Wings of Freedom: A Temeraire Quest

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A Temeraireverse Dragon Quest
Opening: Behind the Shell

inquisition

Not Affiliated With the Spanish Church
Location
Valkenheim

...And it can be assumed, without a doubt, that the Americans have made for themselves a handsome draconic fleet. Most of their creatures, it is known are hybrids of Old World and New World breeds, with a number of French and British breeds crossed with the leaner, more endurance-minded American breeds. This treatise will endeavour to show my travels among American aviators and dragons, and highlight the similarities and differences between their air corps and Her Majesty's own.
- A.W. Wallace, "On Dragons" (1855)

Dakota
...It was in New York, I believe, where I saw my first dragon native to the Americas. A fellow of middling size, green-brown with more verdant markings dribbling down his sides, and a queerly-shaped head with a ridge of thick bone between the eyes. He flew once over the ship roaring in greeting, which, despite my long experience around dragons, gave me something of a start. Captain Thorne laughed off my shock and introduced us; this was Kitchi, his own companion - a Dakota of some ten years. The creature shocked me by gently (or rather, as gently as a dragon of some twelve tons or more could) shunting me about with his bony forehead before deigning to speak to me. I was later told that this was a common method of "greeting" among Dakotas and other breeds of the like, who spent thousands of years before the advent of human riders settling contests of dominance by butting each other on the head...


Mapiya
...The Mapiya, I now know from experience, is hard to see on a clear day. With a light blue-gray coloration, this lightweight dragon is both quick and stealthy. While I am admittedly rather nearsighted, it was still very much a shock when one seemed to appear out of nothing but a clear sky at an alarmingly short distance on my third day at the Geneva covert. I am told that the dragon in question, Galatea, was actually riderless and captainless; indeed, to my astonishment I learned later that she was not in the Corps at all, but instead the mayor of Geneva itself, elected on the backs of the dragon and aviator vote! This is apparently not so unusual as one might think; the Mapiya is known as a uniquely intelligent dragon, bred as they were by the Lakota for autonomous hunting and companionship. While they remain the primary light combat dragon for the US Air Corps, many who lose their captains (or who refuse to go under harness at all) will take up more scholarly pursuits...


Blackguard
...It was only later that night when I was introduced to the pavilion's resident nocturnal. She was a lovely creature, some 60 feet from nose to tail-tip, and sleek like a jet-black snake. Her captain, Bolton, introduced her as Elizabeth - perhaps a mundane name for so resplendent a creature, but she carried it regally as if she were that Queen herself reborn. Blackguards like her are another cross born of the New and Old Worlds - a French Fleur-de-Nuit crossed with the Kangee, a similarly nocturnal breed from the Mississippi valley. While the Fleur is heavier in weight and has more brute strength, the Blackguard inherited the oddly buoyant air sacs of the Kangee and as such is uniquely adept at gliding. This, along with their black coloring, makes them perfect night fighters and scouts - less able to take damage or deal it, but sheer brute force can often be beaten by the vital element of surprise...


Farstrider
...Known to the Algonquin originally as the "Kesegowaase," the Farstrider breed is the US Corps' primary courier breed. They are roughly the same weight and length as our own Winchester, though their wingspan is half again as long, giving them a great deal more endurance in level flight at the cost of maneuverability and evasion. Their coloration is grey-green, with darker gray spots along the back reaching towards the tail. Their temperament is described, at least by their captains, as sweet-natured, though they are much more intelligent on the whole than English courier breeds. The shipping company Wampanoag & Sons, which owned the ship that brought me over, is apparently run by a family of Farstriders, for example.


Steel Reaper
...Here I was subject to one of our own old humiliations, near a century old. A slender gray dragon, so familiar to our own Yellow Reapers but notably distinct, alighted in the pavilion later that morning, his Captain - a native of the Seneca tribe, I have heard - seeing to his care. The Reaper, whose name I later learned was Matunaaga, spoke proudly (and somewhat rudely) to me about his infamous grandsire Pugnatis, the "Traitor Dragon" who, along with his colonial captain and several others stationed in the then-colonies, abandoned His Majesty's Aerial Corps during the American war and joined the rebels. Matunaaga himself, like the rest of his kin, was steely gray in color, slightly less muscular but more sinewy than any of his British counterparts. Still, this is made up for by a set of vicious tearing talons, longer and sharper than any Yellow Reaper could hope to possess...


