he hates the white fang and evryone who tries to defend them and will lose his cool and need to make a will save to prevent the punching out and or lecturing of anyone who tries. What else do you think might fight his general history plus we can alwaus pick up a few on the way through the quest
to clarify hell help you once and if you dont try to change it then your pathetic and deserve what you get
and ill take suggestions to help improve this
The problem is that, everybody hate the White Fang, so It's not a very big deal for him if he lost his control with them. And afgter all why hate the white fang more than the Schnee compagny for example ?
Well I realy would find for him a big default; Something dark like a bloody love for fight and kill ennemies, thirsts for forbidden knowledge,
excessive ambition, exct. Something like that who ils perfectly in his place in a universe like bloodborn and cthulu mythos.
I would make a character who is more neutral, who is not obligatory in the good side. I like characters who save the world but take their money in the process.
The problem is that, everybody hate the White Fang, so It's not a very big deal for him if he lost his control with them. And afgter all why hate the white fang more than the Schnee compagny for example ?
Well I realy would find for him a big default; Something dark like a bloody love for fight and kill ennemies, thirsts for forbidden knowledge,
excessive ambition, exct. Something like that who ils perfectly in his place in a universe like bloodborn and cthulu mythos.
I would make a character who is more neutral, who is not obligatory in the good side. I like characters who save the world but take their money in the process.
so like John Constantine
so if he takes targets who go for forbidden knowledge and experiments just so he can raid their notes is that what you mean and he would like to sav the world but he looks after friends first and foremost and will axctively hunt those who hurt them, like roman torchwick did to ruby by trying to kill her, and slaughter them without mercy hang them up by their guts and then burn everything they own to ash and make their cronies watch
so if he takes targets who go for forbidden knowledge and experiments just so he can raid their notes is that what you mean and he would like to sav the world but he looks after friends first and foremost and will axctively hunt those who hurt them, like roman torchwick did to ruby by trying to kill her, and slaughter them without mercy hang them up by their guts and then burn everything they own to ash and make their cronies watch
[X] Plan Royalist
[X] Name: Clay Nemain
[X] Age: 17
[X] Race (Human or Faunus, please Specify): Snake Faunus
[X] Color Scheme: Terracotta, Black, and Green
[X] Homeland:Mistral
[X] Appearance: A young man, almost tall enough to stand head and shoulders over first year students (around 6 feet). He has brown hair, and green eyes with reptilian pupils. He dresses in formal clothes tailored with specialized combat capabilities to resist damage, appearing as a black duster over a vest and buttoned shirt, with tall boots, long gloves, and an Atlesian (Homburg) hat.
[X] Any Family?: Three cousins (triplets, two female, one male)(Helia, Diana, and Asterus) who live in one of the nomad communities in the wildland. His parents (Aurea and Anguis) disappeared during a Grimm attack only a few years ago, and his sister (Euryale) is somewhat hesitant to be around him when near other people.
[X] Right Hand Weapon Description: A yatagan, inlaid with channels for dust and a handle capable of turning it into a bayonet. (Name: Falling Leaf)
[X] Left Hand Weapon Description: A katar designed to channel dust, and combined with a pair of dust-compatible pistols. (Raven's Claw)
[X] History: Clay has always been an oddity. He is quite affable, even likeable. But he hides a significant dark side. He secretly loves the feeling of the chase, the thrill of combat, the smell of fear. He grew up with parents who served the Grimmbloods, Knights in all but name, and was groomed to be the next Royal Huntsmaster. His sister Euryale was groomed instead to act as a defender, clad all in white robes and silver plate. But having a human mother and a Faunus father led to complications, and he secretly thinks that most people are little more than potential targets for his hunts, but holds the Grimm to be the best game. Should someone demonstrate valor or skill, he views them as an equal. Anything less and they are potential prey. His parents disappeared in a Grimm hunt, and he joined a Guild to complete his training, that he might better serve his rightful masters. His cousins are secret informants for the monarchy, and his sister is deployed to another guild, being eternally willing to see him, but concerned about his other behaviors. He comes from a long line of hunters, and is determined to live up to that legacy. His sense of honor, however, sometimes gets in the way.
