Onmyodo Monogatari (Japanese Heian-era fantasy)

The Ninth
You smile at her. "I don't mind at all," you say. "And I have something for you as well." Her eyes, grow big, and you take out the poem, presenting it to her, self-conciously, with both hands. She suppresses a small squeal, and sorta stiffly bows and takes the poem with both hands. She very, very carefully unfolds it, so as to not rip any part of it by accident. She reads it slowly, and you catch fragemtns of it as she mouthes to herself. "Amber dawn… still pond.. Joyful… blessings." she mumbles as she reads, then her face lights up with joy!

She turns to you and you see her throw up her hands as to embrace you before she stops herself, and she looks down, mortified at herself - and yet you see her smiling. "Thank you," she says. "That was really beautiful." Carefully, she folds it up and puts it into her robes. You turn back to the pond, as the golden hues slowly fade away. She pulls out a small box with a few mochi-cakes and shares them with you as the sunlight fades into twilight. "I love this place," she says, then furrows her brows.

"Sunlight fades away
Covering all in twilight
Long are summer days
But they do not -
What's a good word for remain?" she asks
"'Last'?" you supply, and she smiles
"But they cannot last -" She stops again. "Forever's too long."
"Eternal, perha- no wait, that's too long too."
"I think i'll have to rephrase it, she says."
As you talk, she's… leaning against you, holding your arm with hers. She thinks for a moment.
"But even long days must end
And yet their warmth still remains."


You smile and clap. "It's beautiful!," you say, and her face lights up with joy at your praise. And then you begin one, and when you stumble over words, she helps you.

How long do you sit there, Tomiko leaning on your shoulder, improvising poetry and enjoying the warm night? (note: hours in ancient japan are double as long as modern hours)

[ ]: Not very long. It's already late, and our parents will already be mad at us being out so late so far from the palace! We compose a few more poems, then i suggest we head home together.
[ ]: Half an hour, perhaps. We compose poems, laugh, talk, eat the moshi, and just enjoy the air as it slowly cools.
[ ]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
[ ]: I stay up all night! Or at least until she asks me to return or we fall asleep! We'll definately get in trouble, of course, but we probably will anyway already, and why not enjoy this for as long as we can?
[ ]: I have some other plan! Write in.

You can ask Tomiko whatever you want.

Adhoc vote count started by Magnusth on Mar 18, 2019 at 3:18 PM, finished with 7 posts and 6 votes.

  • [X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
    [X]: Half an hour, perhaps. We compose poems, laugh, talk, eat the moshi, and just enjoy the air as it slowly cools.

Adhoc vote count started by Magnusth on Mar 18, 2019 at 9:27 PM, finished with 13 posts and 12 votes.

  • [X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
    [X]: Half an hour, perhaps. We compose poems, laugh, talk, eat the moshi, and just enjoy the air as it slowly cools.
    [X]: I stay up all night! Or at least until she asks me to return or we fall asleep! We'll definately get in trouble, of course, but we probably will anyway already, and why not enjoy this for as long as we can?

Adhoc vote count started by Magnusth on Mar 19, 2019 at 5:44 AM, finished with 14 posts and 13 votes.

  • [X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
    [X]: Half an hour, perhaps. We compose poems, laugh, talk, eat the moshi, and just enjoy the air as it slowly cools.
    [X]: I stay up all night! Or at least until she asks me to return or we fall asleep! We'll definately get in trouble, of course, but we probably will anyway already, and why not enjoy this for as long as we can?

Adhoc vote count started by Magnusth on Mar 19, 2019 at 7:15 PM, finished with 16 posts and 15 votes.

  • [X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
    [X]: Half an hour, perhaps. We compose poems, laugh, talk, eat the moshi, and just enjoy the air as it slowly cools.
    [X]: I stay up all night! Or at least until she asks me to return or we fall asleep! We'll definately get in trouble, of course, but we probably will anyway already, and why not enjoy this for as long as we can?

Adhoc vote count started by Magnusth on Mar 23, 2019 at 6:43 PM, finished with 18 posts and 11 votes.
 
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[Q]: I have some other plan! And then we were kidnapped by an Oni :V:V:V
Best plan.

[X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[X]: Half an hour, perhaps. We compose poems, laugh, talk, eat the moshi, and just enjoy the air as it slowly cools.
 
[X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?

Well, his mother at least knows he got a date, so hopefully that'll stop her from getting too worried. Still, as the option points out, stuff like this isn't going to be all that possible anymore in the future. We might as well let them be as precious in that time as they can manage.
 
