Would you look at something of mine and join the feedback bandwagon? In particular dialogue, characterization and keeping interest is my biggest concern though anything else you note would be good. Also saying what is good is always nice when that happens. Its a prelude for a story of mine.
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Now that you have been like bombed into submission you will merge with my thread https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/color-based-magic-system-setting-lets-make.657819/ let's makes need a steady influx of energy to stay alive.
"lol whats a magvel" -IS
I thought it was Duessel.
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