I'm willing to add to the history, people.
Adhoc vote count started by King Tharassian on Feb 26, 2018 at 7:01 PM, finished with 33 posts and 2 votes.
[X] Plan Erin
[X] Name: Erin(pronounced Air-in) Crimson
[X] Age:16
[X] Race (Human or Faunus, please Specify): Wolf faunus (ears)
[X] Color Scheme:Red and white
[X] Homeland:Atlas but currently lives in Vale
[X] Appearance: A yoing man with a rough and tumble appearance wearing a tall coat with a tricorn hat that was his "grandfathers" prize memento from the faunus rights revolution taken from general lagoon himself now is worn as a keep sake with three scars running down his face his hair an odd mixture of red and white with a respectable six feet of height with a wiry frame belying his strength and intelect and an old signet ring with a wolfs head in the middle of a snowflake said to be from his birth father he wears it constantly.
[X] Any Family?: Nicholas Schnee (for glyphs)(old but it could lead to fun shenanigans later on is not known to be his father(to clarify the PC doesnt know but Nicholas and mara do know who his father is)) Mother: Mara Crimson: A former mine worker and friend to Jack Schnee in his later life and left to keep the rumors of their friendship being beyond appropriate and unknown to the wider public it was more then rumors despite being in her mid 30's atr the time she had her son Erin looks like shes barely in her MId 20's due to a remarkable vitality.
[X] Right Hand Weapon Description: An elegant rapier-gun terribly effective to thrust but remaining able to deliver deadly cuts. taken from general lagoon with etchings added in by his Grandfather with a long series of thorn like etchings and a dust port with the hilt next to the gun mechanism Its name is the bite of Mantle
[X] Left Hand Weapon Description: An elegant Yatagan revolver, shorter than your rapier but able to make monstruous cuts and efficient thrust. with the ability to channel dust into the shots as well as the blade. Its name is The Sting of Truth
[X] History: The Young man from Atlas was born to a single mother in a low rent town house due to having gotten a bad reputation due to both being a faunus and an illegitimate child born out of wedlock only ever knowing his father from a Signet ring sent to his mother when he was two and a small yet sizable amount of money from an anonymous source. He has faced an increase in discrimination due to the white fang but is choosing to not only blame current policy but the fang under Sienna Khan for giving such policy makers the justification to discriminate against them. As the only Faunus in his school he was bullied relentlessly save for one human friend who happened to have a brother in the Atlas millitary as an aide for winter schnee and general Ironwood. His only Friend and one who made him wish to be a hunter to try and stop the grimm and curb the white fang as he saw just how bad the Anti-faunus sentiment got as a result of their terrorist actions and a year later at his 12th birthday a white fang member murdered his friend azul in cold blood for being a human and in trying to stop him was scared down the face by the murderers claws and threw himself into training and getting into fights to try and bring people like that to justice for murdering a human who was able to look past race and economy to try and bridge the gap die from the so called defenders of eqaulity and champions of the faunus. His mother knowing what her son was aiming to become managed to scrape some funds and send him to signal as well as giving him weapons supposedly from her Grandfather(actually his Fathers) and sent him to signal where he became sullen and withdrawn save for a friend he made while in his second year named Ruby Rose whose perky demeanor reminded him so much of his long dead friend and could not help but warm up to her. Through her he met the overbeaing, and in his opinion a bit too vain, sister Yang Xiao Long whom he never got along with but tolerated for the sake of his friendship with Ruby. Now having helped foil Roman a dangerous thief he was given leave to wander farther and wider trying to expand his guilds fame as it was mostly based in Patch and downtown Vale the qauint city being both beautiful in its advancement compared to the outlands and frontier towns and a dangerous in its far more insidous threats, He works to uncover the nature of who his father was by trying to bring fame to his name as well as doing so that his race would be only minor to the good name he would bring through his actions so that he might be claimed by his birth father (unknown to him his father is waiting for that day to come, as well as having written in his will should he die before then of the truth). He dreams of a better world wher the beast are driven back to the deathlands of their origin and humanity and faunus free to live as one people but knows such a thing is lifertimes away and seeks simply to see how far he might help it forward.