[X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[x]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[x]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?

We'll probably get in trouble anyway, enjoy the transitory beauty before our mothers beat the crap out of us for this. Don't stay out the night though, or no one will find enough of our bodies.
 
[X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[x]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[X]: Half an hour, perhaps. We compose poems, laugh, talk, eat the moshi, and just enjoy the air as it slowly cools.
 
[X]: I stay up all night! Or at least until she asks me to return or we fall asleep! We'll definately get in trouble, of course, but we probably will anyway already, and why not enjoy this for as long as we can?

Kogitsunemaru should be many things, but never boring.
 
[x]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
[X]: I stay up all night! Or at least until she asks me to return or we fall asleep! We'll definately get in trouble, of course, but we probably will anyway already, and why not enjoy this for as long as we can?
 
[X]: An hour! It'll be pretty late then, but we can spend the time composing poems, laughting, talking having fun. I won't be back until half an hour later, and i've only rarely been out that late, and never away from the palace, so i'll probably get in pretty big trouble, but… it's so nice here, and who knows when it'll happen again?
 
The Tenth
You sit and laugh with Tomiko, your… friend? Girlfriend? You're not sure. You don't care much, either, you just enjoy her poetry and she yours as you talk and share poems.
To your surprise, and utter delight, it quickly becomes clear that she is much better educated in the poetic canon than you are - she quotes several famous poems you only recognize faintly, all of them meditations on the beauty of love, and the futility of trying to deny it. She is also the best poet you have ever heard, you're quite sure, even if she stumbles here and there. You can't help but feel lucky that she's chosen to share her time with you.

Time passes far too quickly. The beautiful orange of the sky fades to deep red, and then to nothing. You lie back, bathed in moonlight, and talk about the beautiful stars. Each of you make poetry about them, and she asks you what each star means, and you point out the constellations, among them Hokuto, the seven stars of the north star, and also the zodiac animals you remember.
She smiles, and listens, and you feel her hand against yours, and you just lie there for a while. You exchange more poetry, but you also just enjoy the beautiful night's sky and the chirping of circadas as you hold hands in the moonlight.

Eventually, you get cold, lying in the grass, and your robes get clammy from the dew. You feel Tomiko shivering, and both of you stand up. "We should get home," you say. "It's late, and we'll be even colder if we stay." Tomiko nods, but doesn't let go of your hand as you walk out.
Before you leave the shrine, you go ring the bell and bow before the god one more time, thanking them for letting you enjoy this one evening in their presence.

You walk out of the shrine and the park, hand in hand, but seperate as you step out into the city again, in the dark. Just as it strikes you that it is rather late and you are rather young, you see Ueno no Jun-dono, your minder, and the husband of your old nurse, waiting for you, smiling. He stands next to an ox-drawn carriage. You've been in such carriages a few times, with your father, going here or there, or with Ueno no Jun.



Jun-dono smiles at you. "There you are! Your mother asked me to pick you up. Time to go home, it's getting late," he says, and picks, first you, then tomiko, up, and put you both in the carriage, opposite each other. "I'll be out driving the ox," he says. "You two kids play nice." He smiles as he says it, and blinks at you in particular, then leaves you two to go drive the carriage. Tomiko quickly changes her place to sit next to you, and she leans on you, and you on her. You are both tired, after all, and the steady rocking of the carriage is almost… enough… to lull…

You notice, that the wagon has stopped, and Tomiko is leaning against you, drooling slightly.

You call out to Jun-dono.
No reply, and only few, muted noises outside.

The hairs stand on the back of your neck, and your entire body shivers. There's… something very wrong. Something out there, perhaps.

What do you do?

[ ]: I cry, and call out for my mommy. This is scary, and dangerous!
[ ]: I cry, and call out for my father! This is scary, and dangerous!
[ ]: I lean back, take a few deep breaths, and open up my second sight.
[ ]: I gently push Tomiko aside, then push the blinds aside to look outside, see what is happening.
[ ]: I call out to Tsuzura. If she really is a spirit, perhaps she can hear me and help me?
[ ]: I recite the Great Compassion Mantra, Omu Mani Padome Fumu, which is supposedly the greatest mantra and perhaps might protect us from what is out there?
[ ]: I recite the Shurangama mantra, a very long mantra which is said to protect from all harm.
[ ]: I recite the chant my father told me, to awaken the small gods of various things, to talk to the carriage itself. Perhaps it knows what is going on? Or can help us?
[ ]: I do something else! Write in!

