Episode 4-B
Episode 4--B

Investigation, on television, was often too short and sweet. It lasted maybe a week from the start of a case to the end, and that was with serial killings and major cases of the sort that could and did baffle police for years. It was a necessary conceit, Alex thought as they brushed back their hair for a moment, looking in the mirror. They needed to look distinguished and august today, if they were going to talk to a bunch of...or was that not the right tack?

Either way, necessary conceit, but the truth was that most investigations stalled out repeatedly, at least the real puzzlers. Serial Killers became serial killers for a reason (though nobody could know how many people were stopped before they reached the magic number), and so it wasn't dereliction of duty to focus on another murder.

Besides, they had a partner for a reason.

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Suit and tie. That was the way to go. James Morris looked at the man across from him. "I suspect, sir, that this was an intentional act. The death is too convenient."

Fat, in a blubbery, pale sort of way, the man sitting across from him, Jarrod Jones, was more important than he'd ever be. In theory. In practice he was going to be out of a job before that long.

"Yeah, yeah, I get it, you're some paranoiac," Jones said, shaking his head, "I'm not going to be cowed by conspiracy theories. Mayor Buford was barely even a friend--"

What an obvious lie, James thought, adjusting his tie to keep his hands from reaching out and using the other man's puce tie as a hangman's noose.

"And so I'm going to move past this. I already have plans to enter private practice. My skills as a lawyer are still sharp, and so I'm not sure what I can really offer you."

"There was a leak of documents on Mayor Buford, were you behind it?"

"Of course not!" Jones looked annoyed, resting his hands on his lap, glancing around his richly appointed office. Whatever his salary was, it was way too high.

"If people keep on dying, could you pressure the police chief into looking into it? Your colleague died of a car crash, and I think it was targeted."

"What? How? He never drove well once in his life, and he rarely wore a seatbelt. Of course the bastard died."

"Mr. Weeks was first. Ash will be next, perhaps. Or perhaps you," James said, "That's not a threat. That's just me being realistic here." He held up his hands, "And I have to ask, are you going to do something about it, something that can help us stop them from killing you, or am I wasting my time? We've been investigating into a murder that seems to kill using heart attacks--"

"Preposterous, get out of my office."

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"Hello, ma'am, may I speak with you for a moment?" They asked the woman, an older black woman who lived in the house next door, "It will only take a moment."

Her back was stooped, but her eyes were bright, and after a moment she nodded. They followed her up, adjusting their beard as they went. A bright, silvery beard, short and a little luciferian, to go with the short silver hair. Looks played up with makeup to be fine, but aging. A handsome, dignified man in his fifties, the voice similarly rich and melodious.

She hobbled around her small house, gathering the ingredients for tea, as he looked around. The place smelled faintly of cats, and was dark at places, the lights not adequate for the accumulation of stuff. Quilts, blankets, furniture, sewing machines, books, everything spilled out and around, and so it was hard to find a seat.

This was an entire life compressed into a small space. There was a picture of a husband, a tall, strapping man in the photo, in his forties, his hair short and dark, his features rough. She was probably eighty, ninety. "Thank you, Mrs--?"

"Roads," she said, with the faintest southern accent imaginable. Had she come up from the south, Great Migration? "One moment, I've got to get you tea."

"It's not necessary, ma'am," they said.

"But it is. In this day and age? You be polite, or you be nothing at all." She pottered around the kitchen, moving with the shuffling efficacy of someone who had long since gotten used to her own infirmities, who had come to live with them. She wore thick glasses, which might be a bad sign, but Alex lived in hope.

"I'm Detective Alexander, with the police. On the evening of October 3rd…"

"Oh." She seemed to wilt a little. Mrs. Roads looked at him, adjusting her glasses, "I didn't see much, I usually to go bed early."

"Anything you saw at all would be helpful. We just have a few questions," Alex said.

"Well...one second." The kettle started to boil, and she worked on pouring the tea, her hands shaking now a little bit as they hadn't before.

