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colesign

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    Wheel of time
    @colesign you got to get easier to talk to man. You are awesome to speak to but trying to communicate in the first place can be a bitch. Check Discord. Unless busy in which case take your time.
    colesign
    colesign
    Part of the issue is that I am busy with work and my own writing projects. The other issue, I suspect, is that we live in different time zones.

    I do like talking to you and discussing the nuts-and-bolts of story writing with you!

    If I ever take a while to respond to your comments, it's not because of any issues I have with you, @Wheel of time!
    Argidoll
    Congratulations on completion. Quests usually die fast and hard, not often on their own terms.

    Kudos.
    colesign
    colesign
    Thanks! I take that as the highest compliment, Argidoll!
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    Never knew you were a GM and want to join my setting channel on Discord? Also what was that wirk you wanted me to look at?
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    Hey @colesign would you take a look and give feedback on a new piece of mine?
    Nothing to do with kungfu but you are a good reviewer so I would like your feedback
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    colesign
    colesign
    As far as revisions go, I'd say your main goal is to trim it down–stripping out un-needed description, making the dialogue more matter of fact, etc.

    I really do like this story so far! I can't wait to see where it goes!
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    Wheel of time
    What works and what does not about the prose?
    What is good and what is wrong about the dialogue?
    And anything else?
    Use multiple comments if needed or there is the Jade City PM we had between us which by the way finally got it and hot damn do I want a Netflix animated series for it.
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    Wheel of time
    Where is that work you want me to look at also @colesign ?
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    Posted in thread what I got, still working on it.
    The Spiritual aspects are something I am very concerned with and not sure of.
    W
    So got to the end of how Alice the disciple and the Black Devil warrior meet
    I am really not sure about how any of that works
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    Replied to what you said and with that I will also need help figuring out the Black Devil Style as they are the second fight.
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    You want to make a Martial Arts setting with me? Its all about Internal Energy and Forces.
    colesign
    colesign
    I'd love to, but I'm busy with two of my own settings/stories and another collaboration with a graphic artist. I could be mentally available to write fictional interludes if that interests you!
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    Wheel of time
    I will invite you later when all my notes are gathered up. And Interludes would be awesome also what kind of collaboration?
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    Wheel of time
    Check out the Wuxia thread to see the Ki system I made and give your thoughts on it.
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    Nice Avatar and I have decided to give up on Senchi to focus on my new project. But I have a Order of Martial Artists called the Adepts of the Forsaken Blade and if you would like to join Codex PM you could help design them with me and others.
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