Zen St-Xero
The Dark One From Deep Space
- Location
- Middle of a Blackhole in the Multiverse
Wow Oz Is jumping to conclusions really fast he gonna regret that later
Dude, friendly vampires are an out of context problem.well Ozpin fucked up big time he went all murderhobo on a mostly friendly vampire's adopted family's pets
I wouldn't call it murderhobo when very real reasons exist for acting in this particular manner. Notably, Ozpin doesn't know what the method of transmitting is for this particular breed of vampire--he would most likely not be this harsh if he knew that once the lord dies, the number of possible vampires is limited by the supply of his blood.well Ozpin fucked up big time he went all murderhobo on a mostly friendly vampire's adopted family's pets
Wow Oz Is jumping to conclusions really fast he gonna regret that later
A bold assumption....tell me, what precisely is he doing in Vacuo at this very moment?Very unlikely our vampire is not that aggressive nor will he be willing to cripple the Huntsmen in any meaningful fashion. Ozma will get away with this quite easily.
Sarcastic tone:A bold assumption....tell me, what precisely is he doing in Vacuo at this very moment?
Now, how many vampires with super-speed, super-strength, and invulnerability at night would it take to match the contributions of a Huntsman?
Try zooming? I'm not sure what the problem is, but that might help.Is there a readable version of the cyoa? Can't make out the options.
@edit: Well, on a PC it's just barely readable if you squint.
You took a shitton of options there, huh?
Click to zoom in on a individual image.Is there a readable version of the cyoa? Can't make out the options.
@edit: Well, on a PC it's just barely readable if you squint.
You took a shitton of options there, huh?
I'm going to be honest, I legitimately don't know quite how to write...like. Domestic life.Gotta be honest, the narrative is jumping around so much that it almost stops being a narrative.
He is suddenly hugely attached to random people, and there is so little time spent on them that I really don't care for their fate.
It's just... so jittery. It's here, then it's there, then this is suddenly happening, then it immediately jumps to something completely unrelated. Little foreshadowing, almost no descriptions. We have no idea what's about to happen, what he plans, how he thinks.
At one point the MC is an emotional wreck, then he is a sober veteran, then he is an awkward teen, then he is a stone-cold killer and mastermind. The one somewhat consistent trait is his huge hero complex.
Same here. I mean, it's not a flawless piece by any stretch of the imagination and the MC does kind of jump around a bit. But that is hardly unique and it isn't extreme enough to bother me at least.I'd be curious to hear which pieces give you what impression, though.
I mean, knowing what the nuckelavee looked like, that it was attacking a village and not being trained enough to come to actual priorities.... i wouldn't call it CRAZED bloodlust....
You say that like these are somehow mutually exclusive, there were multiple motives for the mafia thing, one of which was to make the money needed to sustain raising a family.then worrying about raising these kids and teens (and one young adult), then working for the mafia,
To give perspective on his/my viewpoint:a wildly OOC thing in searching out bandits to make enslaved spawn out of in a calculating and deeply cold manner.
His particular brand of transmission doesn't lend very well to that, considering how much blood he'd have to cram down their throats in order to turn them.I figured one of those hard choices might come in the someone he cares about us dying and he can either save them as a vampire and thus enslaved or let them die free' sort of situations.
But that assumes the enslave meant comes in the 'obey all my orders to the letter' variety not the 'I want to serve you' variety.His particular brand of transmission doesn't lend very well to that, considering how much blood he'd have to cram down their throats in order to turn them.
That said, he doesn't HAVE to give people orders, in theory.
It does though, that's what Servitude does.But that assumes the enslave meant comes in the 'obey all my orders to the letter' variety not the 'I want to serve you' variety.
Everyone's the hero of their own story.