Finally, she came back with some tea. They grabbed the cup and gave it a sip. It was pretty good, all things considered, and they straightened up a little more when they drank it. They wanted to observe small little details, make a story of her life, because such a life surely had a lot of stories. They also wanted to try some hard tea sometime, it was one thing they'd never attempted, but at the moment they were on the clock, and they were the ones in control.

"So, what did you see that night? Or hear?"

"There were...I looked out the window because I heard a bang. Like a car door slamming shut. And that's what I saw, a car with all the lights on. There was someone in the driver's seat, and then two other people who were stepping out, towards the Lewis place. I know the Mom, she works hard, but she wasn't in right about them."

Alex nodded. She'd been at work. She worked hard hours, the sort of hours that meant her son was on his own quite a lot. "So, did you get a look at the two people?"

"Ohh, no I didn't. I mean, I saw them, but it was really dark and I could barely see anything."

The truth, Alex thought, but they also knew that if they went to the others they'd probably hear the same even from people who had far better eyesight. They'd come prepared, though. They'd brought and examined photos of Smack, Hot Mike, Tyson, and DeVon. "Was one of the boys tall? Like, above six feet?"

DeVon and Hot Mike were both a little over six feet, Tyson was just under, and Smack was a short man.

"Yeah, one of them was tall, the other was...normal I suppose."

Alex sipped some of the tea. "Could you see anything of their hairstyle?"

"No, not really. Nothing stood out, just hair."

Which ruled out Hot Mike, whose 'thing' was the frankly ridiculous (in size and nature, that is) afro he maintained. It was hard to miss, and that was part of his style. People could be remarkably vain...and Alex completely understood it. Which meant that the list was narrowed down to two primary suspects...but that there were three people who were involved.

"Thank you, ma'am, was there anything else you saw?"

"Well, I heard a bang, and then they ran out."

"Ran?" Alex asked.

"Pretty fast. But one of them…"

"Yes?"

"One of the figures seemed to be limping."

Ah. That was actually really, really important. "Thank you for telling me that, ma'am."

"Are you going to find the ones that killed that poor boy? You know he babysat my cats when I went on that vacation, a year or two back. He was a nice boy." She said it softly, with a hint of the kind of sadness that can easily turn weepy.

"I will ma'am, I promise. We are following all available leads. Every bit of evidence brings us closer to the truth."

They stood up, smiling at the woman, and then they left.

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"Two fucking days to get all the interviews," James complained, slumped over at his desk, "Two days, and the most I got was out of Abramson. He's a little bit panicky, you know. He's worried, and he was easy to convince that maybe something was going on. Though he was thinking more some sort of vigilante mob. I didn't tell him about the supernatural killer theory."

"I wonder why," Alex said. They were sitting at their own desk, in a professional looking black dress, with a creme jacket and their short hair in something like a bob. "Still, if he's willing to pressure people...that'd be the best choice, wouldn't it?"

"You mean, because you don't think he's actually a target?"

"Well. Yes." Alex said, "As far as it goes, one of the suspects was limping, and we can narrow some of it down. Got two names it could be. Not going to tell Darius either of them, though. Don't need more dead bodies."

"Do you mean to suggest that Darius, a hardened criminal, would try to KILL the people who murdered his lover?" James asked, "Nah, our Darius is the soul of kindness, mercy, and pacifism."

"Sarcasm is the lowest form of wit," Alex said.

"And that dress needs stockings," James replied.

They flushed and looked at their legs carefully. Hrm, maybe stockings could have--

They were getting distracted. "Maybe, maybe not. I'm going to talk to him anyways."

"Might want to change up your looks."

"We'll see. It'll take time to get to him."

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On Saturday, October 23rd, Mr. Jones was eating his early morning breakfast when he choked on a chicken bone. Despite efforts to dislodge it by one of his servants, bad luck on the roads led to no paramedics showing up in time. He was declared Dead On Arrival.

James tweeted Alex to point out that Jarrod Jones had said, in several interviews, that there was no better breakfast in the morning than bone-in fried chicken. Which probably contributed to him being a hugely unhealthy (and just plain huge) man. But it was clear to Alex that this was kill #2. The killer was spacing them out, though even with that space, it would be a little suspicious.

