[X] To the library (As reluctant as you are to revisit the site of your death, you want to look into some obituaries and news articles from the past...)
 
[X] Maybe you'll just stay a little while (If Midori is okay with it, you just want to stay here and take a proper break for a while, before the next crisis inevitably appears...)
 
[X] To the library (As reluctant as you are to revisit the site of your death, you want to look into some obituaries and news articles from the past...)
 
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So they have to have been around a lot recently. Even if they tried to Door in after-hours to look at the files, it would have been caught by security. More likely, they're posing as a nurse there regularly, so someone would have to have seen her.
Midori, you are assuming this wasn't a one-time cosplay. Which means that the 'nurse' is posing as a nurse regularly, which in turn means doing nurse-related tasks to maintain her presense (aka 'working at the hospital'), which would mean her shooing us out once the visiting hours were over - which is the primary source of our suspicions against her since it cut our investigation short - was her real responsibility as a staffer and not just a convenient excuse.

I mean, she'll probably turn out guilty anyway, if only because that would be a very cost-intensive red herring to pursue, update-wise, but I just felt like pointing it out. :V

[x] To just wander a bit (You want to find somewhere secluded to practice again, and maybe even transform a bit to figure out your powers better, too...)

I'd like to figure out our powers, whether magical or ghost ones. In fact, I'd prefer we concentrate on the latter. Would like to find out if being more or less tangible depends on an effort of will, and if we can affect the world through other means by exerting it.
 
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[X] To just wander a bit (You want to find somewhere secluded to practice again, and maybe even transform a bit to figure out your powers better, too...)
 
[X] Maybe you'll just stay a little while (If Midori is okay with it, you just want to stay here and take a proper break for a while, before the next crisis inevitably appears...)
 
Midori, you are assuming this wasn't a one-time cosplay. Which means that the 'nurse' is posing as a nurse regularly, which in turn means doing nurse-related tasks to maintain her presense (aka 'working at the hospital'), which would mean her shooing us out once the visiting hours were over - which is the primary source of our suspicions against her since it cut our investigation short - was her real responsibility as a staffer and not just a convenient excuse.
I wonder if it was a bit of both?
 
[X] To the library (As reluctant as you are to revisit the site of your death, you want to look into some obituaries and news articles from the past...)
 
[X] To just wander a bit (You want to find somewhere secluded to practice again, and maybe even transform a bit to figure out your powers better, too...)
 
[X] To just wander a bit (You want to find somewhere secluded to practice again, and maybe even transform a bit to figure out your powers better, too...)
 
> To just wander a bit (You want to find somewhere secluded to practice again, and maybe even transform a bit to figure out your powers better, too...)
This seems prudent to do.​

> To just wander a bit (You want to find somewhere secluded to practice again, and maybe even transform a bit to figure out your powers better, too...)

This could help yeah.

> To the library (As reluctant as you are to revisit the site of your death, you want to look into some obituaries and news articles from the past...)
Remember to put Xs in front of your votes.
Also, I'll be locking votes in 24 hours.
 
[X] To just wander a bit (You want to find somewhere secluded to practice again, and maybe even transform a bit to figure out your powers better, too...)
 
Extras - Music Post (Old Version)
In celebration of reaching 50 pages, and at the insistence of my Beta, I'm making a music post; picking out songs I feel are relevant to this quest and discussing why they are. Hopefully it would provide some interesting insight and some decent recommendations.

Unfortunately, my music tastes consist mostly of extremely edgy stuff left over from my goth phase (which I have admittedly not entirely left; please try not to judge me too harshly) and extremely bubbly basic-girl pop music, and a small bit of more downtempo pieces; neither of the first two categories entirely fit the tone, so there's also a few recommendations from the aforementioned Beta. Not all of it is what I personally listen to, but still fits the quest close enough to warrant a place here.

This will be split into three portions. I'm still not skilled with using spoiler drop-downs, so please excuse any awkward formatting.

A few songs that capture the broad tone I'm aiming for.

Breathe Again
Maybe an ironic name, but it's incredibly fitting both in music and (if you take a fairly literal interpretation) lyrics. This is what I would choose as an ED, were this a proper series.

I Know/The Break Down
Another downtempo piece, for similar reasons as the first. Not necessarily the most directly connected, but I place it high on the list because it's what I often listen to while writing. (This most recent update lacked it, and I feel the prose suffered as a result.)

24
Also more on the relaxed side, but moving into the darker side of my preferences. The lyrics primarily concern someone coming to terms with their imminent death, which while not entirely accurate, still captures Kikuko's struggles with the aftermath fairly well. The more energetic second half of the song would make for a great trailer, I'd think.

