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43k Mechanicus: Surviving the Imperiums Fall

Do not go quietly into that good night

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It is the dawn of the 43rd millennium and the Imperium has not recovered from the thirteenth black crusade. Guillimans indomitus crusade did much to halt the bleeding but It wasn't enough. The imperiums enemies did not stop before the primarch but instead doubled their efforts pressing deeper and harder into the imperium.
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    It is the dawn of the 43rd millennium and the Imperium has not recovered from the thirteenth black crusade. Guilliman's Indomitus crusade did much to halt the bleeding but It wasn't enough. The Imperiums enemies did not stop before the primarch but instead doubled their efforts pressing deeper and harder into the Imperium. Today as a new millennium dawns a plan born in secret is put into action. A secretive sect of the Mechanicus on Ryza that call themselves the terminalis have put together a colonization mission. The sect of which you are a member believes that the galaxy at large is doomed but perhaps some small remnants can be saved if preemptive action is taken.

    Deep in the halo stars in Segmentum Obscurious lies the Koronus Expanse an area of space on the galactic rim that not even the great crusade touched. The Cuprum sector named so due to the prevalence of copper in its capital world of Cuprum was sparsely colonized in the 41st​ millennium. Your secretive sect lobbied the fabricator general of Ryza to establish a new forge world here to further strengthen the Imperiums grip on the sector and aid its war efforts in the galaxy at large. In reality the sect aims to use this new forge world here at the edge of the galaxy as an arch for the Mechanicus and its knowledge.



    Fabricator Who are you

    Gender
    [ ]Male
    [ ] Female

    Name
    [ ] write in

    Upgrades to body
    [ ] extensive
    [ ] partial
    [ ] mostly human



    Mechanicus support

    [ ] Large: Thanks to your sects lobbying many resources where pushed your way (large staring Navy, Large staring resources, your forge world is not welcoming to innovation).

    [ ] Medium: Your sects lobbying was not meet with much enthusiasm ( small but effective staring Navy, Only the minimum required resources where allocated to you, Somewhat welcoming to innovation).

    [ ] Small: Your sects lobbying was none effective ( Small starting flotilla, Almost no bulk starting resources, Welcoming to innovation).

    [ ] None Existent: Your sects lobbying was outright ignored but this inadvertently freed your hands ( Single staring warship, only a few million colonist where provided to you, Out right heretical with innovation).


    World Creation (20 points)

    You have 20 points to spend, choose from the categories until your total is 20.

    (The MOAR options are repeatable) (cannot not do repeats of the same action more than 3 times)

    [ ] Failed Imperial colony +1

    [ ] Barren habitable world 0

    [ ] Barren habitable world jungle 0

    [ ] Barren habitable world ocean 0

    [ ] Barren habitable world (write in) 0

    [ ] Barren uninhabitable rock -1

    [ ] Barren uninhabitable volcanic rock -2 (Cannot be chosen if mineral rich is chosen)

    [ ] Death world -3 (not repeatable)

    [ ] death world jungle -4 (not repeatable)

    [ ] death world ocean -4 (not repeatable)

    [ ] Death world (write in) -4

    [ ] Large human Ruins +3 (not repeatable)

    [ ] Some human ruins +2(not repeatable)

    [ ] almost no human ruins +1 (not repeatable)

    [ ] MOAR human ruins +4 (repeatable)

    [ ] Large Xenos ruins +3 (not repeatable)

    [ ] Some Xenos ruins +2 (not repeatable)

    [ ] Almost no xenos ruins +1 (not repeatable)

    [ ] MOAR xenos ruins +4 (repeatable)

    [ ] Extremely mineral rich +4 (not repeatable)

    [ ] mineral rich +3 (not repeatable)

    [ ] average minerals +2 (not repeatable)

    [ ] mineral poor+1 (not repeatable)

    [ ] MOAR minerals +1 (repeatable)

    [ ] Large promethium +1 (repeatable)

    [ ] Low promethium -1 (repeatable)

    [ ] No promethium -2 (repeatable)

    Solar system creation

    You have 5 points to spend, choose from the categories until your total is 5.

    (cannot not do repeats of the same action more than 5 times)

    [ ] Rocky worlds +2 (repeatable)

    [ ] gas giants -1 (repeatable)

    [ ] asteroid belt+1 (repeatable)

    [ ] close to other worlds+2 (not repeatable)

    [ ] regular distance from other worlds+1 (not repeatable)

    [ ] far from other worlds-2 (not repeatable)

    [ ] good neighborhood +3 (not repeatable)

    [ ] average 40k neighborhood+0 (not repeatable)

    [ ] bad neighborhood-3 (not repeatable)
     
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    • [X] Plan Water World
    Gender
    [x] male

    name
    [x] Tantum

    upgrades
    [x] Extensive

    mechanicus suport
    [x] None Existent

    world creation
    [x] Barren habitable world ocean 0
    [x] Large human Ruins +3
    [x] MOAR human ruins +4
    [x] Large Xenos ruins +3
    [x] MOAR xenos ruins +4
    [x] Extremely mineral rich +4
    [x] MOAR minerals +1
    [x] MOAR minerals +1

    Solar system creation
    [x] average 40k neighborhood+0
    [x] regular distance from other worlds+1
    [x] Rocky worlds +2 (repeatable)
    [x] asteroid belt+1 (repeatable)
    [x] asteroid belt+1 (repeatable)
    [x] asteroid belt+1 (repeatable)
    [x] gas giants -1 (repeatable)
     
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    [X] Plan: Cyclops

    gender
    -[X] male

    name
    -[X] name: Dio

    upgrades
    -[X] mostly human

    mechanicus support
    -[X] Small: Your sects lobbying was none effective ( Small starting flotilla, Almost no bulk starting resources, Welcoming to innovation).

