So I'm a bit confused on how Infernals work
I get that Slayers, are Malfeas exalted, but why do different Yozi get to decide their urge shouldn't they be full blown malfeas all the way instead of having Cecelyne's urge?
Have you ever considered moving your fanfic "The Gravid Maiden" to Questionable Questing? That is a forum that contains material that was deemed to risqué for spacebattles or sufficient velocity. It seems as if the material in your quest may end up toeing the line and I would hate to see what looks like a promising quest get removed.