Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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I mean. The other thing they could be is the coagulated cultivation refuse sunk beneath the soil and given fleshy, corrupt form. This would make them a problem in every province as a side effect of mass cultivation, but less of a problem in regions with high stability or organization. Basically they'd be worst under ES but everywhere else would have a bit of a presence
 
Turn 8: Arc 4-7
"Perhaps you could spar with him a bit? Zhengui rarely gets to face enemies other than myself," Ling Qi suggested. That would be changing in the future. She wanted Zhengui and Hanyi to join her next time she sparred Cai Renxiang.

Wang Chao eyed her little brother up and down. "Not a bad idea," he said glancing back at her and the others. "If I'm to give you proper instruction I'll need to see the two of you together though."
Ling Qi really did not want to risk embarrassing the older boy. He was a step above her in cultivation of course, and as a count scion his arts were surely high quality… but she was aware of just how frustrating she was to fight. It might be better to do that with proper sparring license worked out in a private training ground. "That is fair, but I was hoping that you could assess his abilities individually first?"

"I too wish to see the great beasts abilities in action," Alingge agreed, her eyes not leaving Zhengui. "The mists and ice are not good for spectation."

"I, Zhen will face whoever Big Sister likes," Zhen hissed haughtily.

"Gui too," his other half agreed. "Are we gonna fight Mister Avalanche?"

"It seems so," Wang Chao seemed fairly chuffed, rolling his shoulders as he surveyed the Xuan Wu. "Let it not be said that Wang Chao would ignore a ladies request. Liang, will you see to the field settings. Then you can join the ladies."

The other boy chuckled, glancing over at the two of them nervously. "Of Course, Lord Wang, I hope you enjoy your spar."

"It should be good fun. I assume your spirit does not need to be coddled, Miss Ling?" Wang Chao asked.

"...I will trust your discretion," Ling Qi replied, and the words were difficult to force out. She felt a pang of pain at the thought of leaving Zhengui to fight a stronger opponent unsupported, but it was only a spar. She couldn't baby him, if he was going to keep up with her. "Zhengui, fight hard, okay?"

"Yes, Big Sister!" They both announced in unison.

Together with Alingge, Ling Qi withdrew to the edge of the training field as the air around it shimmered, not cutting them off from the outside, but just preventing any stray qi or objects from flying out and disrupting the rest of the training grounds. Ling Qi glanced to the fur clad girl at her side. "...Do you actually have trouble seeing through my mist?"

"It is an effort," Alingge replied shortly, watching as Wang Chao and Zhengui walked apart, giving each other some starting distance. "Effort better spent elsewhere. Though it was amusing to watch you hunt in the tournament."

Ling Qi hummed, noting the faint circulation of qi through the girl's eyes, ears and nose. She was activating some kind of perception art. "And I have improved quite a lot since then," she mused.

"Yes," the other girl agreed.
Out in the field, Wang Chao had leveled his pike at Zhengui. "Let us begin then! Sir Ling, I will give you a five count to prepare yourself!"

Ling Qi blinked, referring to Zhengui that way… Wang Chao was taking her claim of him as her little brother kind of seriously wasn't he. She wondered, was that actually a thing she could do, legally speaking?

"Oh, you better not look down on Gui," her little brother grumbled, even as his shell flared with volcanic light, and Ling Qi felt his root system spreading under the field. The air around Zhen distorted with heat.

"He's surprisingly earnest," Ling Qi said idly.

"Lord Wang is very straightforward," She glanced over to see Liang He approaching them. She took a moment to study his face. All playfulness aside, he really did seem slightly afraid of her.

"I am glad I came to him for help with this then," Ling Qi said, dipping her head politely. "...And I am sorry for injuring you so badly. It only seemed respectful to use my finisher after you used yours."

Wang Chao had begun to move toward Zhengui, ripples of qi echoing from his feet with each step. Every pulse pinged out and reverberated back, flooding back into his meridians. Each pulse was weak, but with every step they were growing slowly stronger. The earth between him and Zhengui erupted with crawling surging branches and vines, a fortress wall rising from the earth as Zhen's throat swelled with superheated qi.

"I understood," he said with a weak chuckle, turning his eyes to the battle. Ling Qi considered the way he regarded Wang Chao's back as he charged into the teeth of Zhengui's defenses. Her earlier musing had been off base. Taking things seriously, that seemed more like the way Han Fang had looked at Han Jian. There was nothing romantic there, just loyalty, and something vaguely familial.

"Not a bad barrier!" Wang Chao announced. "But the foundation is unstable!" Ling Qi blinked as he thrust his pike right into the grasping, regenerating vines with no sign of a more powerful technique, but she blinked as the qi of Zhengui's Paradise Rampart cracked and violently shattered around the point of impact, taking its physical manifestation with it.

