TenfoldShields
Lounging on a Hoard of Words
- Pronouns
- He/Him
You always wanted to be something. You always expected to be something. Through your entire life, success has graced you. No, you have taken success and made it what it is; rightfully yours. But tonight, you tried too much, and this time you bit more than you could bear and in response your failure perforated your lungs, broke both your arms and a shoulder, fucked up your throat, tore off a leg and left you with the garbage to cry out your sorrows like the failure you are.
#millennialmood
i mean this is pretty on track, except usually the "get your legs ripped off and beaten to death with 'em" is more metaphorical.
Choose fighting for the God's empty throne. Choose the Ten Thousand Hells. Choose the Yama Kings. Choose the Throne of Want. Choose desire and raw passion. Choose ascension. Choose an eternity of ambition. Choose hellish enlightenment. Choose the Wheel of Ages. Choose the quailing earth. Choose the trembling heavens. Choose the keys to the kingdom. Choose the Sixth Age.
Choose Royalty.
Choose Exaltation.
Man I don't even have anything to say to this, the revised rewrite was immensely compelling just, like, that hook of "the end is coming, you can feel it. This world will come crumbling down. You're standing at the edge and you can't go back so what do you do as this new world dawns". It scratches all kinds of itches I didn't even know I had and I love it to bits really. And I'm super thrilled to see Manus leveraging it to full effect.
[X] Playing Mindless Games: You are a popular girl, you've always been so. Your life has been one long search for excellence. You were head cheerleader, most popular girl and queen bitch par excellence in high school, and when you reached the law school that you knew lay in your destiny, little changed. Little miss perfect's royal entourage of fawning admirers never shrank, nor did the hilarity you found in playing them off against each other. Oh, what joy.
I like this a lot. Just that idea that the PC was easily, effortlessly, the top of the social food chain and then just, like, abruptly found herself at the bottom of the more literal food chain. And I like the potential for the clash of just...going from being the biggest fish in the smallish pond to getting a glimpse of the nightmares behind the world and realizing how fake and shallow so much of it has been. It's a seed with a lot of potential to go in positive or negative directions and generate tons of conflict. And I'm a huge sucker for "I need to use these skills that I honed in a sorta low-stakes environment in this life-or-death situation". Where the PC has to leverage every inch of her social expertise to stay afloat in this fresh new hell.