    world creation (20 points total)
    -[X] name of planet: Zerzura
    -[X] Barren habitable world (Tundra/Ice World, with some warm grasslands near the equator during the summer months) 0
    -[X] Failed Imperial colony +1
    -[X] Large human Ruins +3
    -[X] Some human ruins +2
    -[X] MOAR human ruins +4 (repeatable)
    --[X] x2 (8 points)
    -[X] Extremely mineral rich +4
    -[X] MOAR minerals +1 (repeatable)
    --[X] x2 (2 points)

    solar system creation (5 points total)
    -[X] good neighborhood +3
    -[X] close to other worlds+2 (not repeatable)
     
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    Marlin said:
    [X] Plan: Cyclops

    gender
    -[X] male

    name
    -[X] name: Dio

    upgrades
    -[X] mostly human

    mechanicus support
    -[X] Small: Your sects lobbying was none effective ( Small starting flotilla, Almost no bulk starting resources, Welcoming to innovation).

    world creation (20 points total)
    -[X] Barren habitable world (Tundra/Ice World, with some warm grasslands near the equator during the summer months) 0
    -[X] Failed Imperial colony +1
    --[X]x3 (3 points)
    -[X] Large human Ruins +3
    -[X] Some human ruins +2
    -[X] Extremely mineral rich +4
    --[X]x3 (12 points)

    solar system creation (5 points total)
    -[X] good neighborhood +3
    --[X] x5 (15 points)
    -[X] far from other worlds-2
    --[X] x5 (-10 points)
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    while your plan is mostly good you did the world and system creation incorrectly. The failed Imperail colony is a none repeatable action and so is good neighborhood and far from other worlds.
     
    Moist Bread said:
    while your plan is mostly good you did the world and system creation incorrectly. The failed Imperail colony is a none repeatable action and so is good neighborhood and far from other worlds.
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    Right, I'll fix that.

    I really wanted to try and place one plan as far away from being similar to Avernus as I could. Screwed that up.

    edit: Done, I think.
     
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    Marlin said:
    [X] Plan: Cyclops

    gender
    -[X] male

    name
    -[X] name: Dio

    upgrades
    -[X] mostly human

    mechanicus support
    -[X] Small: Your sects lobbying was none effective ( Small starting flotilla, Almost no bulk starting resources, Welcoming to innovation).

    world creation (20 points total)
    -[X] Barren habitable world (Tundra/Ice World, with some warm grasslands near the equator during the summer months) 0
    -[X] Failed Imperial colony +1
    -[X] Large human Ruins +3
    -[X] Some human ruins +2
    -[X] Extremely mineral rich +4
    --[X]x3 (12 points)
    -[X] MOAR minerals +1 (repeatable)
    --[X] x2 (2 points)

    solar system creation (5 points total)
    -[X] good neighborhood +3
    -[X] close to other worlds+2 (not repeatable)
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    if you added gas giants and asteroid belt we could get more resources

    also you are repeating extremely mineral rich which is not repeatable
    and i think you are over on points.
     
    timy said:
    if you added gas giants and asteroid belt we could get more resources

    also you are repeating extremely mineral rich which is not repeatable
    and i think you are over on points.
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    Ugh, back to fixing that. I'm actually under points now.

    The solar system is fine the way it is for my plan, it isn't aimed at getting resources but ensuring a stable environment to dig out from.

    edit: The plan is now fixed! Yay! Added human ruins Moarh.
     
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    Always nice to see another admech quest let me give it a try

    [X] Plan Our dark corner in the galaxy

    Gender : [X] Male

    Name : Almaiz

    Upgrades : [X] Partial

    Admech support : [X] small

    World creation:

    [X] Zalam

    [X] Deathworld, planet is shrouded in enteral darkness thanks to its distance from its star and said Star being less luminous than average. Planet is home to a variety of vicious flora and fauna . (-4 so 24 points )

    [X] Extremely mineral rich (+4 so 20 )

    [X] Failed Imperial colony (+1 so 19

    [X] Large xeno ruins (+3 so 16 )

    [X] MOAR xeno ruins (+4 so 12)

    [X] Large human ruins (+3 so 9)

    [X] MOAR human ruins (+4 so 5)

    [X] MOAR minerals x3 ( 2 remaining)

    [X] Large promethium x2 (0)

    Solar system :

    [X] Far from other worlds (-2)
    [X] Rocky worlds x3 (+6)
    [X] Average 40K neighbourhood (0)
    [X] Gas Giant (-1)
    [X] Asteroid belt x2 (+2)
     
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    StarMaker764 said:
    Always nice to see another admech quest let me give it a try

    [X] Plan Our dark corner in the galaxy

    Gender : [X] Male

    Name : Almaiz

    Upgrades : [X] Partial

    Admech support : [X] small

    World creation:

    [X] Zalam

    [X] Deathworld, planet is shrouded in enteral darkness thanks to its distance from its star and said Star being less luminous than average. Planet is home to a variety of vicious flora and fauna . (-4 so 24 points )

    [X] Extremely mineral rich (+4 so 20 )

    [X] Failed Imperial colony (+1 so 19

    [X] Large xeno ruins (+3 so 16 )

    [X] MOAR xeno ruins (+4 so 12)

    [X] Large human ruins (+3 so 9)

    [X] MOAR human ruins (+4 so 5)

    [X] MOAR minerals x5 (0 remaining )

    Solar system :

    [X] Far from other worlds (-2)
    [X] Rocky worlds x3 (+6)
    [X] Average 40K neighbourhood (0)
    [X] Gas Giant (-1)
    [X] Asteroid belt x2 (+2)
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    your close but you can only repeat actions 3 times for world creation
     
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