Of course, her little brother was alert, and before the debris had even struck the ground, a massive glob of molten glass and liquid fire struck Wang Chao full on.

"Your Zhengui has considerable power for his cultivation," Alingge observed. She stood with her arms crossed under her fur cloak, wholly still except for her eyes. Her composure had obviously recovered. "Is that natural, or have you used some technique to bolster him?"
"...Elder Ying gave me some lessons on spirit bonding, and aiding growth, but nothing like an art," Ling Qi replied. "Is that a thing?" If so, some parts of the Songseekers Ceremony made more sense

The other girl glanced at her. "There are cultivation arts for this, yes."

Laughter rang out from the clearing smoke as Wang Chao barreled through, glowing molten droplets flying from his armor. It was a deep belly laugh too. It seemed that he was that type of fighter. It was too bad that Gan Guangli was not here, he would probably be better at this, Ling Qi lamented.

He crossed the remaining distance to her little brother in barely a moment, grasping roots torn wholesale from the earth when they tried to hinder his feet. His pike swung out, and Zhengui's head pulled back into his shell as he stamped forward, presenting his shelled shoulder to the blow. There was a ring like a temple gong being struck as metal met shell, and the hard packed earth beneath them shattered in a shower of grit and stony shrapnel.

...At least Zhengui seemed to be having fun, going by the excitement ringing through their bond.

"It's probably not a bad idea to let him play around with some other folks. You are kind of an ass to fight," Sixiang chuckled.

"He's holding back though," Ling Qi said absently, only realizing that he had spoken aloud a moment later.

"It is not typically the point of a spar to immediately crush your opponent," Liang He said.

"I know that," Ling Qi replied. All the same, the ugly feeling that sometimes rose up after a spar with Meizhen or Cai Renxiang stirred in her stomach. It seemed watching her little brother be on the other end of it was no less disatisfying.

Wang Chao skidded back, catching Zhen's striking fangs on his forearm, as her little brother pushed him away, the crack in his shell left by their clash already sealing up with oozing liquid green qi drawn from the earth under his feet. She clenched her fists as Wang Chao punched Zhen directly in the snout with a boulder like crash, with such force that the serpent's head flew backward, molten spittle flying from his jaws.

"It is not so uneven as it looks. He is ramping up now that he has tested your Zhengui's toughness," Alingge said. "...What a strange beast qi."

"What do you mean by that anyway?" Ling Qi asked, not looking away from the fight. The hole in the Paradise Rampart technique had sealed itself, cutting off retreat as Gui hunkered down, drawing vitality from his roots and Wang Chao was trading blows with Zhen, liquid fire going everywhere and setting the grass alight.

"It is the way of my clan to cultivate through observation and study of beasts and plants," Alingge replied. "This is why I thank you for the opportunity. Beast Qi are the energies which make up a beasts' natural functions."

"Ah, so it's all beast qi, even if it's fire or wood or whatever else," Ling Qi caught on easily.

"Yes," Alingge agreed.

The earth roiled as spearing stabbing roots erupted, shattering on Wang Chao's armor as he charged back into melee with Zhengui, the ripples echoing from his footfalls were growing quite dense and potent now, and his armor and flesh were taking on a stony texture. The ground shook when he walked now. Stone peeled away and burned as he took another Volcanic Shot directly to the chest.

The difference in potency between the arts of a cultivator at the fourth stage of green and a beast at the second was telling it seemed.

...And she had underestimated Wang Chao a little, it seemed.

Wang Chao leaped, the force of his jump cracking the already ruined field, and a dark grey shell of qi that had been building with each pulse exploded off of him, forming a spheroid shell as he fell back to earth on a collision course with Zhengui.

To his credit, Gui let out his own earthshaking below of challenge as he hardened his stance, preparing for impact. The resulting blast sent a powerful gust outward, sending her hair and gown fluttering.

"It looks like he needs a little more work," Ling Qi said with a wry chuckle. "I might have to cut back on cultivation to train him a little more."

"That is a strange conclusion," Alingge replied, peering into the rising cloud of smoke and grit that consumed both combatants. "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation."

"And he hardly showed himself poorly," Liang He said tentatively, finally speaking up again.

"You're being kinda unreasonable again," Sixiang pointed out.

"Hoho, you are a sturdy one!" Wang Chao's voice interrupted the conversation as the smoke began to clear. The field was cratered inward several meters, and Zhengui lay at the bottom of the crater. Well, lay had the wrong implications. He was embedded in the bottom of the crater, only the top of his shell sticking out of the dirt. Several spikes were cracked or broken, and a spiderweb of fractures spread across the whole structure, but she forced herself to acknowledge that Zhengui was fine. He was already beginning to regenerate the damage.

Zhen wormed his head out of the earth, emerging from the shell covered in dust and grit. He looked distinctly displeased. "I, Zhen am not defeated!"