But thus far, the two deaths each relied on characteristics of the person. Mr. Weeks often didn't wear a seatbelt and was known for driving dangerously, with no regard for the speed limits or the basic rules of the road. Mr. Jones ate a lot, was not particularly healthy, and had fried chicken in the morning...so he'd choked to death on a chicken bone.

If so, that meant that the third death, Mr. Ash's, would be soon. But not too soon. Within a few days. Or maybe longer. It was hard to tell, of course. They could clearly time deaths very carefully, and it had to have been a lot of work to know, say, when Mr. Jones would wake up. Or had they learned it through their supernatural power?

Either way, these were concerns they couldn't bring to anyone but their partner.

*******

"Looking fine today. Though, I'd thought you were a dude," Darius said. He was leaning against a wall, and they were both in an alley. But not an alley anywhere near the ghetto. It was outside a pizza place, and Alex was considering grabbing a slice and watching people come in and out. Little Italy, or the area had once been, and it still had plenty of middle-class Italian-Americans, long after that had stopped being a class that was discriminated against.

"I am what I am," Alex said, allowing their voice to lift into a playful falsetto.

"...really." Darius rolled his eyes, "You're as bad as…"

He trailed off, clenching his fists hard. He was dressed up in such a way that he might have, probably did have, weapons on him, and Alex would never be able to tell. There was an advantage to baggy shirts and jeans when it came to hiding something out of the way.

As bad as Rick.

"Oh? Sensitive soul? Appreciated a good musical?"

Darius shrugged, "Appreciated a shit ton of things. He's dead now, and you're comin' here to tell me how it's going."

"I'm coming here to ask if you can look something up without shooting it."

"Maybe, sure."

"Maybe. Sure." Alex raised an eyebrow. "Got more reassurance than that?"

"Fine, whatever. I'll try not to ice anyone."

Alex sighed, "Well, can you look for people in the Bloody Saints who were limping? Without killing them? Because one of the killers was limping when they ran out of the crime scene, and there wasn't a sign of a struggle, so it had to be a pre-existing problem. Find the limper, and that's a third of the people directly responsible."

"There were three killers?"

"Two killers, one getaway driver," Alex admitted, "We're narrowing down who was in charge of the operation, I'll tell you if we learn more...if I can trust you."

"Sure," Darius said with a shrug, "You've done right by me so far, and it don't look like you're gonna back out on this."

"I won't, I promise."

*******

Councilman Ash left office in disgrace, fleeing as fast as he could into public life. He stopped taking calls on Sunday, October 24th.

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Alex's next move is… (Choose 1)

[] [Alex] Using leverage from Abraham to try to get something going on an official basis.
[] [Alex] Talking to CIs and others to try to find out who was limping. Darius is looking into it, but perhaps they don't trust him.
[] [Alex] Examining the physical evidence once more.
[] [Alex] Continue looking over GuiltMonger to get a profile of possible targets.
[] [Alex] Talk to Wendell.
[] [Alex] Talk to Rachel.
[] [Alex] Look into the supernatural.

James, meanwhile… (Choose 1)

[] [James] Looks at the physical evidence for Rick's murder.
[] [James] Talks to some of Rachel's friends.
[] [James] Talks to Wendell.
[] [James] Tries to convince Abramson to press harder.
[] [James] Attempts to get in contact with Mr. Ash.
[] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.

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A/N: Sorry this is short and a little bit crud, but. It's something. Also, you really are going full-throttle on the Darius-Rick case! It's impressive, your duty towards the innocent. If interesting!
 
Councilman Ash left office in disgrace, fleeing as fast as he could into public life. He stopped taking calls on Sunday, October 24th.

This might slow the killer, a bit? The other deaths were linked to really public information, which probably helped them time it. If Ash can go dark on everything, they might be forced to research a convincing death other ways.

(This is also a good way to nail them later? GM diffuses who might have motive, but opportunity still relies on them having intimate details about various people's habits.)

[X] [Alex] Look into the supernatural.

[X] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.
 
Okay, no matter who the killer is, one thing is for sure; They are currently in complete control of the investigation's pace.

I am not allowing this murderer to stay in charge here, no matter how smart they may be.

