So first things first @Alastor, it's not particularly fair to paint valid criticism as an attempt to harass the author. Let's not do that in the future.
Ah, so you're like Horizon, you don't actually want criticism. You should probably put that at the top of the thread and let people know so that we can avoid this issue in the future.
Having said that, @Mgunh1 your response here is no longer a criticism of the work, but is becoming a harangue about obligations that do not exist. Jysrin has acknowledged the points you and others are trying to make, and probably intends to keep it in mind for future chapters. If he is unwilling to rewrite a chapter that is already finished that is entirely their prerogative, and not an indication they are unreceptive to feedback. You can express your disappointment without going to extremes. Please try and keep the difference in mind going forward.
As this is below the threshold for any administrative actions, and I hope none will be necessary in the future either, I am simply leaving this Warning.