"Perhaps not, Sir Ling, but there is nothing more to be gained. I have your measure. Anything more will need to involve Miss Ling," Wang Chao called down from the top of the crater. He was dusty and a bit scorched, but otherwise unharmed.

"Looks like that's my cue," Ling Qi chuckled. She took a step, and appeared at the lip of the crater. "You did a very good job little brother!" She called down.

Gui's head emerged from the dirt next as he continued to dig himself out. "But Big Sister, I can still fight!" he complained.

"I know how tough you are Zhengui. But you have to save some energy for when we fight together later, okay?" Ling Qi said

He grumbled, but began to climb out of the dirt.

"It seems you had quite the good fortune in finding this one, Miss Ling," Wang Chao said.

"Thank you, I am very proud of Zhengui," she replied. "Do you think you can help me?"

"Defenses have certainly been built on worse foundations," the stout boy chuckled, looking back over his shoulder at the approaching Alingge and Liang He. "I think I can manage some advice. It will give me something to do until those crawling cowards and barbarians show themselves again!"

It seemed that he was in a pretty good mood.

[] Try to arrange weekly training sessions for the next month with just Zhengui, Wang Chao and yourself. (More focused training, higher but more narrow skill bonuses, Zhengui gets better martial training.)
[] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)
 
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[] Try to arrange weekly training sessions for the next month with just Zhengui, Wang Chao and yourself. (More focused training, higher but more narrow skill bonuses, Zhengui gets better martial training.)

Thinking this.

That went alright. Good to chat with Sword Boi. A moment of silence for all the students that Qi crushed in a duel offscreen after Yrs stopped showing challenges.
 
[X] Try to arrange weekly training sessions for the next month with just Zhengui, Wang Chao and yourself. (More focused training, higher but more narrow skill bonuses, Zhengui gets better martial training.)

This is the most direct way of advancing both our Wang Chao SL and on improving our collaboration with our son.
 
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Nice!

Zhengui being awesome and having fun, even if he couldn't fight until the end, is quite good.

... It's more Ling Qi's end of things that is worrying, here.

"...I will trust your discretion," Ling Qi replied, and the words were difficult to force out. She felt a pang of pain at the thought of leaving Zhengui to fight a stronger opponent unsupported, but it was only a spar. She couldn't baby him, if he was going to keep up with her. "Zhengui, fight hard, okay?"
Domain conflict. Something's making it hard for Ling Qi to let her family fight their own battles.

"I know that," Ling Qi replied. All the same, the ugly feeling that sometimes rose up after a spar with Meizhen or Cai Renxiang stirred in her stomach. It seemed watching her little brother be on the other end of it was no less disatisfying.
Don't know that this is a domain conflict, precisely; it might just be a consequence of Ling Qi being ambitious and greedy on her family's behalf. Still something to keep an eye on, especially since Zhengui appears to have enjoyed his spar.

"That is a strange conclusion," Alingge replied, peering into the rising cloud of smoke and grit that consumed both combatants. "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation."
And the money-shot.

Pretty sure this is a consequence of making Loneliness and Isolation core to Ling Qi's Domain. We're going to have to find ways to work around it.

Ling Qi blinked, referring to Zhengui that way… Wang Chao was taking her claim of him as her little brother kind of seriously wasn't he. She wondered, was that actually a thing she could do, legally speaking?
Hopefully it is. If Wang Chao is taking it seriously, it's likely he's not the only one who will, and having it all official gives the relationship more force.
 
"It looks like he needs a little more work," Ling Qi said with a wry chuckle. "I might have to cut back on cultivation to train him a little more."

"That is a strange conclusion," Alingge replied, peering into the rising cloud of smoke and grit that consumed both combatants. "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation."

"And he hardly showed himself poorly," Liang He said tentatively, finally speaking up again.

"You're being kinda unreasonable again," Sixiang pointed out.
And here Ling Qi has three people attempting to talk sense into her, we'll see how much will simply bounce off :D
 
Very nice update. Both Wang and Alingge are good civ. Wang with him going on to call Zhengui "sir Ling" and being jolly and Ali with her "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation." line.
 
I think this:

[] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)

will give the best benefits. More exposure to cultivators will be good for everyone. Plus we need to up our socials. And I'm sure if we can sorta wingman Wang with Alingge that will be for our goals with his clan. Who knows maybe sword boy will even say something at some point.
 
Don't know that this is a domain conflict, precisely; it might just be a consequence of Ling Qi being ambitious and greedy on her family's behalf. Still something to keep an eye on, especially since Zhengui appears to have enjoyed his spar.
That is probably not a domain conflict, or if it was it would be one going back to... when LQ was yellow at least. She always had a problem with how easily CRX and Meizhen can handle her in spars.
 
[] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)
I want to see more from Alingge.
She seems to nicely believe that helping ones Spirit is cultivating.
Can't ask for a better Insight for Ling Qi :)
 
. "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation."