In your inner pocket, you have a paper talisman, given to you by your father, to protect you from various things. You could give it to tomiko, if you want, put it inside her robes with little fuss.

Do you do that?

[ ]: Yes! I give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm trained for strange things, after all, and know mantras to protect myself if there is something bad happening!
[ ]: No! I don't give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm scared, this is dangerous, and i'm not very good at mantras! If i have to go do something, it'd be more dangerous without the talisman!
Adhoc vote count started by Magnusth on Mar 21, 2019 at 6:00 AM, finished with 9 posts and 9 votes.

  • [x]: Yes! I give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm trained for strange things, after all, and know mantras to protect myself if there is something bad happening!
    [x]: I recite the chant my father told me, to awaken the small gods of various things, to talk to the carriage itself. Perhaps it knows what is going on? Or can help us?
    [X]: I lean back, take a few deep breaths, and open up my second sight.
    [x]: No! I don't give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm scared, this is dangerous, and i'm not very good at mantras! If i have to go do something, it'd be more dangerous without the talisman!
    [X]: I recite the Shurangama mantra, a very long mantra which is said to protect from all harm.
    [x]: I gently push Tomiko aside, then push the blinds aside to look outside, see what is happening.
    [x]: I call out to Tsuzura. If she really is a spirit, perhaps she can hear me and help me?
 
[x]: I recite the chant my father told me, to awaken the small gods of various things, to talk to the carriage itself. Perhaps it knows what is going on? Or can help us?
[x]: Yes! I give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm trained for strange things, after all, and know mantras to protect myself if there is something bad happening!

I like the thought of speaking to the carriage to ask what sort of horrible thing is lurking out there. Plus, if Jun is compromised, maybe we might still be able to roll away from this situation. I'm protecting Tomiko because she seems to be from a pretty important family so maybe the entire family would be killed or have problems if she got eaten by a ghost. Whereas if it's just our character then no problem, mom and dad can try again for a kid who'll stick to curfew.
 
[X]: I lean back, take a few deep breaths, and open up my second sight.
[x]: Yes! I give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm trained for strange things, after all, and know mantras to protect myself if there is something bad happening!

Stay calm, figure out whats up.
 
[X]: I recite the Shurangama mantra, a very long mantra which is said to protect from all harm.
[X]: I recite the chant my father told me, to awaken the small gods of various things, to talk to the carriage itself. Perhaps it knows what is going on? Or can help us?

[X]: Yes! I give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm trained for strange things, after all, and know mantras to protect myself if there is something bad happening!

I'm torn between using the extra time we would get from starting straight with the mantra for the absolute protection, or gathering informatio first. It might be best to not look directly though, who knows if a young boy will like what he sees.
 
Update is not threadmarked.

[x]: I gently push Tomiko aside, then push the blinds aside to look outside, see what is happening.
[x]: I call out to Tsuzura. If she really is a spirit, perhaps she can hear me and help me?
[x]: I recite the chant my father told me, to awaken the small gods of various things, to talk to the carriage itself. Perhaps it knows what is going on? Or can help us?

[x]: No! I don't give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm scared, this is dangerous, and i'm not very good at mantras! If i have to go do something, it'd be more dangerous without the talisman!
 
[X]: I lean back, take a few deep breaths, and open up my second sight.
[x]: Yes! I give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm trained for strange things, after all, and know mantras to protect myself if there is something bad happening!
 
[X]: I lean back, take a few deep breaths, and open up my second sight.
[x]: Yes! I give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm trained for strange things, after all, and know mantras to protect myself if there is something bad happening!
 
This might be a bad idea...but i do prefer the idea of trying to deal with the problem ourselves first.


[x]: I recite the chant my father told me, to awaken the small gods of various things, to talk to the carriage itself. Perhaps it knows what is going on? Or can help us?

[X]: No! I don't give my talisman to Tomiko. I'm scared, this is dangerous, and i'm not very good at mantras! If i have to go do something, it'd be more dangerous without the talisman!

Well, if the cariage become sentient, they can self drive and scout at the same time...that's a useful for retreat.

Better yet, order the carriage to evacuate Tomiko away, while kogitsunemaru cover for them?

And if we are sending Tomiko and carriage away, then we will need the charm for ourselves as we face the youkai.

...well, giving or keeping the talisman is really dependent on what kagitsunemaru is going to do. Tomiko won't need it if he send her away and whoever is attacking won't bother with her since he is the one they want if he stay to cover for their escape.

On the other hand...if he stay in the carriage and fight with them, then tomiko need the talisman...what to do...
 
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