[X] Plan Royalist
[X] Name: Clay Nemain
[X] Age: 17
[X] Race (Human or Faunus, please Specify): Snake Faunus
[X] Color Scheme: Terracotta, Black, and Green
[X] Homeland:Mistral
[X] Appearance: A young man, almost tall enough to stand head and shoulders over first year students (around 6 feet). He has brown hair, and green eyes with reptilian pupils. He dresses in formal clothes tailored with specialized combat capabilities to resist damage, appearing as a black duster over a vest and buttoned shirt, with tall boots, long gloves, and an Atlesian (Homburg) hat.
[X] Any Family?: Three cousins (triplets, two female, one male)(Helia, Diana, and Asterus) who live in one of the nomad communities in the wildland. His parents (Aurea and Anguis) disappeared during a Grimm attack only a few years ago, and his sister (Euryale) is somewhat hesitant to be around him when near other people.
[X] Right Hand Weapon Description: A yatagan, inlaid with channels for dust and a handle capable of turning it into a bayonet. (Name: Falling Leaf)
[X] Left Hand Weapon Description: A katar designed to channel dust, and combined with a pair of dust-compatible pistols. (Raven's Claw)
[X] History: Clay has always been an oddity. He is quite affable, even likeable. But he hides a significant dark side. He secretly loves the feeling of the chase, the thrill of combat, the smell of fear. He grew up with parents who served the Grimmbloods, Knights in all but name, and was groomed to be the next Royal Huntsmaster. His sister Euryale was groomed instead to act as a defender, clad all in white robes and silver plate. But having a human mother and a Faunus father led to complications, and he secretly thinks that most people are little more than potential targets for his hunts, but holds the Grimm to be the best game. Should someone demonstrate valor or skill, he views them as an equal. Anything less and they are potential prey. His parents disappeared in a Grimm hunt, and he joined a Guild to complete his training, that he might better serve his rightful masters. His cousins are secret informants for the monarchy, and his sister is deployed to another guild, being eternally willing to see him, but concerned about his other behaviors. He comes from a long line of hunters, and is determined to live up to that legacy. His sense of honor, however, sometimes gets in the way.
Thanks for the idea i oncorporated that idea into the veiw of weakness the get one chance to make themselves better and if they dont even try their worth nothing
It's not the gore who interest me, he could like fight and kill but with efficacity and cleanly.
I don't want a character who is a psychpathe, a killer or a fool but I would that he have a dark side a little like @King Tharassian. Characters that I prefer are socials and charming but could be ambitious too. And who love search for secret or magic powers even if It's can be risly or lead to kill someone. After I like tht this characters or not caricatural too and have limits... I'm not sure If i'm very clear, It's late and I'm a little tired.
It's not the gore who interest me, he could like fight and kill but with efficacity and cleanly.
I don't want a character who is a psychpathe, a killer or a fool but I would that he have a dark side a little like @King Tharassian. Characters that I prefer are socials and charming but could be ambitious too. And who love search for secret or magic powers even if It's can be risly or lead to kill someone. After I like tht this characters or not caricatural too and have limits... I'm not sure If i'm very clear, It's late and I'm a little tired.
Thank. I think I will go to sleep. Maybe I will try to make my own version of your idea If it's don't disturb you when I will have the ideas more fresh if I'm always not convince.
Thank. I think I will go to sleep. Maybe I will try to make my own version of your idea If it's don't worry you when I will have the ideas more fresh if I'm always not convince if it don't disturb you.
if he starts serial killing or making ruby crythen hes gonna be gutted like a fish then somehow kept alive long enough to burn and if he happens upon forbidden knowledge its not like any one good is gonna miss him
edit but i do think you wrote the history well
if he starts serial killing or making ruby crythen hes gonna be gutted like a fish then somehow kept alive long enough to burn and if he happens upon forbidden knowledge its not like any one good is gonna miss him
edit but i do think you wrote the history well
I'm talking about Clay. And yeah, he gets that "always get stronger" stuff... He just usually is too impatient to wait for it to work. And in terms of forbidden knowledge... He sees the value of it, but only for how he could apply it.