Therefore, i propose we put them under pressure - Shake up the environment a little, so that they need to react, rather than act. Do something that affects their position as we know it currently, and take back the initiative of this case.

Give me a moment and i will come up with a plan.
 
Okay, no matter who the killer is, one thing is for sure; They are currently in complete control of the investigation's pace.

I am not allowing this murderer to stay in charge here, no matter how smart they may be.

Therefore, i propose we put them under pressure - Shake up the environment a little, so that they need to react, rather than act. Do something that affects their position as we know it currently, and take back the initiative of this case.

Give me a moment and i will come up with a plan.

One thing to note is that as long as you aren't directly engaging them, at this stage it'll be hard to control the pace. Of course, directly engaging them might have a downside.

...Of course I say that, but you might have a brilliant idea that doesn't involve that!

(Honestly there are a lot of triggers you haven't flagged yet, which is actually fine, but interesting.)
 
...wait one second. I gotta ask. Did *I* add that last tag? I might have. But now I don't remember?

Don't remember ie being there at the start, seems adequate tho.

Give me a moment and i will come up with a plan.

Maybe use the yellow press?

[X] [Alex] Talk to Wendell.

[X] [James] Tries to convince Abramson to press harder.

Try to geta picture on the bulling and either add wendell to our possible suspects list or cross him off.
And get more presure on our bosses so shit starts flowing downhill and maybe we can get a team out off it. Lets just hope they dont put us in a basement.:p
 
Don't remember ie being there at the start, seems adequate tho.



Maybe use the yellow press?

[X] [Alex] Talk to Wendell.

[X] [James] Tries to convince Abramson to press harder.

Try to geta picture on the bulling and either add wendell to our possible suspects list or cross him off.
And get more presure on our bosses so shit starts flowing downhill and maybe we can get a team out off it. Lets just hope they dont put us in a basement.:p

Are you the one who was marathoning The Wire? If not, why not?
 
Are you the one who was marathoning The Wire? If not, why not?

Yep, finishing the first season this weekenend. Really need to pick an avatar sometime would help with this issue.

Thinking our last actions over it seems that sending James to sweet talk a bunch of rich privileged,lets call then gentlemen, wasn't our brigthest idea.He still did better that a honest nonconing Alex would have done but yeah...
 
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Investigative offensive

Okay, what I suggest we do is enact a tri-pronged attack; Personal investigation, distant observation and direct challenge.

As far as we know IC, the killer is able to eliminate targets via supernatural means on a whim, and hasn't yet displayed the need to physically interact with them. This implies that even with our watertight identity and constantly changing appearance, we could potentially be killed at any moment by them. As we know OOC, the DN wielder only needs our name and face in order to put us in the ground, and they might have methods available to do so if they really get serious (And are smart enough to work it out).

Thus, we must be careful with this, but at the same time can't surrender momentum of the game in their favour – If they are able to dictate the terms of this investigation, we will become permanently on the back-foot, especially as they begin to narrow down our identity and see through Alex's lies.

Thus, I suggest this plan of action, split into three directions of investigation:


1. Distant observation:

This is our Alex persona - The official name and face that our allies know us by. It is through this identity that we will maintain good terms with our allies, sift through information gathered by the police, and generally act as a background character, un-involved with anything heavy.

So far, our biggest suspect has only interacted with/seen us as a curious but ineffective detective, looking to find closure over a sad case but coming up short – I wish to keep it that way.

As our Alex identity is the last line of defence before our real identity (and we could potentially have some evidence to that effect waiting around somewhere), it must be as uninvolved as possible. To that end, I suggest we keep mostly out of the way, looking into unrelated cases and taking just enough interest in the DN case to satisfy expectations of our co-workers (It would be strange for them to see us not focus on a mysterious and supernatural killing, so let's put them at ease by doing so slightly)

By staying out of the limelight, we reduce the chances of being targeted by as much as possible whilst still maintaining the opportunity to act in other, less obvious and (Relatively) vulnerable disguises.

(To succeed here, we must utterly avoid all suspects, active investigation and anything that could ever imply that we're onto them.)


2. Personal Investigation:

This persona will be what interacts with our biggest suspects personally.