Pettystone
...America's most prominent heavyweight breed, like many others created for their Air Corps, is a cross between native strains and European stock - in this case, the huge but lethargic native Stonejaw and the French Petit-Chevalier, first presented to the nascent American air corps during their war of independence. The Pettystone is of a size with the Grand-Chevalier, although is much lighter, built less for heavy fighting and more for the incredibly long range of the North American breeds. It has inherited the small horns and gray-brown coloration of its French sire, though the craggy bone growths on the underside of the jaw that gave the Stonejaw its name are also present...


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The voices are indistinct, at first - just strange murmurs through the shell. It's an unreasonable amount of time before you can start to understand them.

You're a dragon, it seems - in an egg that's about to hatch. They've been waiting for you for such a long time, and now that your shell has hardened, it will soon be time for you to come out and meet your new "captain."

You slowly learn words as the people outside talk to you. You don't have a name yet - but you know that you're in a covert, for something called the US Air Corps, and you will have work there once you are let out - should you choose.

Eventually, this sets you to pondering as the murmur of voices subsides one night. Who are you?

What is your breed?

[ ] A Dakota (Middleweight)
[ ] A Mapiya (Lightweight)
[ ] A Blackguard (Stealth Middleweight)
[ ] A Farstrider (Courier)
[ ] A Steel Reaper (Large Middleweight)
[ ] Pettystone (Heavyweight)

What is your sex?

[ ] Male
[ ] Female
 
[] A Farstrider (Courier)

[] Male

It's not super traditional but I'm definitely interested to see what it's like to play a Courier.

Also seems like just a really neat setting, where'd you get the idea?


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[X] Pettystone (Heavyweight)

[X] Male


I definitely want to go fighting in this quest, aerial combat in the Temeraire setting is pretty cool, and absent a dragon with a breath weapon the Heavyweights tend to be the most valuable at that. Also, we're probably going to be involved in the civil war, which will be very interesting indeed.
 
[X] A Steel Reaper (Large Middleweight)
[X] Female
 
Dragons!
It's from the Temeraire novels by Naomi Novik - basically Aubrey-Maturin if Maturin was a 100-foot-long murder lizard from China. I thought it could really lend itself well to questing.
How familiar should you be with the books for this quest, since I haven't read any of them?

[X] Pettystone (Heavyweight)

[X] Male
 
How familiar should you be with the books for this quest, since I haven't read any of them?
No need to know more than "Talking dragons exist in the Napoleonic era, social justice and cool combat happen, and many cows are eaten." It'll be taking place far out of canon's context anyway. That said, if you do want to check it out, I do recommend it.
 
I remember the Temeraire novels fondly, and this quest seems like fun.
I'm inclined towards:
[X] A Mapiya (Lightweight)
[X] Male

On account of high stealth and Int
 
[X] A Farstrider (Courier)

There's more opportunity to explore the world here, as we won't be combat focused, and we'll be flying all over the place. Being tiny will also aid in dragon-human interactions.
 
[X] A Farstrider (Courier)

There's more opportunity to explore the world here, as we won't be combat focused, and we'll be flying all over the place. Being tiny will also aid in dragon-human interactions.

Aw come on, don't you want a large crew to pamper us and fly into battle in style all rigged up like a ship of the line? Draconic Aerial combat in Temeraire is amazingly fun.
 
Aw come on, don't you want a large crew to pamper us and fly into battle in style all rigged up like a ship of the line? Draconic Aerial combat in Temeraire is amazingly fun.
Personally, I think that as a courier we'll have more of a chance to get mixed up in intrigue and politics, which I think should be interesting in a time period that's going to be getting into the Civil War.
 
[X] A Blackguard (Stealth Middleweight)
[X] Female


A Temeraire quest! This is something I've been looking forward to seeing on here. Given that this is set in the Americas I suppose not much knowledge of canon is necessary, which should cover for the fact that I never really finished the series.
 
I definitely want to go fighting in this quest, aerial combat in the Temeraire setting is pretty cool, and absent a dragon with a breath weapon the Heavyweights tend to be the most valuable at that. Also, we're probably going to be involved in the civil war, which will be very interesting indeed.

IIRC Heavyweights are favored by European aerial corps in the early novels, but as the Chinese get more involved in the conflict, and French and (to a lesser extent) the British, start adopting their tactics, heavyweights end up increasingly sidelined as they're not maneuverable enough for the less regimented Chinese formations. We might be better off with a middleweight.
 
So, my thoughts on the options, from worst to best options as I see it:

The Middleweights - Dakota and Steel Reaper:

So these guys are the workhorses of the Temeraireverse aerial corps. On the plus side, they can fill a lot of varied roles, depending on need, but there's nothing special to recommend about them either. They're 10-20 tons of flying muscle, and not a lot else going on. Nothing wrong with that, but they won't make for an interesting quest.