I'm talking about Clay. And yeah, he gets that "always get stronger" stuff... He just usually is too impatient to wait for it to work. And in terms of forbidden knowledge... He sees the value of it, but only for how he could apply it.
my guy mostly spends his time either hanging with Ruby, Training or looking for how the beasts came about and how to end them for good so humanity can focus on the grimm,(in a whisper voice: Ruby reminds him of his dead best friend)
my guy mostly spends his time either hanging with Ruby, Training or looking for how the beasts came about and how to end them for good so humanity can focus on the grimm,(in a whisper voice: Ruby reminds him of his dead best friend)
A character from League that I used to play, when I played regularly. He's a psychotic artist whose art is all in death. His gun is his brush, his targets the canvas. He strives for the perfect position, the perfect place, every time he kills. He arranges the bodies afterward to appease his sense of beauty. The Golden Demon, named Golden Excellence.
A character from League that I used to play, when I played regularly. He's a psychotic artist whose art is all in death. His gun is his brush, his targets the canvas. He strives for the perfect position, the perfect place, every time he kills. He arranges the bodies afterward to appease his sense of beauty. The Golden Demon, named Golden Excellence.
this is also RWBY which means it has a chance to be a lot less dark and possibly to get better whereas Bloodborne is simply screwed
what do you think of this
Personality: He is a complex individual whose drive for knowledge on the origins of beasthood drive many of his mission choices often seeking out the mad scientist lot so he might pilfer their knowledge in hopes they have made strides in that question those who prey on others are worth only how much time it takes to cleave them apart and set the bodies on fire. His idea of helping is givng them the chance to become better and veiws those who do not attempt to better themselves as worthless husks of beings who should be used as meatshields so they stop dragging everyone down. He does however have a sense of kindness and is close to one Ruby Rose partly because she is so remniscient of his first real friend and as such anyone who tries to harm is subject to his wrath(provided Ruby is out of sight ) one such person had their arm broken in 12 spots their ribs fractured and [ut into a coma and he keeps Ruby from knowing he does this . He veiws those who do not take responsibility for their actions as just short of intolerable. He loves a good fight but hates for those uninvolved to be dragged into it as they did not choose to take part nor did they want it to happen and shows no real mercy to those who do.
He spends mostly every waking second outisde what is neccesary for the guild Training hanging out with Ruby or trying to track down some old and/or forbidden lore so that humanity might cure beasthood and focus their might on purging the Grimm from Remnant
this is also RWBY which means it has a chance to be a lot less dark and possibly to get better whereas Bloodborne is simply screwed
what do you think of this
Personality: He is a complex individual whose drive for knowledge on the origins of beasthood drive many of his mission choices often seeking out the mad scientist lot so he might pilfer their knowledge in hopes they have made strides in that question those who prey on others are worth only how much time it takes to cleave them apart and set the bodies on fire. His idea of helping is givng them the chance to become better and veiws those who do not attempt to better themselves as worthless husks of beings who should be used as meatshields so they stop dragging everyone down. He does however have a sense of kindness and is close to one Ruby Rose partly because she is so remniscient of his first real friend and as such anyone who tries to harm is subject to his wrath(provided Ruby is out of sight ) one such person had their arm broken in 12 spots their ribs fractured and [ut into a coma and he keeps Ruby from knowing he does this . He veiws those who do not take responsibility for their actions as just short of intolerable. He loves a good fight but hates for those uninvolved to be dragged into it as they did not choose to take part nor did they want it to happen and shows no real mercy to those who do.
He spends mostly every waking second outisde what is neccesary for the guild Training hanging out with Ruby or trying to track down some old and/or forbidden lore so that humanity might cure beasthood and focus their might on purging the Grimm from Remnant
Eh. Depending on how you interpret the "yer a squid, Good Hunter" ending.
And it's... Interesting. I admit that I'm not exactly a fan of always-good paradigms. (I mean who else but me would try to develop the Ayleidoon from Elder Scrolls rather than Pelinal?) But it's well-written, though I see some spelling and grammar issues.