s tech and make it work as a tech-villain in today's environment.
:eyebrow: You do realize that this is Marvel right? Universe of the Super Science Genre/Trope? Where (theirs) 1940's tech was at least as good as (our) 2050's projected tech? As for your "clue" I admit that I don't have a complete list of all of Spiderman's Rouges galley memorized. Which C or D ranked villain is this supposed to be?
 
He's a Daredevil Villain, but Spider-Man and Daredevil have traded Kingpin back and forth a bit so I'm not surprised. C/D tier is right, far as I can see it's the one additional movement capability and it doesn't grant any amphibious movement capabilities.
 
When I read that my first thought, was Converting him by the power of kindness.
Not leave it to the pros? :evil:

Quite the leap there to take '40s tech and make it work as a tech-villain in today's environment.
Nice.

The SSR in this in-universe wasn't completely defunded until the end of the Cold War (1990), though their budget was slashed until they were left with nothing. (Secretly, SHIELD had come to exist by the point). Manfredo also kept working on this advanced tech by himself (outlining all the possible upgrades and research) over the course of years, till he died. And Vincent is a genius who can take it further. It was supposed to be advanced for the 1960s when the idea was conceived, and it has already been made better.

Of course, I'm a firm believer in the death of the author, so unless I present these facts in-story, you're free to assume.

He's a Daredevil Villain, but Spider-Man and Daredevil have traded Kingpin back and forth a bit so I'm not surprised. C/D tier is right, far as I can see it's the one additional movement capability and it doesn't grant any amphibious movement capabilities.
I knew this was going on to be a hot choice - really, out of all possible Spider-man villains, the first is a guy who is technically a Daredevil one? But my plan always was to choose villains from a thematic standpoint. How does this villain relate to Spider-man? Where can I draw the connection, the counterpoint, the parallels? There were a few options for a beginning villain, and I went old-school, zany and offbeat, something no one would expect. It allowed me to write my own spin on them, and keep things fresh and interesting.

(C/D? Our guy here was an Avenger, you know? Have some respect.)
About tiers, they might be helpful references, but don't stand too much on them in-quest. Depends on the story plays out, anything can happen. Nobody is a joke, least of all the jokers.
 
About tiers, they might be helpful references, but don't stand too much on them in-quest. Depends on the story plays out, anything can happen. Nobody is a joke, least of all the jokers.
Indeed. Spider-Man can play Frogger with the best of them, but it only takes one ill-timed car to go splat.
 
Indeed. Spider-Man can play Frogger with the best of them, but it only takes one ill-timed car to go splat.
I thought it might of been that guy, given the SI/Stilts story here in the message board's story section. Either that or the French dude, which didn't make sense cause... you know, the stated character here wasn't French. But since I know jack all about Daredevil's story or his galley, all I knew was that from said SI/Stilts story that the thematic jumper was one of the "joke villains" of/for Spiderman.
 
10. Summer Days
Lewis Park, Afternoon

Peter didn't really like barbeques, or any big social gathering. As an introvert, he would feel out of place and awkward most of the time, which was further of exacerbated by the lack of people to talk to. Today was no exception.

Standing near the cookout, he surveyed the park. Kids ran all over the place, people lounged in the shade, while others stood around in small circles and chatted. No one he knew. So he stood and pretended to be… not uncomfortable.

"Peter! Here you go." Uncle Ben dumped a heavy serving of meat on his plate. "This is good, right?"

"Right." He smiled. Uncle Ben was happy; being amongst his friends must've improved his mood. He wasn't going to be the one to bring it down. "I'm going over to Flash, okay?" He lied. Flash was here, but surrounded by his usual stooges, and Peter wasn't going to enter that den.

"Alright. Okay," His uncle smiled and gave him a pat on the back, and Peter almost felt a tiny bit guilty as he waved him off. Almost.

Now all he had to do was find a quiet spot, eat his food, and –

"Peter!" Oh no. He recognized the voice. "Peter, honey, over here!" It was Anna Watson, a mousy looking, soft-spoken woman, who had been Aunt May's best friend when she was alive. Peter avoided her; she meant well, but it never turned out as such.