The Stealth Middleweight - Blackguard:

Similar thoughts to the above, except this middleweight trades a vulnerability to bright light for enhanced night vision. Opens up opportunities for skullduggery, but really only barely more interesting than the middleweights.

The Courier - Farstrider:

So, this one does have a major upside in that courier dragons have massively larger flight ranges than all the other classes of dragons. They fly faster, with less effort and can stay aloft for the better part of a day straight without resting. Additionally, the 'Courier' name is accurate - if we play as one of these, we'll most likely be delivering messages all over the U.S, seeing lots of places, mingling with important people. Shebe Zuu's right that this is the one with the most potential to get us involved in intrigue and politics.

The biggest downside to these guys is that they're combat chumps - like, embarrassingly ineffective against anything but other couriers. If we take this guy, we'd be missing out on the chance to have any meaningful role in aerial combat (which is awesome, in this verse), and we'd probably have to do a lot of running away. Another concern, we'd almost certainly have a single-person human crew, so we'd miss the chance for camaraderie with an interesting group of aviators.

The Heavyweight - Pettystone

The first of the two real contenders, to my mind. Heavyweights get to experience the full glory of Temeraireverse dragon combat - a 30 person crew, squads of riflemen firing from our back, bellmen dropping bombs from our belly-rigging, smashing into other dragons in titanic collisions thousands of feet in the air. We'd have loads of people to form friendships with, plot strategies, manage crew, and we'd be the lynchpin of our formation. Our Captain would almost certainly be an experienced veteran with both skill and political clout.

The downside of this type, however, is the vice of our virtue: We're the anchor for our Corps' line of battle, and so that's probably going to be the vast majority of what we're doing. We're a slow-moving, critical chess piece, so we'd be sticking with the bulk of the army, tanking the hits and shredding enemy dragons. We'd be important, and close to the action, but we wouldn't have a great deal of independence or mobility.

The Lightweight - Mapiya

This one is my pick, so I'll start with the downsides. First, Lightweights are just that - lightweights. They can hold their own in combat, but they need to rely on hit-and-run, harrying tactics, and they're extremely vulnerable if a larger dragon manages to lock on with claws or teeth. Second, lightweights tend to be a bit more neurotic/excitable than the heavier breeds, although that'll depend a lot on inquistion's characterization of the breed/individual.

That said, there are a few huge upsides:
  • Daytime Stealth is a giant advantage, particularly in the Temeraireverse, where dragons have a natural, mostly uncontrollable instinctive response to being surprised from above. This would make us a fantastic scout.
    • Which is good, because lightweights are also the class most likely to be sent out on independent missions. Dealing with rogue militias, Tracking down bandits, scouting the enemy forces, negotiating with a neutral tribe? That's the sort of thing I see us doing as a Mapiya, while still getting to participate in mass-combat too.
  • We'd be highly intelligent for a dragon, and this is not to be sneezed at. Dragon relations with humans outside the military in Temeraireverse are....strained, to put it mildly, and being intelligent will allow us to navigate that effectively. I expect it'll open up more options for strategy and diplomacy.
  • This, though, this is the real kicker for me:

    many who lose their captains (or who refuse to go under harness at all) will take up more scholarly pursuits...

    Dragons in Temeraireverse mostly bond to their Captains like ducklings. The first person they connect with has their loyalty for life, and if they lose their Captain, they frequently fly into berserker rages or deep despair.

    This unusual independence inherent to the Mapiya gives us more options. If we're unhappy with our Captain, we'll be better able handle that and rectify the situation. Our breed has a precedent of working without a crew, so if we decide doing something alone is necessary, we'll be better able to pull that off. And in the unfortunate event that our Captain does die, we'll have a better shot at not losing our minds in grief.
So, with that in mind, I vote:

[X] A Mapiya (Lightweight)
and because Temeraire was male,
[X] Female
 
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I am told that the dragon in question, Galatea, was actually riderless and captainless; indeed, to my astonishment I learned later that she was not in the Corps at all, but instead the mayor of Geneva itself, elected on the backs of the dragon and aviator vote!

Gentlemen, our goal is clear: We will become President of the United States.

[X] A Mapiya (Lightweight)
[X] Female
 
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[X] A Mapiya (Lightweight)


[X] Female

I feel like the breed vote could benefit from a ranked voting structure. My 2nd pick would be [] A Steel Reaper (Large Middleweight).
 
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