Intermission
The first recommendation from my Beta. A short electronic piece that seems to suit Kikuko's home city well. There's a sense of nervous anticipation to the opening seconds that makes me picture a sunset before a long and busy night. This would be a strong OP theme.

Invincible
I do have some appreciation for the classics, of course. This rock song is basically perfect for the overall idea, whether you call it 'girl power' or something more contemporary, I want to invoke. Things won't be easy by any means, and the antagonists I have in store will be more than prepared for a fight, but Kikuko and company have the agency, will, and capability to fight back.

I did my best to pick out specific themes for each of the protagonists. In the interest of avoiding spoilers, they're out of order and I won't go into detail about them, but hopefully who they're for and why will be clear in time. (Though I may make a proper explanation post at some point later, if it's desired.)

Muscle Memory

Perfect Enemy

Knights Of Cydonia

Bones

Desert Rose

Peacekeeper

While I also want to prevent spoilers with the antagonists, I do think it's fair to at least talk a little bit about what you'll be dealing with sooner or later. I won't give too much detail, but hopefully it will prove enlightening nonetheless.

Dream Eater
One from my Beta. The antagonist this fits is dangerous physically, yes, but the somewhat psychadelic sound of the song suggests the true threat they pose is of a different type entirely. (Though no, it's not eating dreams)

6 Underground
This one is connected to one of the antagonists more because it describes their outlook than their threat. The song is calming, but the lyrics are cynical. Even if it's an understandable viewpoint, it's still a harmful one.

Rinzler (Basic Slack Remix)
Another lyricless electronic piece suggested by my Beta. It's fitting for the character it corresponds to in terms of the sound and mood, of course, but there are more indirect, deeper connections as well.

Nemesis
This faster-paced, more violent song fits a faster-paced, more violent foe, but it's the lyrics that really make this one most suitable.

Entropy
From the same group as the song immediately prior, ironically, is a much darker piece describing a mindset of abject cruelty and existential nilhism. The villain I associate this with is admittedly the biggest threat to my goal of keeping the quest from getting too grimdark, but their thematic role is also of paramount importance for much the same reasons.

Change (In The House Of Flies)
And as a bit of a bonus, here's a song for an antagonist that you'll never face directly, but has some indirect impact on current events. Another somewhat edgy piece, but also fittingly so.

With that, that should be all for now. I hope you enjoy these.
 
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2L - Winding Down By The River
It takes a few moments to sort out your thoughts, struck by indecision. On one hand, it occurs to you to do some investigating of your own - you remember the shadowed entity you faced last night, that must at one point have been a student of your school. Perhaps there's merit in learning more about when they died, and if whatever it was that killed them is still a threat. Unfortunately, the records are all at the library, and you're… you're reluctant to revisit that place just yet.

On the other hand, it's also very tempting to just stay here. Today hasn't necessarily been as intense as the previous night, not by a long shot, but you've still had a lot of information and developments dumped on you in the past several hours. Even aside from that, you just feel emotionally exhausted. Your circumstances are starting to sink in now, but on some level you're fairly certain the dam is still waiting to break in full. You would love nothing more than to just stay and relax, making small talk with Midori and perhaps doing some sketching… But all the same, you can't quite bring yourself to ask; the way she's looking at you, the softness in her eyes, makes you squirm in discomfort. She would accept right away if you were to make the request, you can feel it, and it makes you feel intimidated and strangely guilty, though you're sure you've done nothing wrong. So no, as much as you're tempted to stay, you don't feel entirely ready for it, either.

So what else? You could go home, but it's still fairly early in the evening, so your family will likely still be up and about, eating supper and taking care of their nightly routines. Maybe you could just spend some time wandering around the city. Your rather… embarrassing performance during the chase with the nurse springs to mind, and it occurs to you that this could be a good opportunity to practice your abilities.

