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I'm assuming you watched MythBusters.

Well, if Jamie ever needed a pick-me-up, I know exactly what he'd drink.

By the way, I was catching up with the latest archived snips on the QQ thread and that reminded me. Whenever you get around to writing Drake & Tenryuu's wedding feel free to have Claire be the musician for the ceremony. She'd volunteer herself out of respect WRT the werewolves.

(we just have to make sure Claire and Tony don't meet before 2018 so if one is hired for something the other isn't present)

As a side note, I love the Drake family. If you want to to use any of the du Chasteler-Malfoys for friends or romantic partners feel free (basically Maximilian, Thutmose, Bastian, and Wilhelm are all locked in romantically, but that still leaves five boys and about ten girls if you want one of Draco's kids to fall for a Matsuida-Drake).

Oh, one minor thing. I tweaked one of the paragraphs in Riptide XI at PinoyGamers' request and it's a bit important for him. Can you please update the crosspost? Relevant paragraph is the one that starts:

Aso shrugged nonchalantly with a small smile. "Tsunami. Must have been an earthquake someplace nearby -- probably about a five to a six to get one that size.

BTW, in case you wonder, I rolled the shots. Kedah hit with both Harpoons and Pahang hit with one of two (I handwaved in both have two Harpoons on one-shot launchers to the RMN got to play with your weapons.).

Oh, one minor continuity tweak needed for RIPTIDE IV's SB crosspost. The F6Fs referenced in the second paragraph need to be from Formidable rather than Ark Royal. Sorry about this.

One minor but important change needed for the snip you crossposted. This is the correct date/time

1930 13th January 2015

One very minor but necessary tweak in my latest snip. I forgot the Unryuus on this segment's roster, so please copy over the new paragraph when Kirishima and Vanguard enter to add them.

One minor but very important thing. I redid the paragraph where BY sees the priest to betetr reflect what K9 and I have in mind for Fr. Dmitry. If youc ould make sure that SB matches the edit?

One minor thing, I just tweaked the snip to make it clear what was up with Sigrun/Jackie, so may want to refresh it BEFORE crossposting.

Go for the crossposting please with my blessing, next Neville is up.

Well, if you're that impressed by Neville, youc an always add it to the HatSG Crowning Moments of Awesome trop page on TV Tropes. Appreciate the kind words and feedback!