Currently, we are unable to do so, due mainly to the fact that our current identity (potentially) has evidence relating to our real identity lying around (Thanks to our extensive use of it on most past investigations and its relations to the police).

Therefore, I propose we create one or more new identities which nobody but us know about, utterly dedicated to one purpose; Talking to and observing our killer (And potential killers) first hand.

We will create and use it entirely during our free time, and will hopefully make sure that not a single soul knows of its existence or origin, other than ourselves. It will become a ghost on the radar, existing for no other reason than to get close to our suspects and leaving no trails that can be followed to or from anywhere.

These will all be disposable identities, designed to get close and discover info, but nothing more.


3. Direct challenge:

This is our 'L' (Or in this case, X) persona.

Hopefully at some time in the far future, we will gain permission from trusted higher ups to forge a legal third persona - One which will carry out all of our decisive actions against the killer.

It will be stylised heavily after L, aiming for the impression of a nameless entity, visually challenging our Kira to a duel. There will be no backstory, no official connections (Other than word of mouth with one person) or even a hint that could possibly implicate us.

We will simply use this as a direct method of interacting with the killer's true personality, contrary to our other methods; Calling out their mistakes, riling them up and over all displaying a face that the killer will attempt to identify/defeat.

Our purpose here is not to discover info through careful social manoeuvring (although this can still become an element) - No, it is to be as loud and distracting as possible; Give them a challenge worthy of their full attention, allowing our other personas to do their detective work unmolested.

The perfect distraction, hopefully.

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Through these three methods, we will be able to achieve many things:

  • Discovery of vital information that can only be found through direct contact with the killer/suspect – Something we are currently unable to do thanks to threat of discovery and lack of protection.
  • Interact with the killer only through throwaway identities (X identity and Personal investigation identity), adding an extra buffer of defence to our already established one.
  • Own multiple personas that have no paper trails attached, one supported by the police and one utterly unknown by anyone.
  • Be able to move our vulnerable persona (Alex) out of the picture due to availability of less risky identities that can carry out riskier operations (Things like personal investigation and direct televised confrontations, that Alex otherwise would have taken part in).

Basically, this gives us a safety-net of two extra personas, which carry out formerly dangerous actions without fear of our killer discovering Alex's involvement – Alex will look to them like an unrelated background detective drunkard who isn't a threat. In the meantime, our social persona get close enough to them that they can pin responses, reactions and personalities, whilst our 'X' persona will distract them and threaten them so that they make mistakes.

What do people think?
 
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[X] [Alex] Talk to Wendell.

[X] [James] Tries to convince Abramson to press harder.

Oh god I'm so tired, but another story update by you keeps me going.
 
[X] [Alex] Look into the supernatural.
[X] [James] Looks at the physical evidence for Rick's murder.
 
[X] [Alex] Continue looking over GuiltMonger to get a profile of possible targets
[X] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.

I doubt pressing harder would do anything. Better to mark out the possible targets, then make use of that to figure out who might have a recent offense against them to narrow the list.
 
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[X] [Alex] Look into the supernatural.
[X] [Alex] Continue looking over GuiltMonger to get a profile of possible targets
[X] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.

I doubt pressing harder would do anything. Better to mark out the possible targets, then make use of that to figure out who might have a recent offense against them to narrow the list.

One choice each.
 
but at the moment they were on the clock, and they were the ones in control.
HMM. Combined with Alex's penchant for changing appearances, and I can't help but wonder, does Alex have some sort of many-personalities thing going on? I wouldn't think they would be full personas much less Hollywood-MPD personas, but it seems like they could be aspects.

That's probably not what you intended, but it's a neat idea.

...Holy cow! Could not!Alex be our mystery supernatural killer?

If so, that meant that the third death, Mr. Ash's, would be soon. But not too soon. Within a few days. Or maybe longer. It was hard to tell, of course.
I do not believe that we, the readers, have enough information on Mr. Ash to predict how he would die if/when he is killed. However, Alex might. If so, that would be a powerful piece of proof, if we can also prove that we made the prediction in advance.

..Are write-ins allowed? That might be worth trying to create a write-in. Hmmm.