"I have to say, I'm relieved to see you here. I thought you'd be all down after May's death!" Yep, exactly as he expected. This was the reason she was disliked; Anna had no social grace. In her defense, it was out of thoughtless ignorance rather than any actual malice – but still, it was hard to tolerate.

"Everybody took it hard, but we can't sit around moping forever." He gave a controlled answer.

"Well, I don't know about you, but I feel like I could." She sniffled. "Sometimes I forget that's she gone and still call her house, you know?"

"Yes. I picked those up."

"Of course you did. I was feeling so sorry for myself… that I almost forgot about you. How above you been?"

Not this song and dance again. "I'm okay now." Would she get the hint?

"Oh, Peter, don't be like that. You don't have to lie. You can feel sad if you want to." Nope, she didn't.

"I'm fine. Really." He decided to hammer in the point. "It's all good now. I'm fine. Uncle Ben is fine. You don't have to worry. Okay?"

"Whatever you say, tough guy." She didn't believe. Which was alright, as long as she stopped talking about it. "Honestly, you and Ben… two stubborn peas in a pod. But I promised her that'll look after you, and I intend to keep my word." Her face scrunched up as she fell in thought, and then cleared up as she got an idea. "Are you free on Saturdays?"

"Well, I have a…–"

"You're free." She imperiously declared. "Good. I'm in need of a strong and clever man around the house, someone who isn't averse to hard work for a little change. You won't say no to an old lady in need, would you?"

"Listen, you don't have to –"

"Saturday. I'll be waiting."

************

In the end, he had to agree. Great. Another event to add on the ever-growing pile. But now that had been dealt with, he could -

"Peter." A gravelly, deep voice interrupted his thoughts as a shadow fell over him. "It's good to see you, son." The man was wearing grey shorts and a pink Hawaiian shirt, but looked intimidating as ever.

"Mr. Brock – uh, it's good to see you, sir." It was Reuben Brock – what was he doing here?

"My wife encouraged this." He answered the unasked question. "I would have refused, but she bade me to see reason. How can we serve a community if we do not know them? Now that I am here, I see she was right." His face never changed as he spoke – it was impossible to know what he was thinking.

"Ri-right."

"As for the recent events, I will say that He will not test you beyond what you cannot handle," He continued. "And should you wish for succor, our doors are always open."

"Yes – of course. Thanks."

A few seconds of uneasy silence followed.

"Well, I won't tarry you anymore," He began to excuse himself, then changed his mind. "Wait." The word was soft, hesitant.

"… What is it?"

"… It has come to my attention, that… our son has returned." He spoke haltingly, considering over his every word. "Have you… spoken to him?"

Oh. So it was about this. "Eddie called me once, yes."

"Is he… well?"

"Seems so."

Reuben nodded to himself. "If you meet him, would you… no, nevermind." The corners of his lips curved upwards – no, wait, that was him trying to smile. It was terrifying. "Go on, Peter. Enjoy yourself."

"Oh… of course, sir."

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A shady tree, cool breeze, and everyone in the distance - It was the perfect spot. Peter sat down and relaxed. This was nice. No distractions, just him and nature. The wide blue sky and the green mounds… and there was a figure approaching him.

It was Jessie, Flash's younger sister. She walked closer and closer – until she was just beside him – and simply sat down without a word. Okay. He waited. She said nothing. He waited some more. Not a sound. What was happening? Did she want to talk? Probably not. Should he say something? Probably yes.

Say hello. No, too much time had passed for that – that would be awkward. Ask what she was doing – no, stupid question, she wasn't doing anything. Talk about the weather – nobody asked, you creep. Oh fuck – what was even happening? Why had she come over here? They had barely even talked – he didn't even know her! Did she - No, no, that was his imagination running wild. Things were not as he presumed, and there had to be some reason – but what could it be except that? No – no more of this nonsense – start a conversation – but how?