What if the message embedded in here is the answer to the issue of cultivation vs family we've been having. Ling Qi feels like moving forward in her cultivation leaves her family behind, and conversely, focusing on her family hampers her cultivation. What if instead the issue was mentally reframed into "being there for our family helps me move forward in my cultivation".

Now I doubt it would be so simple, but it would act as a bridge between the two concepts that are causing us harm.
 
Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators

I am hopeful that with a broader base to work from, it might be easier for "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation" to be a thing that Ling Qi to take advantage of.

Life is not about conflict, though some parts are. Let little brother make friends. And if we are lucky, and clever, and thoughtful, Ling Qi just might find a path that includes the above "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation."

Edit: Alingge may well have lessons worth learning. We are greater, when we lift up others.
 
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Oho curious choices my take on this
[] Try to arrange weekly training sessions for the next month with just Zhengui, Wang Chao and yourself. (More focused training, higher but more narrow skill bonuses, Zhengui gets better martial training.)

Pure Zhengui training for tank purposes but not much breadth outside of it and low social making friends seems iffy with this word choice

[X] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)

High social less focused on training Zhengui but more varied opponents and able to experience different factors in battle makes me want to lean on this just because of diversities sake.
Oh and we make friends
 
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We're going to have problems with any solution that rejects Ling Qi going off on her own to Cultivate.

Loneliness is no longer optional, if you will.

I think we might be better off leaning into HDW and SCS insights for some kind of "presence-without-presence;" finding a way for Ling Qi to be there for her family without physically being there.
 
I see two problems with our relationship with Zhengui:

1. We don't know how to work with him at all. Given that spirits are supposed to help their cultivators, this is not good.

2. His only relationships are with us and Hanyi. That's just plain unhealthy for a human and is probably not good for spirits either.

Also Ling Qi's rather dense and really needs to get hit by a clue-by-four sometimes. I feel like Wang is going to be a good influence on her.

I think we might be better off leaning into HDW and SCS insights for some kind of "presence-without-presence;" finding a way for Ling Qi to be there for her family without physically being there.

WHR has an interesting power: it can create stationary zones of qi while the cultivator is off doing something else. That could have some beneficial consequences if we can get it into our domain.

Maybe our residence will always be surrounded by some light fog in the future?
 
[] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)

Leaning towards this atm.
First for the social aspect. Wang seems to like bigger crowds so he can show off and making it a small training might make the social gain towards him lesser, but it would probably make it less awkward to LQ. There seems to be some social dynamics that could play on each other here. (The does Wang like Liang or want to wingman for him for example) Would probably help Alingge from the comment on how she observes beast qi. (And I really want LQ to get more exposure to her thinking, "Empowering clan and companions is cultivation" yes pls thank you very much) I wonder if Zhengui will get to spend time with more spirit beasts in this one.

Training wise is am more divided. On one hand having Zhengui get deeper training from Wang might be really good, but from what we heard this update having broad experience fighting different types is good in itself. So a bit of a toss up as both of them are really good.
 
[X] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)

Lets improve our social while we are training. and maybe we will end up making a new friend, or at least an ally, here, later. That is something Ling needs to improve very much...
I wonder if we will get to ' help' the one of them, the way we did with the girl our little ice singer bullied, with that ridiculous roll... Spread some of that Ling Qi luck around so others will be better prepared to the oncoming conflict as well.

Also, this way Treasure Turtle gets to improve his damp state as well, and gain veriety of exsperiances.
 
[] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)

I would be tempted to go with this vote. It stills train Zhengui seriously, but let our baby brother meet more cultivators and their different cultivation and skill-sets. Zhengui and Ling Qi are still painfully unfamiliar with a wide range of cultivator techniques and traditions, and I'm really curious what Alingge can bring with her knowledge of beast Qi. Plus it's a way to make friendship and alliances with future important cultivators. Their outlook might also be good to counterbalance Ling Qi's own one, as seen in this chapter.

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[X] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)
Moratium
 
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[ ] You have been trying to improve your social game. Keep pushing it. See if you can arrange something with not only Wang Chao, but also Alingge, Liang He and possibly others. (Social Benefits. Less focused training. Lower but wider skill bonuses. Zhengui gets more experience with other cultivators.)

Ling Qi has something of a history of making friends with a bunch of different people, without actually succeeding at bringing them together to be friends with each other. We might want to change that.

Especially since finding allies who can help each other is a way for Ling Qi to help her family without being physically present for them.
 
So, not Domain, just "Darkness cultivator things." Makes sense.
Less darkness cultivator things and more the entire motivation behind her cultivation. She wants to be strong enough that no one can just casually squash her. And she's extending that to her family. If they're going to fight then they need to be unbeatable too.

To be free is to be strong enough that no one can stop you.
 
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