Councilman Ash left office in disgrace, fleeing as fast as he could into public life. He stopped taking calls on Sunday, October 24th.
Well that's not ominous at all.

[X] [Alex] Talk to Wendell.
This is the only Alex option there that I know I want. I wouldn't be opposed to being convinced of something else or a write-in or something.

[] [James] Attempts to get in contact with Mr. Ash.
[] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.
[] [James] Talks to some of Rachel's friends.
I want to get one of these. I'm not sure which, though. I'm not even sure if I care which.

By staying out of the limelight, we reduce the chances of being targeted by as much as possible whilst still maintaining the opportunity to act in other, less obvious and (Relatively) vulnerable disguises.
Hmm. Could we use this to set a trap? Gives our killer a target of one of our disguises, and their technique fails to work because it's a fake persona? Of course, this assumes the killer is using a Death Note as in the anime. If they're doing something else, this may backfire!

I haven't seen the anime yet. THIS IS SO MUCH FUN!


...wait one second. I gotta ask. Did *I* add that last tag? I might have. But now I don't remember?
*slowly raises hand* male-female binary? That was me. Newly created (as of... well, since Thursday anyways, I'd have to check exacts). I'm trying to get it on appropriate threads, figured this seemed like one of them.
 
[X] [Alex] Look into the supernatural.
[X] [James] Looks at the physical evidence for Rick's murder.

I really like Badger's plan we should use that as our base strategy, it has just the sort of contingency's in place to deal with someone with a death note.
 
Okay, discussion point:

What would actually be useful supernatural info? I don't really know the Death Note lore, but I don't imagine we'd just sort of stumble across the actual DN listed somewhere. Is there any other supernatural elements that would be useful to find out about?

[] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.

I'm going for this one because we might scope out other students who would have been following the politics. Also, if the killer was there in person, it might explain the delay? Them going off to write it down inconspicuously, but still getting enraged at the right time.

Hopefully at some time in the far future, we will gain permission from trusted higher ups to forge a legal third persona - One which will carry out all of our decisive actions against the killer.

This is a bit of an eventual thing, but it would almost be great if this was like, the official way to handle the case? It could be more than just us using the persona, to some extent, if some of the messaging we use isn't voice. We'll have to explain why the anonymity is useful, but that shouldn't be too hard once they're taking it seriously.

As our Alex identity is the last line of defence before our real identity (and we could potentially have some evidence to that effect waiting around somewhere), it must be as uninvolved as possible. To that end, I suggest we keep mostly out of the way, looking into unrelated cases and taking just enough interest in the DN case to satisfy expectations of our co-workers (It would be strange for them to see us not focus on a mysterious and supernatural killing, so let's put them at ease by doing so slightly)

I'm in agreement here. Alex keeps up their high clear rate on other cases, and sticks to offering advice to the DN case, publicly.
 
What would actually be useful supernatural info? I don't really know the Death Note lore, but I don't imagine we'd just sort of stumble across the actual DN listed somewhere. Is there any other supernatural elements that would be useful to find out about?

It's stated in the anime that death notes have been dropping down into human hands for a very long time, so we would be looking for past mentions of mystical shenanigans which relate to our case. I trust that Alex is smart enough to figure out which evidence has relevance, and possibly discover more info about the death-note itself from it.
 
What would actually be useful supernatural info? I don't really know the Death Note lore, but I don't imagine we'd just sort of stumble across the actual DN listed somewhere. Is there any other supernatural elements that would be useful to find out about?
Well, the setup and premise seem to imply that the world is basically like ours, apart from the supernatural killer. So if, for example, ESP is thoroughly debunked, that may imply that the killer needs real-time line-of-sight on the target, either when they die or to set up the control conditions that cause them to die.

Vote closes tomorrow. Also, yes of course you can do write-ins. Though I have veto.

Okay then. Poking at the idea of a write-in for Alex:

[Alex] Look at public knowledge about Councilman Ash. Think of ways that a killer who can act at a distance could use this to frame/disguise a death.

Hmm. Would we want to write a prediction down? That could be turned against us, with a claim that we are the killer. But how else would we provide proof? We could deliver the prediction directly to higher-ups, but they may well think us crazy. We could use such a prediction as pressure to take this case seriously, give it official resources. That might work in conjunction with leverage from Abramson (is Abraham a typo?).