"Hello, I am Jessie Thompson, Eugene – I mean, Flash's sister. You are Peter Parker, his school mate. Let us talk." She said, her face blank and voice completely disinterested. "Isn't the weather great?"

"Uh, it sure is."

"And the food is good too, is it not?" She pushed her glasses up.

"Uh… I suppose so?"

"You are not sure?"

"I mean… okay, I'm going to be frank. What are you doing?"

"As I explained, conversing with you."

"Yes, but why?"

"To establish rapport before moving onto the actual topic."

"… You know, I think we have plenty of rapport. So what is it you want to actually talk about?"

"Fine. Are you neurotypical?"

Peter's mind connected the dots. "Where is this coming from?"

"My mom says you're gifted. She says the same thing about me. I assumed that's how she's coded it in her brain. So I decided to ask. Are you?"

Was he? On some level, with the spider and whatnot, he certainly was on the spectrum. And even before, he had difficulties interacting with people. But it had never affected his life to be noticeable, had it? But he couldn't just say yes, either could he?"

After some thinking, he gave his answer.

"I see." She nodded rapidly. "That was all I wanted to know. Thank you for that information. Would you mind if I skip the disengaging small-talk?"

"No, not at all."

She then got up and left without a word.

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What did Peter answer to the NT question? (Neurotypical = people who are considered to have standard mental development

[] Yes, I am NT.
[] No, I am on the spectrum.
[] No, I am on the spectrum, but it's not official or anything.
[] Yes, I am NT, but I understand what being non NT feels like.
[] WRITE-IN

What event came afterwards?

[] Peter talked with Uncle Ben after his visit to the doctor.
[] Peter went to school
- [] Peter tutored his friends
- [] Peter made his first visit to the club.
[] There was a neighborhood event
- [] Aunt Rosie asked him to babysit Timmy.
[X] Peter met with Eddie Brock, and listened to his job offer.
[] Peter worked on planning his crime fighting initiative.

Peter has 4 exp.
Peter gets +20 INCOME.

INCOME is added passively after every event. Events may arise from work which may need to be resolved from time to time.


QMNOTE: … you already know what I say, so I'm not gonna say it. but I won't make promises without getting the writing down now – swear to me bones. About the other stuff – it's usual – not happy with the update, transitions suck, words felt weird, took a long time, feel bad … le sigh.
 
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[X] "I dunno, I never really thought about it. People make choices that don't make sense to me, but maybe they make sense to them. If school making more sense than social stuff puts me on the spectrum, I'm there."
[X] Peter met with Eddie Brock, and listened to his job offer.

Seriously, can we move onto this now?
 
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Is the neurotypical question maybe backwards? I might be misreading it, but it feels like the question and the answers are meant to go with something like "Are you on the autism spectrum?" but "Are you neurotypical?" is the opposite of that (neurotypical means standard thinking).
 
Yeah, she's asking if Peter's neurotypical but the answer seem to be replying as if he was asked if he was on the spectrum.

I would say he's not quite neurotypical, but it's just the barest hint of the spectrum.
 
[X] No, I am on the spectrum, but it's not official or anything.

[X] Peter met with Eddie Brock, and listened to his job offer.
 
[X] Yes, I am NT.
[X] Peter met with Eddie Brock, and listened to his job offer.

Being socially awkward is not the same as being autistic, and I think it is wrong to say you can understand what it's like if you are NT.
 
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[X] Yes, I am NT.
[X] Peter met with Eddie Brock, and listened to his job offer.

I don't quite agree but I absolutely don't want to say he understands what being non-typical is like.
 
Being socially awkward is not the same as being autistic
NB : this is sort of retroactive character building. If you choose no, things change so that Peter has always been on the spectrum, with mild affectations. If you choose yes to NT, then you're always have been just socially awkward.

The other two options are more complicated. Peter's intelligent enough to know that he doesn't quite fit in - this is him basing it on autism according to his thinking. He might be right, or wrong - but the actual thing matters less than what he perceives it to be. The last is him trying to be relatable to Jessie without lying - though it also might just sound insensitive.
 
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