"I think I'm going to go and just spend some time walking around," you offer with a weak, uncertain half-smile. "It's still been a lot to adjust to; I want to clear my head." Midori looks disappointed, but nods all the same, and you once again clamp down on the strange guilty feeling. It's not technically a lie, just omitting a bit. If you said you were going to practice, after all, she might ask to come with, which would then run into the same problem as staying here would. You want to have some time to yourself.

~~~ .oO◯Oo. ~~~​

Of course, after you've said your farewells, detransformed, climbed out her window again, and wandered a fair distance, loneliness sets in; you're not sure whether to be amused or frustrated by your own indecision. You didn't used to have much of a problem with your social isolation, but neither were you completely cut off, either; your parents and little brother were often there if you wanted to talk to someone. Now even they're out of reach, leaving you with an airheaded alien bureaucrat and a classmate you're still ambivalent toward as your only company. Well, and Pallavi, though you can't exactly call on her just yet without it being weird. At any rate, your already-crippled social life has only been worsened by your death. The morbidity of the thought is strangely amusing; you crack a disbelieving grin and try to suppress the internal screaming.

Lost in your head, you don't realize how far you've gone until you arrive at the river. Running more-or-less diagonally through the city until ending up in the lake to the southeast, it's fed by several smaller streams and tributaries from the mountains all around. It's the main waterway you're at, though, and it strikes you just how far you've wandered. Here, the banks are fairly steep, leading from the street down to a narrow bike path far below, running directly beside the river. Off to your left is a rusted-brown but still powerful-looking suspension bridge, while further away to your right is a more modern-looking white arch-truss bridge with illumination from beneath. On the opposite shore, the buildings of downtown loom high to overlook both, the light from their many many windows reflected on the flowing water's uneven surface.

You glance about to make sure nobody's around to see you, before realizing that even if they were present, you're currently invisible. Facepalming, you take a stairway down the sharp slope to the bike path, and follow it under the older bridge. Sheltered beneath it and surrounded by support pillars, it seems like an excellent spot to practice for now; aside from some litter and a few rusting drum barrels half-embedded in the dirt since who knows how long ago, it seems surprisingly safe as well. So now, you just need to figure out what you're doing.

You decide to start simple, using the support beams as obstacles to practice walking through. Simple in theory, it proves stubborn in practice, and you waste a solid half-hour just trying to do this. Eventually, you end off just standing, leaning forward against the cold, flaky metal, forehead pressed into it as you glare in impotent frustration. "Please just let this work," you plead, but nothing happens.

"I hear it's said that 'trying the same thing over and over is a sign of insanity'," someone says behind you, and you slowly glance over your shoulder to see Death behind you. Of course. She's down on the bike path, seated atop her pale tan chopper from the first time you met, watching you with clear amusement. You don't even need to look to confirm that the skies are once again blood-red, the brown of the bridge supports turned grey. You're in her dimension once again, and it's still as utterly creepy as the times before.

"Well, dying hasn't exactly helped my mental health, you know," You respond coolly. "I'd love to see you do better."

She laughs, getting off the motorbike and doing some stretches. "Take it easy. Try not to think about your circumstances so much, just live in the moment. You may have better luck like that."

You were pretty good at living in the moment before, almost to a fault. You didn't really worry about the future much, and coasted through school, getting by without much effort while your real focus was on your ideas and artistic projects. In hindsight you probably should have given those matters more concern, given this was your last year…

"It's a bit hard to keep that up now, now that I'm involved in all of this," you mutter, crossing your arms and looking away, feeling surly. "Did you come here just to give me some life advice?"

"Actually, I had another task for you. Another Corrupted Spirit, though this one is fully developed. Just a poltergeist, thankfully."

You sigh, but nod acceptance. "Alright, where can I find it?"

Death chuckles, looking a bit sheepish. "Well, it's not something to be done right this second. It's in Mittsutakaihashi, so not exactly within walking distance. I'm telling you now so you can figure out travel arrangements, but you don't need to go until you're ready; tomorrow may be more suitable."

"I see." Mittsutakaihashi is the name of a tiny town way up in the mountains, a few dozen miles south of the city. As the crow flies, it's not a huge distance, but both roads and train lines wind among the peaks so much that it takes twice as long to reach as it should in theory. So this task would likely take at least three or four hours just in travel time round-trip, let alone the time spent hunting this poltergeist. "Thank you for letting me know."

Death nods, smiling. "Aside from that, I wanted to see how things are going for you. Is there anything you want to talk about, or any other questions you have?" It's still surreal to have the embodiment of Death itself asking these sorts of things. Still, today seems to have had a theme, so more inquiries certainly couldn't hurt.

What do you want to ask?
> Write-in