Actually, on review of the official voting options, that is poorly phrased. Another approach.

[X] [Alex] We have a potential target in Councilman Ash. Accurately predicting their death could make this case more official. Look at public information on the man, is there anything which could be used to disguise a death?

More precise to what I'm doing, and more in style with the default options. Even more in style if I remove the last sentence. Risky, unambiguously works better in conjunction with pressure from Abramson.

Meta-analysis: If this works how I want/expect, Mr. Ash is probably going to die in the same update. This action requires our QM to come up with things that could be used to disguise Mr. Ash's death, ways Alex thinks they could be used to do so, and decide on the actual results.

Could split it up:
[Alex] Look into public information on Councilman Ash.
Gives us, the readers, some of that information, and puts the onus back on us to find ways to use it -- we'd make the prediction, presumably as part of the next vote while deciding what to do with it. I'm not sure how that would work narratively. That approach may be out of style for the quest -- but then again it may be perfectly in style and we just haven't tripped it yet.

Gah. Done with this for now.

[X] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.

Following NemoMarx' lead on the James vote for now, because otherwise I don't have much of a preference.
 
Well, the setup and premise seem to imply that the world is basically like ours, apart from the supernatural killer. So if, for example, ESP is thoroughly debunked, that may imply that the killer needs real-time line-of-sight on the target, either when they die or to set up the control conditions that cause them to die.



Okay then. Poking at the idea of a write-in for Alex:

[Alex] Look at public knowledge about Councilman Ash. Think of ways that a killer who can act at a distance could use this to frame/disguise a death.

Hmm. Would we want to write a prediction down? That could be turned against us, with a claim that we are the killer. But how else would we provide proof? We could deliver the prediction directly to higher-ups, but they may well think us crazy. We could use such a prediction as pressure to take this case seriously, give it official resources. That might work in conjunction with leverage from Abramson (is Abraham a typo?).

Actually, on review of the official voting options, that is poorly phrased. Another approach.

[X] [Alex] We have a potential target in Councilman Ash. Accurately predicting their death could make this case more official. Look at public information on the man, is there anything which could be used to disguise a death?

More precise to what I'm doing, and more in style with the default options. Even more in style if I remove the last sentence. Risky, unambiguously works better in conjunction with pressure from Abramson.

Meta-analysis: If this works how I want/expect, Mr. Ash is probably going to die in the same update. This action requires our QM to come up with things that could be used to disguise Mr. Ash's death, ways Alex thinks they could be used to do so, and decide on the actual results.

Could split it up:
[Alex] Look into public information on Councilman Ash.
Gives us, the readers, some of that information, and puts the onus back on us to find ways to use it -- we'd make the prediction, presumably as part of the next vote while deciding what to do with it. I'm not sure how that would work narratively. That approach may be out of style for the quest -- but then again it may be perfectly in style and we just haven't tripped it yet.

Gah. Done with this for now.

[X] [James] Talks to the six members of Mid-Hill High School who were outside the mayor's town hall when he died.

Following NemoMarx' lead on the James vote for now, because otherwise I don't have much of a preference.

That is a good short term plan you have there, as it provides legitimate evidence not only that this case is serious, but that we are also the most qualified person to tackle it. Assuming that our prediction becomes accurate, our bosses (Or whoever we tell this to) will have no choice but to cater to our demands, so as to make sure we catch the now obviously dangerous killer.

However, there is also a large risk that our plans fall apart, as if ash fails to die within a few weeks time (Due to lack of info on the killers part or simply no desire to see ash parish), we will be in the opposite situation - Everybody will think that we've lost it, and therefore be less likely to help us out with the investigation.

Furthermore, basing the whole of our vote on this one action means that we will once again miss an opportunity to investigate Wendall or research the paranormal, both of which might provide valuable insights into this whole debacle - We may not get a period of down-time like this in which to do so again, so we must make this vote count.

I think this is worth considering, but i'm not sure when the time will be right, or even if it's wise to gamble like this in the first place.
 
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