RexHeller's Plot Bunny Thread

Ardentem Anima. I want it. I love PMMM and I love shounen, so PMMM Shounen is just about perfect.
Give it to me Rex. Gimme.
 
Actually as a german that is not correct.

If the first three words are supposed to mean "Magical Girl Madoka" then it should be: Magisches Mädchen Madoka. That is the correct declension.

Now the fourth word feels tacked on no matter what, but if it's supposed to be "Magic" then it should be: Magie.
If it's supposed to be "Wizard/Magician" it should be: Magierin. Because Magierin is female and Magier would be male.

So to conclude if you want to translate "Magical Girl Madoka Magic/Wizard" it should be: Magisches Mädchen Madoka Magie/Magierin.

On the other hand Magica seems to be a name that should not be translated so it could also be: Magisches Mädchen Madoka Magica.
This has the best natural sound to it, because the last word does not feel tacked on.
The declension for Magisches is my bad- that really should have been fixed. Looking at the Latin, though, it doesn't look like Magica is referring to Madoka, at least as far as gender of adjectives goes, so that needed to stay. Specifically, from context it seems to be the nueter plural, and in the nominative case, making it Magier.

Can someone with a better knowledge of Latin help?
 
I'm sorry guys but my concentration today is shot and no matter what I tried words did not want to stick to the page. And I really wanted to do something today before I made my announcement.

I'm going to be taking a break from the daily updates in this thread for awhile so I can focus on other things. My quests are falling behind and I have a story on FF.net that has been waiting over half a year for the last chapter. In addition, there's a script-writing contest that I'm planing to enter. So yeah, I don't know when I'll be back to daily updates but I hope it's soon.
 
Before I go, here are two more story ideas for you to think about.

Blood Soaked Moon: Sailor Moon/Tokyo Ghoul crossover. Usagi is a ghoul. Things get more violent than usual.

Untitled Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha AU: Alicia is actually conscious in the stasis tube and is capable of hearing everything going on around her, although she's still unable to move, talk or see. During the first season finale she's overjoyed to learn that she has a sister and is just as quickly horrified of what her mother does to said sister. The jewel seeds react to her strong desires and she revives but it's to late to save Precia.
 
Untitled Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha AU: Alicia is actually conscious in the stasis tube and is capable of hearing everything going on around her, although she's still unable to move, talk or see. During the first season finale she's overjoyed to learn that she has a sister and is just as quickly horrified of what her mother does to said sister. The jewel seeds react to her strong desires and she revives but it's to late to save Precia.

Interesting...
 
Untitled Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha AU: Alicia is actually conscious in the stasis tube and is capable of hearing everything going on around her, although she's still unable to move, talk or see. During the first season finale she's overjoyed to learn that she has a sister and is just as quickly horrified of what her mother does to said sister. The jewel seeds react to her strong desires and she revives but it's to late to save Precia.
Hmm, This one holds promise,.
I'm going to be taking a break from the daily updates in this thread for awhile so I can focus on other things. My quests are falling behind and I have a story on FF.net that has been waiting over half a year for the last chapter. In addition, there's a script-writing contest that I'm planing to enter. So yeah, I don't know when I'll be back to daily updates but I hope it's soon.
Well when you get back tell me. *unwatches for now*
 
Yep! Still taking a break from the daily stuff for the time being but I'm doing better.
BEST IDEA. No seriously I would read the shit out of this, the potential for schadenfreude makes me rejoice. What's Gendo doing?
Prepping NERV or whatever he was doing between abandoning Shinji and the attack of the third Servant. The premise is that Shinji gets involved with the jewel seeds that Nanoha did and the events of the first two seasons still happen. I have some ideas for the Jewel Seeds and Book of Darkness arcs but the one thing I haven't got an idea for is how to get Shinji into an Evangelion or even just on earth when he's fourteen. Unlike Nanoha who has some family there, Shinji pretty much has no reason to go back to the planet of his birth.
 
Haunted
So, writing in a journal. God, this is dumb. I feel like a stupid little girl, writing in her diary. But of course, I have to do this because the doctor lady says so. Dr. Bitch threw a bunch of words at me, most of them flew over my head but what I understood was that she was talking down at me, trying to handle me with the kiddy gloves because she thinks I'm nuts. I got the gist of what she was saying though. Supposedly writing everything down will help determine if I really am in a master/stranger situation like I say I am or if I'm just crazy. Which I'm not. I can see her sitting right there on the bed the PRT has "oh so graciously" provided me with. I can still feel the sting from where she punched me too. Stupid bitch.

Stupid diary. I remember writing in one of these back when I was ten. Taylor had one too. We would stay up under the covers during sleepovers, writing our secrets down by flashlight. We promised to never read each other's diary, which was stupid because we told each other everything anyway. God, I was so dumb back then. We both were but Taylor stayed dumb while I grew up.

I hate this. I hate this stupid diary and this stupid cell room and the stupid doctors and agents and heroes. I hate Taylor and her stupid powers that make everyone think I'm crazy and the stupid bed she's sitting on and fucking everything.

Stupid Taylor! She just asked if I'm okay. Of course I'm not fucking okay! I'm locked up in a cell in the PRT, everyone thinks I'm fucking nuts and I'm stuck with stupid naked Taylor as the only person I can talk to. Who the fuck would be okay with that?

Of course, I can't tell her any of that. She'd think I'm weak and I'm not. I can't be. Taylor is the weak one. I'm not crying. How dare she think I'm crying? I'm not

[The rest of the page is rendered illegible due to water damage to the paper. Ms. Barnes continues on the next page.]

I'm fine. I'm perfectly fine. That was just… whatever. It's fine now. I'm okay. Where was I? Right, journal. I'm supposed to write about my feelings or something. I supposed I should start from the beginning.

My name is Emma Barnes and I'm being haunted.

Crap. I think this might be the shortest thing I've ever written for this thread. Whatever, it's done. Stupid writer's block.
"Because this spirit stands by our sides, we call them... ⌈Stands⌋! .... Why are you snickering like that?"
 
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