(Much like before, this vote will not be a competitive one. Just put the usual X before any and all questions you can think of, and they will all be counted. There may be some that can't be answered if Death doesn't know either, but don't let that discourage you.)
 
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Kikuko right now.

I think we're getting near the end of the second 'episode;' there's been a lot more emphasis on exposition, naturally, but tomorrow should prove more eventful.
 
[X] What are the metaphorical rules here anyway? Can you, like, take a vacation day or does that cause the concept of death to go kaput?
- [X] On a totally unrelated note is there anything you like to do to unwind?
-- [X] Not that I'm like asking you out or anything I swear I'm just curious! Totally! Noooooo ulterior motives here! None!

Operation "tea and cake with Death" starts right here.
 
[X] Do you know how long the last poltergeist had been there? Or when the person had died?
[X] Do you think the new poltergeist has been created by the same person?
[X] If we do have someone running around creating poltergeists- what is the end game for us? I rather doubt it's stop/free the poltergeists till the murderer dies of old age.
[X] Do you know where the location of the spirit in the town is? Easier to just go to a fight when people probably won't be there.

Beyond this - we can probably get on the train during school hours to deal with this.
 
[X] What do you know about the Ruling and the Emperor back in prehistory?
[X] When we talked in the graveyard, you acted like these guys only started showing up recently, but according to them they've been around for ages. Were you just being cagey, orrr...?
[X] What can you tell me about Magical Girls in general?

INB4 retcons :p
 
Can we become friends with Death and just hang around them from time to time and chat about dumb stuff like which anime character would win in a fight? :V

But seriously, I like the idea of just becoming pals with Death and chatting with them normally.
 
[X] Do you know how long the last poltergeist had been there? Or when the person had died?
[X] Do you think the new poltergeist has been created by the same person?
[X] If we do have someone running around creating poltergeists- what is the end game for us? I rather doubt it's stop/free the poltergeists till the murderer dies of old age.
[X] Do you know where the location of the spirit in the town is? Easier to just go to a fight when people probably won't be there.
[X] What do you know about the Ruling and the Emperor back in prehistory?
[X] When we talked in the graveyard, you acted like these guys only started showing up recently, but according to them they've been around for ages. Were you just being cagey, orrr...?
[X] What can you tell me about Magical Girls in general?

Whynotboth
 
[X] Do you know how long the last poltergeist had been there? Or when the person had died?
[X] Do you think the new poltergeist has been created by the same person?
[X] If we do have someone running around creating poltergeists- what is the end game for us? I rather doubt it's stop/free the poltergeists till the murderer dies of old age.
[X] Do you know where the location of the spirit in the town is? Easier to just go to a fight when people probably won't be there.
[X] What do you know about the Ruling and the Emperor back in prehistory?
[X] When we talked in the graveyard, you acted like these guys only started showing up recently, but according to them they've been around for ages. Were you just being cagey, orrr...?
[X] What can you tell me about Magical Girls in general?

Whynotboth
The votes aren't competitive this round...
 
You glance about to make sure nobody's around to see you, before realizing that even if they were present, you're currently invisible. Facepalming, you take a stairway down the sharp slope to the bike path, and follow it under the older bridge.
Right, that's another thing we want to figure out. Ghosts are intangible, they don't have mass or anything, which means that they shouldn't be bound by normal motion rules where it is enabled by friction. I think we should be able to learn to float... eventually.*

What's cool is that we can switch between our ghost and physical forms at will, and choose whether to be affected by certain laws of physics or not. I imagine that would allow us do things that could otherwise prove dangerous or lethal even for a magical girl.

*Well, not being bound by physical rules means that ideally we'd be able to materialize wherever we want to like Death does, but that's a bit of a long shot. Still, we aren't much of a helper if we can only be active in the vicinity of one city when Death has an entire world to look after.

[x] Alright, spill. What is the big secret of passing through walls?

She was the one who gave us that hint, and we've spent enough time with trial and error. She says we are trying going about it the wrong way, but does it mean she knows the right one?

[x] Are there people I can talk to about ghost stuff? Maybe someone who could help me figure grost-rules by which I am now bound?

...I think that might be a slightly more efficient solution than going around town screaming at 3 AM to see if anyone hears us. :V
But really, it might be nice to have a medium to talk to.

I am also interested in whether Death can find a specific soul on the other side to either talk to them, or enable us to do so. Since we are in the investigative business as a magical girl, being able to take witness accounts sounds invaluable. That question is probably best kept for when we have an actual case to pursue.

Mittsutakaihashi is the name of a tiny town way up in the mountains, a few dozen miles south of the city. As the crow flies, it's not a huge distance, but both roads and train lines wind among the peaks so much that it takes twice as long to reach as it should in theory. So this task would likely take at least four hours just in travel time, let alone the time spent hunting this poltergeist.
Just come up with a good excuse and use Nel's Airlines instead.
 
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